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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

I haven't read the other OS in this thread, but just read this one. You have written it so well. Just fabulous. I'm really pressed for time today. I Hope to come back later and read the other stories and leave a comment.

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

I'm glad i stumbled across this. U're a extremely talented writer!

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ReeDa14

@ReeDa14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

👏👍🏼 This is wonderful - and sad!!

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Radhika

@YellowBoots

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Wow. Wonderfully written. This is such a lovely series.

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

what a beautiful take on the parvati-laila dynamics...i feel the makers by far haven't done enough to tap the potential of laila's character...she could be so much more the cliched vamp she has been painted out to be...

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Really touched my heart. Laila's pain was so palpable. Paro hugging her was so damn emotional and shows her pure heart.

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DDC1

@DDC1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Girl ,you write so well! You make us hate and then pity one and pity and then be proud of the other.

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Choti that was superb..
You r able to analyse characters at diffrnt ends of d spectrum...mohini,aman,laila..
Actually i hav never felt hate for laila..pity rather..
vegam update cheyyunundallo 😳 ..luv dat...
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niyoti

@niyoti

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

I am struck dumb. Absolutely speechless. I do not think i have words to describe how breathtaking "Sloth" is.

Laila's pain, heartbreak, desolation, desperation and loneliness are so palpable. Her words were intended to hurt Paro but like a double edged sword they hurt her too. She's strong and proud one moment and completely broken in another. She's falling apart, understandably so and I'm rooting for her to pull herself together.

This take on Laila was exquisite, enchanting, mesmerizing. I'm running out of words.

Beautiful, Delectable piece of writing!