OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Forgiveness (completed)

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Exprimere

@Exprimere

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Finally! Your new update!

On the surface, the OS glorified Paro. But Laila's crippling, fiery, powerful beauty stumped me. This was the best fleshing out of characters I can ever expect- all three of them, actually. And Rudra, in those last few lines, walked ahead a few paces for me in terms of character growth.

Yes, I was still waiting for "Jallad", and instead, this OS was here to surprise me.

Looking forward to your updates.

Edited by Exprimere - 11 years ago

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sony1990

@sony1990

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

main kya bolun yaar u make me speechless with every story. it was stupendo fantabulosly fantastic heart touching i am in love with your work

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shilpa

@mrsp

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Totally speechless.Amazingly emotional and empathetic to all the characters.Wish I could write like this.If only it was a different world where you can put yourself in someonelses position.Destiny is the ruler we can only live by reacting to its command.

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awwwwwww

@awwwwwww

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

very captivating,brilliant 👏

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I am crying! i will come back to comment again...

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ashwini86

@ashwini86

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

monster , u made me cry ... :'( n smile at one time... :)

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piccola1

@piccola1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

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You made me cry too! This was an awesome one ! And Laila and Paro have been etched out beautifully. Loved Rudra keeping a firm eye on the proceedings and breaking down as well...

Truly heart warmingly beautifully written.

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

That was a truly amazing part.

Paro going to ask for forgiveness from Laila and even though both Paro and Laila thought that Rudra will never know he was the one behind the two way mirror watching the whole thing.

Brilliant part.

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...Pwincess...

@...Pwincess...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!! It's got to a point where I look forward to your update more than the actual episode. You truly keep to the real essence of the characters and I especially like the way that you write about Laila's character, as you make her so human, with real emotions. I really wish you were a writer for Rangrasiya as theyre just making Laila ot as a typical Vamp.

Thank you very much for giving us the pleasure to read such wonderful work.