Hazaron Khwaishen Aisi # 2 :Finale & Note - 50 :)

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virika01

@virika01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wowww m in love wid this story...
Shaan was j whn khanak took sid name lolzzz..
Loved it update soon

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poo_j

@poo_j

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Loved it!!!😃 ShaNak are sooo cute..😳 Khanak is so happy that Shaan came for her..She like to be cared by him..

Nice touch on how Khanak blurted the truth that Shaan is with her to Madhavi..She is now relieved that both are taking care of eachother..😊

Shaan is just perfect when it comes to his defence..Loved how he replied to Khanak nonchalantly that his mom knew everything about them..

ShaNak know how to infuriate eachother very well!!!😉 Awww!!! The kiss!!!☺️

Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update di..😃

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kp_yasharan

@kp_yasharan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

wow wow di update was aswome di ..

omg omg kiss was so hot love it di

wating for next part

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monika_aa

@monika_aa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Lovely update 😃

as per khanak ' complicated relationship'
as per shan 'simple relationship'
as per reader 'supercute realationship' 😆

both hv so many common habbits !!! Wch can go to extream n he loves tht...awww... 😳

shz nt scared of him... 😆 sleeping on couch...feeling securd around him... 😃
more thn comfrtable ever... 😳

beautiful morning of shanak...

Khanak-madhvi convo... Finally khanak revald it !!! Though madhvi knew most of it bt living togethr quite a news...n shz happy 😃

shan looking cute...awww...n distracting 😆

hz casual... Shz talking frm outside ...hz replyng frm inside 😆

n hz succeed to make her jealous n shz nt less... Though it ws more thn enough... Instead of jealous he got angry... Awww...loved tht POSSASIVENESS !!!

N d pationate kiss...hayeee...

Update soon...

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madhutanu

@madhutanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Blushing blushing blushing. this is what my situation. And why it is not normal to blush by yourself? because people around me are looking at me so wierdly!!!. now whom to blame? you for putting me in such condition!!! or myself... Loved every thing in it. So 2days for thier new complicated relation N already 2Kisses!!! so sweet of madhavi aunty. Even i personally feel that shaan should not move to K mansion untill he proves himself front of sunil. So i second shaan's decision.n also its good that now madhavi knows shanak are staying together. jealousy part was good but i wish in future there wont be any siddhanth or aanya between them. they both can be linked though... Now will they order for their break fast??? for that KEEP READING HAZARON KHWAHISHEIN AISE ONLY ON ODHANI INDIAFORUMS. update soon but on your convenient...

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awesome ...Awesome ...Awesome!!! 👏 ⭐️ 👏 Super loved it 👏

Kya likha hain yaarrr 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ...Muaahhh ⭐️ its Super duper cute sach mein & the way you have writeen this plus the beauty of your Words these two are Super adorable they love each other wanted good for each other & keep fighting for each others profit. I loved Shaan very very much in this part & en d toh apne aadhon ki neend uda dene wala diya hain 😛 I loved he cute End.

This is Real cuteness yaar 😃 ...Loving these two & their stubborness with every passing moment 😊 FB punch pe shaan ka answer ...Wow it was Superb...Commited
& Confused 😛 how confidently he just talked it. inka one on one game chalta hi rahega lagta hain 😛 & i am loving it. Khanak once again told him she is upset at him & will fine if he takes the Money back but Shaan is Shaan & i respect him for behaving in such a way. 😊 loved their little convo on table while Working & Studying 😊 i agree with Khanak its damn difficult to sleep at new place the moment when he asked her to rest & the Conversation between two WOw ...It was Superb 👏 👏 👏 Shaan is Super Cude "Are you sacrificing all 4 bedrooms for my use ???" 😆 😆 😆 Khanak's trust on Shaan & the way she conficdently Declaired that she feels more safe with him Beside her 😊...Waahhh Love her for saying this. This is the best compliment one can give to their guy 😃 I agree nothing can be more exciting than shifting in a banglow with your Love 😛 & yaha toh she has Shaan ...uske jaisa banda ho toh kya kehna 😉

The cutest part of the Update was Khanak Putting her quilt over Shaan & her cute Remark "Huhh !! Mr. Planner ??!!" 😛 😛 i loved the moment you described that Bliss was playing around her legs & she picked up & moved out 😊 Madhavi's & Khanak's Conversation is Panned out Beautifully 👏 as expected Madhavi gave a cool reaction & felt proud of her son 😃 But Khanaks expressions 😛 poor girl got so scared as she had told Madhavi that Shaan is living with her 😛 ...I loved the way she honestly clerified everything & Assured Madhvi that she will take care of shaan 😃 I loved Madhvi. Superb !!! 👏

The way you have described About khanak checking kitchen & amenities & specially gas cylinder .wow you never forget to give a real touch to your every write up 👏 waah i can imagine how ecstatic khanak would have been when she saw grosser's number on wall 😊...LOL lekin mujhe gussa aaya yeh padh ke ki wall pe scribble kiya tha 😛 i just cant tolerate koi pencil se wall pe kuch likhe

KHanak waking up & shaan & his early morning reactions ...wow kitna jyada cut tha woh .speically him complimenting her for frangrance & later fighting over quilt 😃 truly adorable. 😊 their start of morning with such awesome conversation Wow ...Khanak was apologizing for the blunder she did by telling madhavi but shaan had no idea & he was trying to understand meaning of her Sorries 😊 LOL i just loved his lines "No Khanak, spreading the perfumed quilt over someone is not a blunder. That is cute !!" He spoke as he hugged the quilt subtly." 😆 😆 he is awesome ⭐️ khanak making fun of him calling home & asking harilal to bring blanket 😆 😆 i loved her lines when she teased him saying even harilal will be impressed abt rich kids leaving their house with taking everything from home 😆 😆 😆

KHanak told him that she had told Madhvi abt their leaving together & now even she knows about their relation. 😊 i loved Shaan's reaction & Khanak was stunned the way he just passed by her neglecting the detail as h knew his mom knows everything but Khanak was freaking out 😆 the best part was in this situation also he didn't forget to correct her saying "Our Banglow" ⭐️ Finally khanak got the reason for his relaxed behaviour that whole portion & their convo fabulously written 👏 👏 👏 Shaan & khanak's discussing abt Madhavi knowing about them & Finally Shaan got to know that Khanak played with Bliss yesterday & Madhvi knew that Special someone for whom shaan is taking care of Bliss is Khanak 😃 LOved the way Shaan confidently said her that Madhvi will not think anything wrong abt her as she loves her 😃 & Khanak cutely camplained that Shaan dont love her 😛 their conversation & Shaan's reaction ...Wow hats off to this man he is so patient 👏 👏 👏 that was really cute when she asked shaan to order things from Grosser & he agreed after asking her get ready 😊

love game continues 😉 😉 Shaan again asked her abt she loves him or not & khanak's answer ...baba rey yeh dono na sach mein mahan hain ek sher toh duja sava sher 😆 Shaan took name of anya to tease her & Khanak couldnt digest it even she knew he dont even fel a thing for her but him teasing her by anya's name made her angry & she teased him back taking siddharth's name 😆 😆 dono nahi sudhar sakte ...Loved possessive shaan here ⭐️ the way he cleared that he cant see her with Sidhaarth or anyone & Finally his way of showing how he'll stop her

Super awesome Part Di ...you Rock ⭐️

Waiting for next ...Continue soon

Love

Pranjal.

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Awesome Update DI... 😊

too gud... loved it...

Shanak nok jhok uff...!!! i just love to see them fighting... 😳😳

And shaan ka relationship status now goes from complicated to simple... lovely explanation... 😛😛

And its true sleeping in new house and new bed is very difficult... 🤢

and reasons khanak put up were so correct... and therz similarities between them...

Shaan loves extremes... WOW!!! 👏👏

i love how they are so straightforward with their thoughts.. and speak up with ease...

So khanak gave away all 4 bedrooms for shaan... and went up to couch... and i loved how confident khanak was when she talked abt trusting shaan... superbly written DI... ⭐️⭐️

And finally they sleept... khanak got a call from Madhvi... and khanak blurt out abt shaan being with her... for a moment i was shocked... was thinking ki ab kya hoga??? bbut jab age padha toh i was like accha hai madhvi is chilled out abt it... And now khanak has to take care of shaan...

Loved how khanak went up to shaan to say sorry... 😃

loved this morning interaction... it was superb...

how shocked khanak must be after knowing that madhavi knows the truth...

And i loved the end... checklist part was amazing... superb Di...

And this siddhant and anaya part was so beautiful... jealousy always does magic...

and then the kiss was beautifully penned... 👏👏

Waiting for next part... 😊😊

love

Deepali

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

LOL!!!!!!!!!!! shan hugging the quilt and saying "spreading the perfumed quilt over someone is not a blunder. That is cute !!" was soo funny shan was looking cute to me by doing that

loved the whole update

so madhvi know now that shan is with khanak wow i loved that khanak said it without thinking

hmmm shan will not take the money back that is for sure then how is he going to solve the problem lets wait and watch

eekkksss the last teasing and kissing was amazing i loved it

plzzz update soon 😃