SS: Unraveled. *COMPLETE* 22/4/14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: chotidesi

Is asking if we liked it even a question anymore? 😆 I don't think I have to tell you how much I loved it. Oof, the descriptions, the emotions, everything is so vividly described that I can practically feel my own heart clenching for the poor man who happens to be head over heels in love with his wife.

What really stood out to me in this was the way you described the mundane little things about life- the way she curls up next to him when he sleeps, her books (something I've always wanted to address, actually!), the careless toss of a chunari on a chair- it's the little things that turn a house into a home, and you've described that perfectly. It's not the big declarations- it's the small parts of life that are the best.

I'm amazed at your skill- it's so crisp and detailed. Amazing as always, Niyoti Di!

Originally posted by: rithureuben

Loved it so much! You just made my day

Originally posted by: gabrielle14

Brilliant 👏👏👏. Loved it a lot. I hope they can build some of this into the serial. Please update. Very eager to know how Rudra is going to express his love to Paro.

Originally posted by: OriginalBarbie

Was flying by and saw this, all i can say is OUTSTANDING 👏

Rudra...at the start nothing makes sense to him, cannot or does not want to understand anything...his thoughts and feelings are hazey and all over the place...he thinks staying away from home will make everything better...by
ut when left alone as he wanted to be all he can think about is his paro, his wife, his sole mate...he remembers everything about her...slowly all the pieces to the puzzle are coming together, his mind is no longer foggy...he can now see and feel clearly...all his questions are answered with a simple I LOVE HER

Paro...so loving and giving yet having to bear the brunt of rudras anger and rudeness which makes no sense to her...she loves him with all her being but is human after all and finally has had enough...she will give rudra his space and give herself time to gather herself spending time with her mamisa which i thought was a great touch

Rudra bana i hope ur not too late...word of caution...you have alot of making up to do

Niyoo im dying for the next chapter 😳 Altho i wont be around for a while

Catch u later *cheek wala kiss*

P.S hope u had a lovely time at the wedding 😳

Originally posted by: prettypri

Fantabulous😊.

I absolutely lived how Rudra noticed all that was gone and realised how much he missed Paro...so well written that I could imagine it!

And of course he pushed her away and now he is impatient to bring her back...as impatient as I am to read the next part 😉😆

For this 👏