Hazaron Khwaishen Aisi # 2 :Finale & Note - 50 :) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
1st off all so sorry for not comenting earlier😔 was so busy so couldn't come online!!!
38-41 each n every parts r awesome👏👏⭐️⭐️❤️
Super super super like n love 4 HKA❤️⭐️
I was upset to know shaan was in trouble n still in n khanak was hurt to know every hidden things that shaan hide 4m her bt genuenly he was right to help her coz he loves her immensly😳
Aww that was very sad sunil didn't trusted on shantanu's will poperly😒
Shaan was ryt how it possible to take back the thing when u already step ahead with it 😕
Here sunil was so rude with him he've to understand da situation anyways somehow i was happy too coz khanak now know the truth😉
Aww shaan confess his love to her n they kissed😳☺️
Loved their fight😆 cute 😳
They r now living in same banglow not bad😆
The last line of the part of 41 "write-complicated" awesooommmeee 👍🏼
Loved all 4 part manita❤️
You write each n everythings very very beautifully⭐️🤗
Waiting for next update...
update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Waiting For The Update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hi diii...
i came back after a reaalllyyy long time...
so sorry for dat bt studies keep me really tied up...😭😭 😭

and the story...
my o my...u are THE BEST...trust me...nothing competes with ur writing...its so full of emotions,love,anger,reality...everything...i realllyyy reaalllyyy love u for sharing ur awesome giftof writing with us...
i read the last 18 parts or so at a stretch today and they filled me with every living emotion...u're really a boon to readers...😊
plz continue with your awesome...awestrucking...fantastic work...
love you loadsss,,,,
n plz forgive me for not commenting regularly...(kaan pakad ke sorryy...😭)...


loads of love...
Disha..😊


P.S...i read u've locked ur blogs again...plz don't punish me by keep me out of the privelage of reading your work...mujhe bhooliyega ni when u re-open it to readers...do send me the invite...

😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awww protective and jelous shaan, i like alot LOOOL
oh the kisss OMG im blushing, hes right he has ownershio over khanak and she knows that too LOOL
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Wonderful update :)

Loving shaan...he's so caring yet at the same time possessive about khanak.
Hope it goes well with Shaan and his business!!

Will be looking forward to the next update

Take care :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome update manita
i juz loved it loved it loved it

the relationship they have is so simple yet so complicated but a bliss to read
shanak conv were penned brilliantly whether its about the relationship status or abt how much tired they are or where one should sleep

the way they at times directly and indirectly mention their insecurities support care love longing it just awesome... the talk though the quilt was super cute
haye imagining her pretending ti sleep and then smile with satisfaction and the most adorable look shaan has when he sleeps was blissful even to visualize... reminds me of RBO

khanak and madz conv was very nice in fact superb
how she indirectly aksed abt shaan and how she blurted ... but i loved it when she cleared everything to madz and she was pretty satisfied and was able to understand
she must be proud of him... that was such a gentleman's thing to do ... to come and be sure that khanak is safe

the discussion over the quilt and how rich kids leave their home was super fun to read
hmm this is far much better for khanak to talk to him when his intense gaze is not at her

my my ek sec main change ho jatay hain i was a bit afraid that k argument hogi
but i found it cute that he immediately asked that she loves him or not
and the conv after that was super duper cute... i read it twice

jealousy and shanak to sath sath chaltay hain

and the kiss... sigh... OMG OMG OMG... he finally proved it... he loves her she belongs to him and he can stop her

update soon
waiting eagerly
i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

ShaNak's verbal duel and verbal banter are equally good ...Mixing that with their romance is even better ...

Khanak's aprenhension for Shaan is understandable...Shantanu will do anything to ensure she is safe and secure...Both stubborn...
'Fighting with each other, for each other' 😊
I wonder what Madhavi will do now?...I think Khanak will be moving back to the Khandelwal house soon...It's seems like the perfect comprimise...
Waiting for the next part...
Wondeful update Manita.👏...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
subha ke paach baje this update is a blessing😆😳...do i need to say i love it like khanak😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
very nice.. playing the J card... good going...
Madhavi was perfect as a mother.. good convo she had with Khanak...
loved the quilt fight too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Lovely update manita...😃😳

Aww he kissed her in the end and i forgot what i read from the start😆😆😳
Super lovable update...
So shanak slept in the living room itself...😆😆
Lol they are making each other jealous by taking anya and siddhanth names...
Poor anya she backed off after realizing that shantanu doesnt love her...hope there wont be any problem in their friendship and it continues as it was!!

Lol khanak got a strong reply from shantanu because he already told her that he loves her and he has full authority on her on what she does and with whom she goes out🤣🤣
Lol and she asked what will he do if she goes out with siddhanth and she got the reply☺️☺️😳
If shantanu goes out with anya then khanak will also do the same or wat...😆
If she does, then shaan will daily plan to go out with anya...🤣🤣
Update the next part soon manita...😃

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