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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for being super late in comments 😃

But loved the last part & Precap made me super happy 😃

About last update ...U made me cry once again 😭

yeh dono kyun aise behave kar rahe hain. Poor aayush uski kya galti hain 😭 he is suffering so much😭 getting up in teh morning & his mom is not there for him its so shocking for him 😭 thankfully Khushboo was with him & she handled him with the help of whole family. Shaan finally realised that he have to share with his wife butr back of his mind one thing kept running in his mind that why his khanak didnt called him i really was in tears when i read about Aayush 😭 Finally Shaan came home & he got to know Khanak left 😲 but you stopped it here

on the other side khanak is in new city. she got the job & Dr kalra is a great human being he helped her sur to him she got to know abt accommodation too 😃 i dont know what to say on this situation. I hope everything gets settled soon. But i dont know tum hume aur kitna rulaogi 😭 😭 waiting to see how shaan manofys wifey 😃

muaahhh for precap super happy to read that part 👏 beautifully written dear ...lovely it was 😃 Shanak are finally together but it took 2 whole mths 😲 😲 matlab kab tak rulaogi tum 😭 loved the precap ...Dewali treat in a true sense 😃 Shanak will paln a kid after they reunite 😃

waiting for next dear ...Continue soon 😃

love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😊
Thanks a lot to shubhadarane, sweetcharvi, poo_j, virika01, kp_yasharan, ktym, diyak, maneesha28889, jaisyjazz, IF_rida, aasma1, -pranjal-, janavi07, snigdhanagar, heer_85, Roshni_M, for liking and commenting on my precap and yes for the last part😊
if you are confused then let me make it clear, PRECAP, i wrote just for the Diwali dhamaka, but im still continuing the separation part...
You may find its chotu, but i could write only so much, please ablige😊

Part 70

Time…As people say, we should take time for everything..even, we should take time to love, so that we'll be loved back…

But for Shaan, time as stood still…He once again is in a state where, he doesn't know what to do, but once again he had not broke in front of the whole family he held his grounds…He doesn't have any idea, what made her to take a drastic step like this…but for now, he had to take care of Aayush…Shaan without a second thought, had hugged Aayush…Aayush was safe in his papa's hands…

Akshay and Sunil had come to know the news…Khandelwal's had lot of questions in their mind, as they know that, Shaan and Khanak were the love birds of their house, each of them not leaving other's side, they would tease each other, but at last they would end up as a team….

For now, they leave father and son alone…They are upset too, but for now, Shaan and Aayush needed the time to recover from this big change in their life…

Both of them were depended on woman, who's now left them alone…Shaan wanted to scream, he feels like he's lost everything in his life…had he hurt her so much??? Then what about the little guy?? He must be feeling worse…Shaan picked up Aayush in his arms, takes him to the bed, makes him sit, Aayush is sobbing…Shaan feels like someone has punched him hardly on his stomach, he's left with broken things around…His heart which was just filled with his love…Khanak…has broken into tiny tiny parts…

Shaan makes Aayush sit on his bed…Aayush has stopped sobbing..Shaan kneels in front of him…Shaan doesn't know what to say, as for now, words doesn't form in his brain…He fumbles with his words…

Shaan: i…Aayush…(he's teary eyed, Aayush looks up at him)

Before Shaan could say or ask anything, Aayush hands him the letter, which Khanak had written…

Aayush is like Khanak…Shaan thought…

Shaan took the paper, his hands tremble…

"Aayush…

Im sorry, aap apne mom ko maaf kar doge na..

Aap ke papa ko aapki zaroorat hain, lekin shayad mera nahi…(Shaan can see that, a big tear drop had soaked the paper)

Im leaving without you, only for the reason, that your papa needs you, be his strength, as you are for me..

I love you the most, aap mera wish poora karoge na..i know you'll never let me down, papa ka khayaal rakhna…

Im sorry………"

Shaan can't believe what he read, he reads the line 'aap ke papa ko aapki zaroorat hain, lekin…'

She thought that, I won't need her now?? How can she??? May be, my reaction, has caused her to think like this?? But why?? Didn't she know that I love her like nothing in the world?? Was I so rude to her??

His thoughts runs in his mind….Aayush continues to stare him…..

Shaan clears his vision, and rakes his hair, looks straight into Aayush's eyes…

Shaan: Aayush, apne breakfast kaya??

Aayush shakes his head in no…

Shaan: chalo aap fresh ho jao, aaj sirf hum dono, breakfast karenge…main bhi fresh ho jata hun…Shaan looks for Aayush's towel, finds it, hands it to Aayush….

Aayush continue to sit in the same position…

Shaan inhales deeply…

Shaan: Aayush trust me, Khanak, jaldi hi aayegi, she has taken a holiday from us, she's playing with us, hum bhi usse dikhadenge ki hum usse miss nahi kar rahe hain (his voice shakes, but talks without fumbling)

Aayush hugs his papa, he's not still a kid anymore, and yes he would fulfill his mom's wish, but he's anger with his mom…

Shaan hugs him back, tightly…

Aayush: papa aaj school jana hain…

Shaan recovers himself, moves out of the hug…

Shaan: school??

Aayush: aaj report cards de rahe hain, aur aaj next class ki admission bhi karni hain…(slowly and softly)

Shaan has never done this, but this time he'll do it, without failing anyone…

Shaan: haan, toh hum saath challenge na, tum bhi fresh ho kar breakfast kaalo, main bhi fresh ho jaata hun…teek hain??

Aayush nods, he goes to freshen up…

Shaan gets up slowly, walks out of Aayush's room, reaches their room, which is now only his…

He walks in, looks at the bed, her phone lies there lifelessly, some papers which he don't recognize are placed, he walks to the window, he looks out, and stands…his thoughts playing…

Sunil enters in, goes and stands next to his son, keeps his hand on Shaan's shoulders, Shaan continue's to stand in the same position…

Sunil: I've called the police, they are looking for her everywhere, don't worry we'll be able to find her as soon as possible…

Shaan remains silent…Sunil continues…

Sunil: I don't know what's wrong with you both?? But still you two should talk and sort it out..aisa hotha hain, kabhi kabhi, anjaane main, hum unhe dukh pauchadete hain…tum fikar mat karo, I'll handle…

Pats on Shaan's shoulder, turns around to leave…

Shaan: Dad!! (Sunil turns around, Shaan also turns around) No use dad!! She's long gone..aap complaint waapis le lejiye….

Sunil: But Shaan…what about you??

Shaan: I'll be fine dad!! Don't worry…..i should survive…(saying that Shaan walks towards his cupboard, opens it finds only his clothes, there's nothing in her part of cupboard, tears cloud up……he holds it back)

Sunil: how can I not worry about you?? You are my son…

Shaan picks his clothes, turns towards his caring father…

Shaan: for now, I have to think about my son……..(he walks to the bathroom, coolly)

Sunil is sad to see his son like this, on the other hand, they haven't still got any information about her where abouts…..

Khanak, did see a notice, she was sure that she didn't need many people around her, found that a girl needed a room mate, she stayed in a 2 bed room house, just two roads down the hospital, Khanak noted her number, first she had to get a mobile….

She ran down the hospital, enquired about the mobile store, found one, brought a phone, first thing she did was to call that girl…

Her ground is settled, she had to meet that girl at the caf by noon…

Aayush was having breakfast when Shaan had come down; even Khandelwal's were present, it was silent, its not how is day is to start…he had to find her, but where??? It hurted him the most, that she had left only because she thought that he, doesn't need her anymore…a shooting pain caused at his chest area, he wanted to cry louder, but he's surprised to see Aayush like this…

Aayush is quite, but he's more composed…Shaan promises to himself that he'll never hurt Aayush, knowingly or unknowingly, he will stay with him….Khanak had asked Aayush to take care of Shaan, but now, Shaan will look into that, he never leaves Aayush alone…

Shaan: Aayush chale?? (folding his sleves)

Aayush: hmm…aap breakfast nahi kaaoge?? (Aayush looks up at Shaan, Shaan is stopped, all others to look at Shaan)

Shaan: main baad mein khaloonga…(checks his phone)

Aayush: aap abhi khao, nahi toh main nahi jaa raho aapke saath…(pouts)

All are sad, Shaan without thinking anymore, its next to Aayush, pours juice into his glass, drinks it half, and eats 2 toasts, wipes his hands and gets up…

Shaan: ab chalein??

Aayush nods, and gets up…

Shaan: Mom, do I need to take something, u know for the admission…

Madhvi: No beta…lekin Shaan…

Shaan: mom, aaj hum lod lunch bahar karenge, aur main Aayush ko hospital ke liye saath leke jaa raha hun…

Shaan doesn't wait for the reply, he walks out with Aayush, Shaan has held Aayush's hand securely….

Aayush had excelled very well, teacher had lots to say about Aayush excelness..She did ask about Khanak, both had gone into a silent mode, and Shaan had changed the topic by asking about the admission and when was Aayush's school going to start…

A whole day had completed….For some reason, our three leads had found this day a tad bit longer, not to mention painful and sad….

Khanak's room mate, Nisha, was working as duty doctor in the same hospital, Nisha is younger than Khanak…soon they had become friends…..

Shaan was told that, they couldn't find about the where abouts of Khanak, they had searched whole Mumbai, but she wasn't there, Akshay suggests to check in Lonavala farm house, Raj says that he'll accompany the police, Shaan has listened to everything, but walks away…

Shaan goes to Aayush's room, Aayush is slept, dadi's stories and whole day tiredness, had made him sleep early…..

Shaan, swiftly picks him up, Aayush moans in sleep, just like his mom..Shaan thought…

Shaan walked back to his room, placed Aayush on the huge bed, Aayush snuggled to the pillow…Shaan heard some rasp sound below the pillow, Shaan slowly searched for the thing, found a letter, Shaan wondered….

Khanak had reached the house, Nisha was too tired to ask a thing, but yes Nisha knew that Khanak is married…Nisha had hitted the sack early…

Khanak very well know that sleep was far away for her, she reached her room, closed the door, sat down on the floor, her tears which she had held from morning, started to flow continuously she hugs her knees and starts crying…She tries her best to not to make any noise, her chest hurts badly because of all the crying…

Next part: Khanak meets Khushboo and Shaan gets to know about Anjali's hurtful words for Khanak

Please comment😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesome update chandu...

I could actually feel the pain the trio was undergoing...
Shaan was suprised on reading the lines...aap ki papa ko aap ka zaroorat hai...shayad meri nahi...he couldnt believe how she can say like that...after all he loves her the most...
why is shaan not paying attention in searching out for khanak???😕
shaan found khanak's letter...Aww what might have that poor girl written...😕
The precap sounds interesting...
amazing update chandu...

waiting for the next part...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW CHANDU IT ASWOME UBATE AND CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT PART . UPDAT SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
well penned chandu it was emotional update
i m wiping my tears lekin ruk hi nahi rahehai 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Poor Aayush feeling very bad for him he handles shaan his mom letter
shaan thought he's just like his mom
he read the letter twice n couldn't believe khanak wrote Shaan doesn't need her and told Aayush to take care of his papa 😭 😭
poor shaan was hurt and thought may be it was coz of his behavior since last night
shaan became lifeless i can't see him like this
he lied to Aayush keh she is playing with them but Aayush is grown up now poor him again
his new class admission was on the same day and khanak is not there
sunil was very concern and tried to find khanak
but shaan said no need he's so hurt 💔
shaan carried Aayush to shanak room but noe its his only, good he found a letter what would khanak hve written eagerly waiitng to knows whats in the letter
Loved the way Aayush pout to make him have his breakfast
shaan went to school for Aayush admission he want to take care of his son
i loved the ways shaan is taking care of Aayush
khanak met Nisha for room mate will she be the cause to make shanak meet
i didn't get the precape
Khanak meets Khushboo and Shaan gets to know about Anjali's hurtful words for Khanak

khanak will meet khushboo how
awating for next part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!👏 Absolutely Brilliant writing!!!👏 Fantabulous!!!👏 Loved everything..😊

I really loved how you portrayed Shaan here..😊 though he is totally broken 😭 but held his ground on and controlled himself and handle the situation very well..👏 Loved how Khandelwal's family understood the condition and gave Shaan and Aayush space..👏 and other thing is they never questioned Shaan, what was their problem and why Khanak left!!! 👏superb!!!

Shaan did got to know the reason from the letter and realized that he is the reason for her disappearance from their life..😭

And just amazingly put how much Shaan is in pain when he just looked out through the window.. 👏 can be imagine very well!!!

Awww!!! Aayush true to Khanak's request is taking care of Shaan..😃 asked him to ve breakfast and he obliged it..👏

Shaan is totally unmoved and not doing anything to search Khanak where others doing what not!!! 😭 he is just letting her go or may be too shocked to react ..😕 He would ve never expected such an extreme step from her.. All these things are totally unbelievable to him..😭

Khanak is more or less look settle there though she too is totally broken..😭

Wow!!! In precap Khanak is meeting Khushboo..😃 cool!!!

This is one of your best update and you handle everything impeccably!!!👏

Looking forward on what Khanak wrote in the letter to Shaan and thanks for writing..😊
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update chandu...

shaan's condition was horrible...he atleast couldnt sit over and let his heart cry out...He controlled himself well and made aayush strong...
shaan was taking of aayush...he sees that he is most of the time with aayush...aayush on the other hand also taking care of shaan...loved how he made shaan to have his breakfast...👏

khandelwals family were left shocked not knowing whats happening between these two...
Sunil reported to the police but shaan's reaction was amusing...😕

Raj is also searching for khanak in her farm house...

Cant wait after reading the precap...
khushboo meets khanak???
plzz update soon...

Happy Diwali...😃

Thanks for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG so sad i m crying seeing shan and ayush like this 😭
what is under the pillow?
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superlike chandu!.!
awee feeling bad fr shaan aayush is tking cre of his papa...
ayush admission hmm...wow precap is awsome...
update soonn
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm liked it chanduuu.
I like how ur gonnna make khanak meet kushbooo first if u knkw what I mean loool xxx 😉 😉 😉
xxx
Edited by aasma1 - 12 years ago

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