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Posted: 12 years ago
oopss...it crossed my mind, my tale completed 100 pages😃
when i had started i had promised to myself, that will end up the story within 50 pages..i've stretched badly😆
Sorry, my earlier post is not allowing me to edit, so had to post it once again😊
Enjoy the weekend😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg wooow, I didnt wnt them to be seperated, by plz dont mke the seperation last long!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional update...
Loved it...feeling bad for aayush...cant see him in pain...khanak could have waited for sometime...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww i badly wanted to know what khanak has written in letter
ayush searches for his mom but she is gone feeling bad for little boy
exactly shan why u didnt talk to khanak earlier? and khanak why u hv to take such stupid step? these two r really budthals ayush is much more mature than them idiots 😡
awww the little flashback was so sweet a happy family i love it LOL good ayush good

HAPPY DIWALI TO U AND EVERYBODY
MANY MANY CONGRADULATIONS FOR CENTURY 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update chandu😭
phirse muje rulaya😭
flash back was very sweety khushboo n khanak teasing Aayush but poor boy cried bt love the way he ran n show his tongue naughty boy
Poor Aayush thought his mom kept alam bt she wasn't there
good Shaan thought he shouldn't avoid khanak n rush to K house
all were worried and khusboo called Raj to check for khanak
Aayush my naughty boy cried n hug shaan aww!!!!!! i feel bad for him
khanak met Dr Karla and got a job even her leaving place might solve
waiting for shaan reaction he still doesn't knkw whats going on
how they will they contanct her and know where is she even dr Lata doesn't have any idea she is in Derradoon
hope Aayush and shaan composed them self they wil be the most who are hurt
Happy dipawali to u too Chandu😊
njoy the festival 🥳
waiting for update even chota chalega agar no time for long one
update soon😊
Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

congrats fr 100 pages...😛

oh poor aayush hes searching fr his mom...n shan realised y he was ignoring khanak...

everybody knes khanak left..😭

nw wht will shaan dooo...cant wait..update soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago

very touching chandu...

waiting fr nxt...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Chandu😊
I m fine yaar lil busy in Diwali preparation shopping, hanging and other things...
About the Update
SO emotional ...shaan flash back scene the k family teasing the Aayush so Lovely yaar...Finally burthal understand that he doing wrong thing avoiding the khanak and finally rush to the house but so late...
I feell bad for the Aayush the little boy thought his mother kept alarm the..but his mother no there...he find all over but after reading the letter h broke...khanak got the job...
what happen next?????????
Reaction of shaan????? what k family do??????waiting for the next update


Happy Diwali

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!! Fabulous!!! 👏Loved everything..😊 beautifully penned as usual..👏

So Shaan fibbed abt Samar.. I had a doubt...😒 He felt so happy reminiscing the past on how he pursued her and later their marriage..😳 now he would realized what is missing around him..😡

Loved how incorporated Ayush FB..👏 parents never know when their kids grown up..😆Khushboo is so sweet doesn't ve any ego as Khanak is getting all attention in the family..😃Awww!!! Ayush is hurt hearing abt adoption..😭 he is a child na..😊 but nice touch how Shaan sensed something is wrong first and Khanak kept on teasing him..👏

Both husband and son turned against Khanak.. LOL..😆

Ayush and the entire ladies in the Khandelwal house sensed something wrong.. wonder how Khanak gonna live without Ayush alone..😭Poor guy..how he gonna take it???😔 though all loves him a lot but still he is close to her mom only..

But loved how you made Khushboo to accompany Ayaush and they read the letter..👏that was a very good touch..👏

Shaan didn't realize how his avoidance will hurt Khanak badly..😡 Poor Shaan!!! 😭 already he is depressed and now she too left..😭 now its his turn to blame himself for her sudden disappearance .. well , its not wrong though..😡

Khanak new beginning in Dehradun looks promising!!! 😃 She got the job and accommodation too..👏 hmmm..

Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..😊
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😊
Thanks a lot to shubhadarane, sweetcharvi, poo_j, virika01, kp_yasharan, heer_85, jaisyjazz, diyak, maneesha28889, ktym, snigdhanagar, janavi07, Roshni_M, for commenting and liking😊
This is a PRECAP, after the reconciliation part, no don't get confused, yes i'll be continuing the separation thread, this is just a Diwali surprise from my side to all of you😊
Hope you like it...

PRECAP

Shaan bites on her chubby flaps of skin on her face, she yells in pain…

Khanak: Shaan what are you doing???

Shaan: punishment for you, for being away from me for 2 whole months and yes for the last night's stunt…(busy on her face)

They are in their room, in their bed; Shaan is on top of her, his hands working on unbuttoning of her shirt…looks at her face, for a while disturbed, looks down at the job his hands are doing….

Khanak: (feels sorry for the stunt she did before 2 months, cups his face, he looks up at her…

Khanak: im really sorry Shaan…I didn't have any idea what I was doing…im sorry Shaan…i…(chokes)

Shaan: im sorry too…(hugs her, she rests her head on his chest)

He moves away gently, looks into her eyes, even she does, both are apologetic…

He kisses her on her forehead, she closes her eyes…his one hand is combing her hair and another is cupping her face…He moves down, places another kiss on her nose, her lips curve into a smile…

He moves down, she opens her eyes, he stares at her lips, a bad desire of capturing it in his rakes through his mind, he just wants too swoosh everything from that luscious lips, he just wants everything…

Khanak makes it more easier, she makes him lie down and now she's on top of him, her hair crowds, his one hand holds her waiste, another hand clears the hair around her face, she bends down and licks his lower lip, he just closes his eyes and revel himself in her touch, she just plays around, finally his anticipation ends when he finds her lips firmly on him…

He makes her lie down, he hovers her, he deepens the kiss…her hands are at his back, his hands on her hair…

After some time, as they lay down, she's settled in between his left arm and his body…they are staring at the ceiling…

Khanak: (back to herself, teases him) waise maine kal raat ko kya kiya???

Shaan: achcha kuch nahi kiya..?? (looks down at her, she looks up at him)

Khanak: haan….(confident) Aayush ko mere saath sona tha..toh usme mere kya galathi hain..(makes an innocent face)

Shaan: achcha…??

Khanak: haan…waise bhi maine Aayush ko bahut zyaada hurt kiya hain, so I need to tell him that I would never live him…dekhlena next time, Aayush ko bhi mere saath leke chali jaaongi…(giggles)

Shaan's expression turn to fierce, he hugs her tightly…

Shaan: promise karo ki tum kabhi aisa nahi sochogi…promise karo tum mera wait karogi…promise me that even in your dreams, you won't even think of leaving me alone once again…promise me…(not allowed to complete)

Khanak: I promise!! I promise to not to do something which hurts you…(speaks into his neck)

He's relieved, slowly releases her, but still both stay in the hug…

Shaan: waise…joh Aayush ne maanga, uske bare main kya socha…(looks straightly at her, his eyes glittering, he's grinning)

Khanak is shy, she bites her lower lip, lowers her head…as the implication settles in…

Shaan: isme sharmanewali baath kaunsi hain…(grins)

Khanak juat hides in his chest, he wraps his arm around her..

Her expression turns to a serious one, she moves out gently, looks into his eyes, he looks suspiciously at her…

Khanak: I fear..that…

Shaan: that Aayush will feel left alone??

She just nods, she loves it when he answers her question in the most sweetest way…

Shaan: Khanak , u just know that it won't be happening like that…Aayush is our first kid and will remain forever…

Her lips curve to a big smile, she just heard want she wanted to hear…she hugs him, he hugs her back…

Shaan: toh phir….(his voice turns to more huskier)

She snuggles more to his chest, to hide herself from him….

Shantanu and Khanak Khandelwal make love after 2 months….

Please comment😊

update jaldi aayega, abb issi se kaam chala lena...😊



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