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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

its lovely!! enjoyed reading it! :)

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

awesome start. waiting for update

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Ouch.can rudra be so mean?? I hope d cvs dont see dis lest they get any ideas.
Ab phataphat update kijiye na baisa 😳

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DDC1

@DDC1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thank you so much for the wonderful fbs.

I have no idea on what to write in Part 2 since I am ambivalent about Paro as of now.

Buddy me if you want a PM when I write the update.

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This was fantastic. We want more!

I hope that Paro doesn't become one of those silently sufferring stoic wives of TVland. I hope that someday they have a great row and she leaves. Then we'll see kaun kisska kabhi nahin hoga Major.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awesome one shot.

Do continue it in next part.

Pm me when you update

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome Os !

Loved it

Do continue

And Pm me please 😊

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Thank u...a beautiful update.😃

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Thanks for the pm and sorry for the delay.
From the teaser I would not have imagined that the story would be this.
Awesome OS. Really enjoyed it. I just wish you continue parallel to the show.. how major himself breaks his vows one by one!

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

just finished reading the entire OS...it was fabulous..but rudra can get away by saying just sorry...would love to read more on this...do continue this if possible...

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