OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content*

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Sunara

@princessunara

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Its jsut just sooo superrr cuteee!! awww!! u seriously have gotten the pulse of this story!! its just freaking adorable even if it was a bit out of order in the chapters!!

And awww i love that u write their conversations in Hindi! It makes it so much more real.. awww i can almost see them speaking those words when i read those lines! n it makes me enjoy it even more!!
Just amazing!!

can't wait for the next part!!

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Midnight

@Midnightsorrow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Very nice I love it.

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

The chapters get more and more alluring each time...it makes you go soft on that jallad and his paro

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Thanks for this update. Rudra is growing to be over possessive and poor Paro doesn't know how to handle him. I'm glad he made her feel better at least and eager for the mela trip together.

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

2 tomorrows passed... 😭

edit:

3 tomorrows passed... This is ramanchi, baisa...

Edited by aruni50218 - 11 years ago

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DDC1

@DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Napster,

Cant wait no more... Ramanchi indeed.

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

The story is getting better and better. You surpass yourself every time.
👍🏼 👏

Waiting for TOMORROW

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

waiting...waiting...waiting...

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kirti98

@kirti98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

What happened napsie. No updates for so long. Tarasufying ys for trps. Bad girl. 😡

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Navin

@napstermonster

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Hayeee Readers!

Kya batau aap saab ko !! You've gotten your Rudra-Dev back onscreen only because of your Napstermonster, ok? Mannat Maaga tha, God se. Dramatic style. After the second rukhi sukhi episode with the double Samrat/Maithili filler scenes, I said, irritated--God, seriously, I wil take on Ashish's fever, I cant stand this boring crap every night for five nights---bring him back!

And now, IM THE ONE down with fever. And HE's back onscreen. But chalta hai--KhoonBhari Mang chemistry wale scene se entry maara--yeh bimaar bhi maaf hai.

I'm trying to stay rested, hydrated, and imagining new, interesting story lines for you all (and I have SUCH plans!!) --but I cant update worth a damn--plez to give me a few days mooree of rasting taiming my lauvs--I'll be back with the update by this weekend, Promise!

Edited by napstermonster - 11 years ago