UPDATED New OS : FORGIVE Part 1

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

The last scene was so endearing :)
Lived the OS ..
Eager to see Paro lashing back on Rudra's below the belt remarks. ! Pls continue soon

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Loved it. This will probably happen at some point on the show.

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Absolutely brilliant...it's like reading a mystery. You have an Amazing way with words 👏

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautiful. As usual he talked first and thought later.

Loved how he tries to make up for it.

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shirinfarhaad

@shirinfarhaad

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Very well written!!! Thank you for writing such an awesome OS!!!

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niyoti

@niyoti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I love it! Especially loved the introductory paras to the OS. Your words have a way of invoking images so effortlessly. My favourite would be description of the different kinds of darkness. You're doing a really good job! Is there another part? Is Paro going to lash out at him?