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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Fantastic update

Envy is even worst than jealousy. It eats up one soul and totally destroyed his/her true self.

Thank goodness Parvati met Laila just in time and her honest advice and confession vanished her insecurities.

Truly Parvati and Rudra are especial and Rudra during their intimate time made her feel so.

Waiting for the next update

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shariqash

@shariqash

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Wow! U write so well! Really looking forward to the next one.

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

I love how quick you update! :)

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Very well written parts !!
Loved a lot

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Anushka

@bebo2050

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

i loved this .

out of all i love sloth n envy shows how insecure ppl can be , u portray the characters so well especially laila .

Edited by bebo2050 - 11 years ago

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Smriti

@serialjunkie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

chotidesi

just caught up on all the shorts. to say you write awesomely well would be an understatement.

Loved reading them all, can't wait for the remainder of sins to unfold!

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Envy is beautiful story 😛

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Oh wow that was amazing

So Paro envied Laila but she put everything in prospectus for her

Loved the update

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

yet another beautiful chapter...many of us, at some point or the other, are often bugged by the question as to whether we are good enough in someone else's eyes or not, be it in terms of educational qualifications, looks, status and many other factors...so paro experiencing the same level of insecurity can be comprehended..also at times we need some one to point out the virtues of what we are and have rather than pining for something that we don't, much as laila has done in this case...