MY THIRD OS PG 8 PT 1,2,3,4,5,6, PG 9 PT 7,8. (20/10) - Page 6

Originally posted by: janavi07

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hi Kushbou😊
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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Second Os that one very Nice...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">about the update i Love it!</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">khanakmerraige...shaan and suraj collage fight,suraj revenge...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">all great...at the party scnene...jealous khanak...and same jealous shaan so nice...shanak hug after the fight with suraj sobeautiful...she confess her Love and the First kiss that one hottt!!!!!!!!!!!</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">after the teasing part so cool...the Roomscene so romantic and hot!!!☺️</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">great update...</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Love it all update... </font>

THANAK U SO MUCH JANAVI 😊

Originally posted by: niki_rbo

hey khusbhoo..wat a lovely update yaar..it was very nice...second part was very hot man...

u r writting nicely..u can try an ff.. we will love to read it...try it yaar...

THANK U SO MUCH DI 😊 I TRY FOR FF 2.

Oh no i missed the last part yesterday...

Hey Khushbu!!
sorry for being late...
Loved the ending of your first OS!! just perfect...

Second OS- just wow!!!
it reminded me of Kismat ki kagaz par😃 its also a FF about Shanak😉
SR was haawwttt😳😳
Loved it!!! continue writing...
Update your next OS as soon as possible😆

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Hey Khushbu!!
sorry for being late...
Loved the ending of your first OS!! just perfect...

Second OS- just wow!!!
it reminded me of Kismat ki kagaz par😃 its also a FF about Shanak😉
SR was haawwttt😳😳
Loved it!!! continue writing...
Update your next OS as soon as possible😆

THANK U SO MUCH chandu U LIKE MY OS. AND NEXT OS I DONE WHEN BUT I TRY TO GIVE U SOON.

MY THIRD OS AND
THIS OS WRITEN
BY HEER AND ME


U MADE ME COMPLETE

Part 1

She was pacing in herown room from onecorner to another corner
waiting for his hubby.

She wanted to share good news with him but
he went to U.S.A For music stage
performance and
business meeting too. (whenever he got free
from his music than he helped his dad and
brother in business)
khanak called him to asked when he was coming back, shaan's phone rang and he
picked the call with grined on his face

Shaan : hello baby
( grinning )

khanak: keso ho aap, aur aap kaabh araheho

Shaan : my baby... i am so sorry the music stage performance was
over but my meeting got extended so i have to stay here for more 2
days. Khanak about to say
something but shaan interrupt her

shaan : i am very sorry baby i have to go now so will call u later. Bye
baby love u ( than he cut the call )
Khanak just stared at
her phone and said "
shantanu neh mera phone kaat diya, mein
bhi Mrs shaantanu
Khandelwal hu, mein bhi
abh unse baat nahi karungi"
then she slammed her phone on the bed and
again started pacing in
the room and said
burthal (angrily ) She looked up and made a
baby face and talked to
God " dekha thakurji
dekna aapne shantanu
neh kya kiya, mera phone kaat diya uhnone
Muje baat karne ka mohka bhi nahi diya aur phone cut kardiya, Aane
do unko mein baat hi nahi karugi unse, Nahi
nahi mein baat karaugi
aur hohut datungi uhne." After some time she
rested her head on her palm on the bed and
took shantanu photo
and start to complain
Shantanu ekk hafta
hogya hai aapko U.S.A jaake ,abhi taak nahi
aye ho. Mein apko
bhohut miss karati hu Shantanu ... ( teary eyes and sad ) Then at the same time her phone cell beeped,
first she got irritated than she took mobile
and checked the
message she smiled widely It was shantanu's message,
She open it and read the message.
message.

Shaan : baby tum apne thakurji ko meri complain karna baand
karo, Voh tumari baak baak nahi sunenge
( smiling broadly )
Khanak was shocked and made an angry face
and reply " kya baak - baak mein baak baak
karti hu ?? "

Shaan : ok ok aabh tum
gussa maat ho aur plz meri taswir leke complain maat karo.
Tum na meri tasver ko
bhi nahi chodti ...
( smiling n laugh while replying )
khanak just smiled and
thought he is not
around but how he knows her every little
act and what she do, What she thinks ? She said to herself " I
am so luky to have him
in my life and thank u so
much God to give me the best hubby in my
life, he is my
life, he loves me so much he changed my
life completely by filling a lot of love
tear roll down her
cheeks talking to
herself Shantanu mein apsebohut pyaar karti hu
bohut pyaar.

Part 2

******* KHANAK
THOUGHT, FLASHBACK
********

KHANAK :
Its was my last
semester in my college life. But i was little sad
because i didn't get to enjoy, my friends were
scared of me they
never talked to me freely because i had 2 bodyguards who were always with me. They didn't allowed anyone to
come near me. That was strict warning from my parents. My
parents Rishi Agarwal and Gayatri Agarwal.
They are the owners of
the big business empire so they didn't have time
for me. Monthly, Once they come to meet me in my
room and talk about my college that's it. While going back to their
work they give me the card with lots of money
which i didn't need it. I just wanted their love and affection but due to their busy schedule they
didn't get time to talk to me.
I was the only one
daughter to them. I was lonely person as
my parents were very busy
and i was alone at home too
When i was a kid i used to cry for my parents. why not even a single
day they didn't come to me and talked after that i got used to. When
i was in my last year of semester of my architecture my parents come to me and told
that they have fixed my
marriage with some business man shaantanu khandelwa , i
told my parents that i don't want to get married soon . But my
parents convinced and i agreed. I even didn't wanted to see his
picture and i didn't saw his picture at all. I use to hate him for, why he
agreed but what do to my parents forced me , i didn't know the same
person will become my
life. One fine day of our engagement party when i put the ring in his
left hand finger that time i saw him of the
first time and i thought oh wow!!!!!! he is very
handsome , dashing and
very hot, he was killing me at his look, he has
perfect body i just
stared at him but when my mom call me i came
back to reality that and we both exchange the
ring in each other's finger and after sometime party got over and we didn't get
chance to talk to each other as we were surrounded by many guests and our relatives, we just smiled to each other
warmly, when he was leaving i just stare at him without blinking my eyes and i again thought
Why i didn't saw his picture before, why i didn't try to find how he
looked and i missed many chances to talk to
him to be near him, he looked at me he saw i was staring him before
he left, he smiled
broadly he winked at me and raised his eye brows and i was shocked and i immediately turned to other side and my
cheeks turn red.


Few days has passed, he called me and we
talk to each other every day, i become very
happy when his number flash on my screen
before i picked up i
smiled broadly. We
become best friends first and i thought he is
not that bad.
One day he went out of town for music stage
performance and he didn't call me for 15 days. I was very sad
and waited for his call eagerly wanted to talk
to him, those 15 days were like a hell for me. At that time i thought
he is also like my
parents, always work comes first then everything, I was so depressed i again become lonely no one was there to talk
with me. As usual i
went to college with my boring bodyguards
around me. When i
entered the college my
friend Gopi
came running to me. I asked " kya hua gopi ? " and then she told me.

Gopi : yaar khanak day after tomorrow we are
having campus
selections, we have to prepare CV and Submit
them today

khanak : oh ok
( disinterested )

Gopi : Arey khanak its a very no 1 company . We
have to attend for
interviews

Khanak : oh ok sure we will.
With that we both
went to class
After college i went back to home. Actually i
was very excited for the interview after talking to Gopi about
although my parents didn't want me to do a
job but i wanted to stand on my feet rather
than depending on my parents or husband.

Next day i submitted
my CV and i got
selected for the
interview . I was very very happy . I went home but no one was
there to share my
happiness. I went to my room and sat on the
bed. I was staring at the my phone, waiting for shantanu's call and tears rolled down my cheeks continuously,
just then...

Part 3

I went to home but no one is there to share
my happiness. I went to my room and sat on the
bed. I was just staring at the phone , waiting
for shantanu's call and tears rolled down my
cheeks continuously,
just then shantanu come there to my room
to surprise me. But when he saw me crying
he immediately come to me and cupped my
cheeks and asked me.

Shaan : khanak why you are crying ? What
happend ?

I just hugged him very tight and placed my
head on his chest
wetting his shirt. I was so happy seeing him
after a long time my tears become of joy. I couldn't control and
broke down completely. This tensed shantanu
to the core. He kept on asking me what happened. But i was silent. Suddenly i
remembered that i was angry with him for not
calling me. I broke the hug and my hand formed into first. I started beating him on
his chest lightly. Finally i asked him why he didn't
call me for so many days? And i said

" U r also like my
parents they have to take care of work then
me and left me alone, u all think of work first
then any thing in life.
Now you also." I beat him again n again on his
chest and told him " i hate u shantanu.. " your
work comes first then me, i
hate you . Then i again hug him tight and sob
on his chest he hold me very tight
After some time we broke the hug and he cupped my face and
said

Shaan : sorry baby i was so busy i thought of
calling u today but i wanted to surprise you.
Sorry baby i m so sorry and i love u my sweetheart

Khanak : what sorry you don't know how i felt so
lonely i wanted to share many things to u. My mom dad are not listening to me they are
also busy in their own world even now u too.. Aur aap ka surprise
gaya barme

shaan: acha surprise barme jai, lekin pehle yeh toh dekhlo
shaan bought a
beautiful diamond
bracelet for her khanak looked at it and said "
muje kuch nahi chahiye yeh bhi nahi muje shirf
apka pyaar chahiye aur
kuch nahi .

shaan: yeh bhi toh mera pyaar hai ( and tie a bracelet on her hand)
aur mein tumse bohut pyaar karta hu

khanak: esa hai toh muhje phone kyu nahi kiya, kya aapne muhje
miss nahi kiya ( looked into his eyes )

Shaan : nahi khanak aisa
kuch nahi hain . I was so busy in stage performance that i
didn't get the time to call you. But from now
onwards i won't leave you alone.
we hugged again very tightly After some time
i broke from the hug and looked at him and said "
shantanu i don't want any money , i just want you and your love. I am
so lonely shantanu i
want someone in my life to share my happiness and
sadness.

Shaan : i promise i will be there for you. From now
you are not alone.

Khanak : pakka ?
I asked cutely then he smiled at me and he
closed the distance between our lips. I was
first shocked with his sudden act but i too started responding to
him. He bit my lower lip and blood starting oozing out. He linked it
and soothing my pain. I parted my lips and he
entered my mouth. Our
tongue was playing to
each other, his hands went under my top but
we didn't break our kiss.
His one touch made me
insane and craving for more. But i came back
to my sense and
whisper his name "
shaan

part 4


******** NOW
SHANTANU'S THOUGHT
********


shaan was coming back in the car

when i come to meet khanak i couldn't tolerate seeing her
crying my heart broke down into million pieces.
Immediately went to her and asked her " what happened ?." and
she told me how she was feeling lonely without him I have decided not to leave heralone never in my life. I
don't want her to
suffer more, she asked me so cutely " pakka ?."
I saw her innocence and
believe on me. So i
wanted to answer her differently so i took the
bold step and kissed her and she too responded
that made me go on and didn't felt to stop myself but then she whisper my name "
shaan ." i broke the kiss, we both came to our
sense, she got frombed and moved near the
window i ruffle my hair and smiled
i moved near her and hugged her from behind
n said sorry sweetheart
i couldn't' control myself she blushed and i turn
her to face me, when she faced me i cupped
her face i kisses herforehead she closed her
eyes And i promised myself
that i will never hurt her in my life. We talked sometime on her bed, khanak was telling me her one week activity at
once she came near me,
and we couldn't control ourselves
We moved closer to each other and kissed forcefully, i make her lay
on bed i lost it
completely and i started kissing her furiously and
giving her love bites. After sometime, she
removed my shirt and start kissing me, we controlled our selves
after that and after few minutes we laid facing the ceiling breathing hardly down
on my bed. She placed her head on my chest
and we slept peacefully
in each other's arm

Part 5

Khanak's flashback
again

Next day morning when i woke up i saw my head resting on his bare
chest i was so shy to face him as i acted wildly last night. I blushed seen him
sleeping beside me .

Khanak: Oops i forget today I have an interview got from bed
and I went to
washroom to get ready for college.. I come out of washroom and he
opened his eyes and wished me.

Shaan : Good morining baby
i shyly at the word
'baby' i felt so special. He come and hugged me
and kissed my lips.
After a long time we broke the kiss that too i
was getting late for college. I saw bites on his chest and blushed he
notice me and smiled, He said.

shaan : khanak i will drop you to college today. Wese why you
are so tensed ? ?

Khanak : shantanu aaj campus selection hain
and i am tensed.
He cupped my face and said

shaan : khanak don't worry. I am sure you will be selected. Tum
toh meri khanak ho na shantanu ki khanak. I was overwhelmed and
hugged him Shaan went to washroom to
freshen up and i moved to the mirror i saw my
neck had many love bites and blushed at it n
touch it slightly then apply a foundation to
hide the marks, after few minutes he came back from washroom
looking fresh, he came direct from airport so he
has his clothes, we had our breakfast and head
to my collage
we were in the car
going to the collage suddenly shantanu
asked me.

Shaan : khanak in which company u are going to
give interview?

Khanak : it's some SK COMPANY...
( casually ) Shantanu suddenly stopped the car and shouted

shaan : what ??... ( surprised )

Khanak: gadi kyu
rokdi...der horahihe

Shaan: Khanak do you know who is the owner of that company ?

Khanak : Ha i know... i
didn't meet him but knows only his name Some SK is the owner of the company shantanu was just
staring at me, and say

shaan : what ?? Do you know whose company
is that khanak

khanak : No I don't
knwo whose, but i told u nah it's some SK ...do you know
them shantanu ?

Shaan : yes, i know them and you also
know them ? ( smiling )
khanak: why are u
smiling ? and how do i know them, i meeting them for thr first time ...( confused )

shaan: sweetheart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya tum sach meh inlogo koh
nahi jante...
( grinning )...i mean ASK koi bhi nahi

Khanak : mein sach meh
nahi janti kisi ASK, SSK AND SK . ( she
saw shantanu grinning widely and suddenly she
realised and
Widened her eyes in shock) . yeh toh bhai dad aur bhaiya hai or
SSk aap hai .

Shaan: yup sweetheart
it's our company

Khanak: omgeee!!!!!!
Mein apke company meh
interviews keh
liya larahihu ...Gopi
neh kaha tha lekin tab meh
Interested nahi thi aur mein upset bhi thi tab
isiliye dhyan nahi raha

shaan: its not my
company it's ur's too baby
I was very happy and i hugged him tight, Shantanu too hugged
me and he drove me to the collage.. After 15
min we reached the collage when i was about to open the door
shantanu pulled me and a kiss me on the my
cheek and give peak on
my lips, i lower my head shyly and blushed

Shaan : all the best for interview and i am sure
you will get selection in
this interview..
I hugged him and said thanks

Khanak: shantanu but please aap muhje isiliye
select maat karna kyu keh mein apki mangetar
hu, please it's a
request, mein apne aap
yeah interview pass karna chahtihu aur aap
kisise bhi abhi nahi
kahenge keh hum dono engaged hai

Shaan: kyu na
kahu...( looked at
her )

Khanak: please
shantanu...abhi
nahi ...( make a baby
face )

Shaan : ok baby, i am not going to tell anyone
about our relation and this interview is going to held by 2 staff members who will come
here to take
interviews .

Khanak: thikh hai abh aap jaeye... ( and trird to
came out of the car)

Shaan: mein yahi ruk tha hu, tumara yahi car
mein intezar karunga ok

Khanak: thikh hai...
( smiled widely ) thank
you shantanu
i openes the door, said bye to shantanu and
left

shaan : bye my baby...I
love u
I went inside the
collage; after few
minutes' two people came they introduce
themselves as suraj
and Natasha.
They took our
interviews and soon it
was over, i came out
and saw suraj greet
shaantanu, he was out
of the car waiting for me

Suraj: areh sir aap
yaha...good morining
sir

Shaan: good morning
suraj

Natasha: Good morning
shaan ... ( hugged
shantanu ) tum yaha... Just then i turned back
and saw natasha
hugging my shantanu.