OS: Help!!! Updtd #4 - Pg 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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While walking back from the wedding hall, after a long Sangeet, and after a long wait for at least one Taxi, and not getting even one, Shaan's eyebrows knitted in thought, while his hands were behind him.

Shaan: Yup, well, I actually did not even get the slightest idea about that Bondi beach! (with a lop-sided smile) But now that I think of it.. (chewing his cheek).. I think I should go there, just for the sake of sight seeing! (winking at Khanak)

Khushi: (widening her eyes) Haw.. Dirty, dirty! very dirty! (shaking her head in disbelief; giggling and winking back)

Khanak felt weird suddenly, as she walked beside Shaan. She tried to shake off the feeling, by thinking about something else, but could not do so. She felt as if someone was watching her. She thought it was Shaan and looked up top see if it was true. But no. It wasn't. Shaan was looking straight but not on the road, lost in his thoughts.
Suddenly, she felt a hard pull at her wrist and a hand clasp her mouth shut.
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Should I continue or not?

Annie😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

loool obviously continue babes


I don't find much readers here so I don't want this to go waste! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue... I will read it ... Do you send out PM for new update to people?
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Originally posted by: xx123xx

continue... I will read it ... Do you send out PM for new update to people?


Don't have many buddies from this forum in my list! 😕 I'll send you one request!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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babe just wait lots of ppl will want ti read this, theres is ff on this forum thay ppl read so it ok continue
and pm me plz xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ofcourse u should continue bahut alag sa start hai plzzz continue :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

babe just wait lots of ppl will want ti read this, theres is ff on this forum thay ppl read so it ok continue
and pm me plz xx


I can see a number of FFs here that's being continued here! :D
Definitely will PM you!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

ofcourse u should continue bahut alag sa start hai plzzz continue :)


Thanks! I hope not to disappoint you guys! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Annie😊
nice story line!!!
please continue, want to read more😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Annie do continue please it 😊
i want to read more its interesting 👍🏼
i like it
please PM me

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