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Radhika

@YellowBoots

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

This part was lovely too. Look forward to reading more. Reading all these stories is convincing me that a separation might be interesting, even though it will be heartbreaking.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

It's a fantastic series.

Wonderful update

Warmth, Rudra's world revolves around it when Parvati was with him. The warmth of woman, just like his mother, the soothing sensation, the feeling that someone loves him, cares for him, utterly takes interest in his life, Parvati did it all and that too so quitely that they both even realize it and it's importance.

I feel so sorry for Parvati when Rudra scolded her for not applying mehndi anymore on her palms. He just can't accept anyone linking to his mother who left him a very long time, he miss her so much that it hurt him.

Poor Parvati and Rudra.

The end was so sad, she left him, just like his mother.

Update next one shot soon.

Thanks for informing me

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

You create magic with your words.

Beautiful.

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Anushka

@bebo2050

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Wow 👏 really nice , u portrayed his feeling so well.

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Rudra is such a unique character for me. Everyone sort of writes on him in different ways but the one thing that everyone always gets is that this man feels. He feel everything so strongly. His heart is so fierce. He feels so acutely. He is so intense in his emotions. You wrote this piece amazingly well, showing that deep feeling that he has in his heart. Great series. I like the "darkness." ⭐️