SS: Unraveled. *COMPLETE* 22/4/14 - Page 8

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

MINE.

I love you bas. This was so amazing and totally worth the wait!

Also, Thank you for updating on Monday! Really!

I dunno if you did that on my request or you found this time suitable... But I am soo glad that I am the first to comment on this brilliant piece of writing Niyo!

This was so Rudra!

The thoughts. The idiotic realization at the end.

All of it.

Beautiful yaar!

I have a goofy smile on my face and I am in office right now.

Also, my favoritest part was how natural Rudra's reaction was of pushing her away as soon as he thought she had power over him. Typical Oont-Banna.

And also, how instant was his NEED to tell his wife about the new found realization. Again, TYPICAL OONT-BANNA.

Fantabulous😊.

Originally posted by: zanayaforever

Niyo 🤗 ..that was beautiful..
So paro went on a self- proclaimed holiday..i hope dey will show something like dis onscreen.a small break will do wonders for their relationship...
part 2 was even lovelier dan part 1 👍🏼

Originally posted by: gunji

OHH finally the update I was waiting for...
u r truly gifted to be able to describe so beautifully dear...totally in love with your work👏

u r going to continue with this story ...right??...waiting for the next update😊

Originally posted by: binimoti

This was fabulous, i loved every corner of it. It was beautiful.

You turned sunhera! Congo baisa!

so so so so gud dear

Was flying by and saw this, all i can say is OUTSTANDING 👏

Rudra...at the start nothing makes sense to him, cannot or does not want to understand anything...his thoughts and feelings are hazey and all over the place...he thinks staying away from home will make everything better...by
ut when left alone as he wanted to be all he can think about is his paro, his wife, his sole mate...he remembers everything about her...slowly all the pieces to the puzzle are coming together, his mind is no longer foggy...he can now see and feel clearly...all his questions are answered with a simple I LOVE HER

Paro...so loving and giving yet having to bear the brunt of rudras anger and rudeness which makes no sense to her...she loves him with all her being but is human after all and finally has had enough...she will give rudra his space and give herself time to gather herself spending time with her mamisa which i thought was a great touch

Rudra bana i hope ur not too late...word of caution...you have alot of making up to do

Niyoo im dying for the next chapter 😳 Altho i wont be around for a while

Catch u later *cheek wala kiss*

P.S hope u had a lovely time at the wedding 😳