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Suni

@Suni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Lovely! Poor Rudra! You have to pity the lovesick fool who cannot admit that he is obsessed with his sweet gorgeous wife. 😆 Wonder what his next excuse would be if they found a girl with all the beauty spots in the right places😃

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awww fussy eleven beauty spot liking Rudra!!

His missing his wife that he never accepted yet can't accept anyone else

A PM would be awesome but i probably will see it on the forum <3

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ReeDa14

@ReeDa14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Oh God! how well some poeple write here on IF.👍🏼.

I'm loved these chapters you posted!
👏

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Loved this! Ow rudra what are u doing to urself

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Lovely story and spot on. 😉😊

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Revolver_Rani

@Revolver_Rani

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Darkness and Beauty Spots, both were amazing.

Your Drabbles have a completeness in itself.

Laila can paly a big role in Rudra and Paro's story if the CVs use her well.

Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Very poignant. Loved reading them.

Few words, but ones that convey such depth of meaning - it is a testament to your writing skills!

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Really enjoying these short stories. very original. Rudra has a huge fight going on in his mind and heart, exactly like on the show. Cannot wait for the next segment.

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Anushka

@bebo2050

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

nice update !! u manage to to make both the dark n one sweet so contrasting .

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Exprimere

@Exprimere

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Okay. Let me tell you this VERY strange thing. On Friday, during that Dori scene, I was shamelessly staring at her back as much as Rudra was trying not to. And I was wondering about her "spots" too!

I loved this update. because first, I thought it's Paro. Then thought it's Laila he went looking and asking for. As I was getting my shield and swords ready to hack out this Rudra, who went to see another woman AFTER the wedding- I was disarmed at what he couldn't do.

A time capsule of emotions.

My usual complaints. It was too short. And why did you have to leave it there? But if you did stretch it, the aesthetic impact would be lost. I dunno what I really want. Confused. The show is doing that to me I guess.

And yes please, I'd most certainly like a PM. Waiting for more :)

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