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shruathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Superbly u write:) awesome loved it...plz continue:)

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1sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Lovely writeup, loved reading it. Rudra can't getaway that easily. Do continue.

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

A great big thank you to everyone who took the time to post a comment or two. Really appreciate it Baisas.

I just posted the teaser to Part 2 here:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/3987351/updated-ts-forgive-part-2

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: shagun-rocks
just finished reading the entire OS...it was fabulous..but rudra can get away by saying just sorry...would love to read more on this...do continue this if possible...

Thank you Shagun for coming back to read & comment

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: SS88
This was fantastic. We want more!
I hope that Paro doesn't become one of those silently sufferring stoic wives of TVland. I hope that someday they have a great row and she leaves. Then we'll see kaun kisska kabhi nahin hoga Major.

Oh no she is not & he is going to get it. Just you wait!

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shree10
Thanks for the pm and sorry for the delay.
From the teaser I would not have imagined that the story would be this.
Awesome OS. Really enjoyed it. I just wish you continue parallel to the show.. how major himself breaks his vows one by one!

Was it a let down from what you expected or better?

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shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Did You add part 1 in the title later??

I am so happy that means at least part 2 is coming. I wouldn't mind more parts though!

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Dont know how i missed this previously!!!

Im normally on the prowl on the forum, in search of new stories...so suprised that i dint come across this one before...

It was nicely written and i loved seeing a paro who actually reacts to insults...also loved the way you wrote about rudra's guilt and apology.

Looking forward to part 2

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: What_the
Dont know how i missed this previously!!!

Im normally on the prowl on the forum, in search of new stories...so suprised that i dint come across this one before...

It was nicely written and i loved seeing a paro who actually reacts to insults...also loved the way you wrote about rudra's guilt and apology.

Looking forward to part 2

Thank you. Btw I love your screen name. Part 2 is up

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