Hazaron Khwaishen Aisi # 2 :Finale & Note - 50 :)

awww poor khanak tryna tel him that they cant live with eachother

Awesome part di i love it to the core n congrats for second thread i wish many many more thread to come :)
shanak nokh johkh is superly penned i loved reading the whole update
both are no less of another heheh perfect shanak
i loved shaan naughty teasing he is mind blowing knows hw to handle khanak heheh!!! He open his lappy comfortable and relaxed n poor khanak fuming in anger i love hw shaan said do u want to say something like i hate u rofl!!!!! n the way he said shoot dis part made me grin too good n awesomely penned
i love the way shaan spoke casually n make d situation light
he asked abt bedrooms n khanak replies 4 heheh wow!!!!! khanak wants shaan to take room beside hers not bad lolzzz!!!! omgeee!!!! shaan tease her he can shift to her room heheh!!!
wow!!! shaan came with preparations harilal brought his things, dinner n Bliss too
love how khanak was overjoyed seeing bliss
nice talk between shaan n madhvi he didn lie abt staying with a friend bt didn either say his friend is he or she very smart talk shaan i love it
love last part of FB n the status khanak suggest lolzz
awaiting for next part di

😆 super duper cute

I love them and I love your way of writing. Its so natural. The way they talk any two normal people will do like that. I guess thats why we feel so connected with your ff and characters. Oh KT and Yashu wha u guys are doing, leave Sanskaar and Ek Hazaroon... And u should do Hazaron Khwaishen Aisi.

his reason for not taking the money... their fights.. her questions.. too good..