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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Chandu
thanx for the song dupata i loved it 😊 it suit the trio n another
Shaan pulled khanak to a room n both had a great time 😉 he missed her n she too hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
omgeee!!!!!!!!!! 😆 shaan controling her senses sabar karo shaan
sabar ka phal meetha hota hai 😆😉
Khanak become little emotional missing her family feeling sad for her
bt Aayush and shaan are der dats the good thing
shaan won't leave her after marriage 🤣 n he is sure Aayush wil tk him side dad n mom keh ankhoka ka tara
awaiting for more dhamal in next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a lovey dovet update
i loved the songs especially the one u selected for khanak
finally he got a chance... and our romeo never misses an opportunity
the lil conv was super cute
and the romantic moment was penned beautifully
its sumthing gud to read that they enjoy the romantic moments yet there is some patience
and em sure this patience will cost them ... he'll not let her leave the room after wedding
hmm side to lega ayush loves his papa way too much
it was superb
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello😊

Thanks to pooja, shubadharane, neethurose, diyak, aasma, jaisy, heer, sneha, rida, maneesha for liking and commenting😊

Thank you so much for all the encouragement😊

Please tell if its boring or you wanted to add something please do tell...

Suggestions are welcome😊

Part 34

Khanak: Shaan please!!!

Shaan: bas thodi der!! (pulls her back)

Khanak: Shaan I see your thoughts getting wilder!!! (shakes her head)

Shaan: you can't even imagine (makes her lean on the wall, he's crushing her, his hands still roving around her waiste)

Shaan: achcha I wanted to ask you an important question!!

Khanak: and whats that?? (slowly interlinks her fingers behind his neck)

Shaan: (groans, as he finds immense pleasure in that) yahi ki shaadi ke baad kaha jaane chahthi ho?? (his eyebrows dancing)

Khanak is shy, she turns away to avoid his gaze, her cheeks have turned red, Shaan is enjoying'

Shaan: bolo na Khanak!! Khanak tuns to him, as something hits her'

Khanak: hum bahar kaise jaa saktha hain???

Shaan: kaise jaa sakthe hain?? Matlab??

Khanak: Dr. Shaantanu Khandelwal, shaayad aap bhu rahe hain meri exams hain!!!

Shaan: haayyee!! Jab bhi tum mera pura naam leti ho na Khanak, mujhe bahut achcha lagtha hain!!

Khanak: don't divert Shaan!!

Shaan: ok!! Khanak pura 3 months hain. Hum sirf pandrah din ke liye jaayenge!! (coolly)

Khanak: pandrah din??? Have you lost it?? Aayush ka kya karein??

Shaan: mein Aayush ko kaise bhul saktha hun!! Voh actually bhaiyya has promised that, he'll be taking care, aur bhabhi ko bhi koi problem nahi hain, aur mom dad, dadi sab hain!!!

Khanak: Lekin Shaan, Aayush nahi reh payeega!!

Shaan: Khanak don't you think he's growing, deklena voh khud kahega, that he wants to be alone!!!

Khanak feels sad at that statement, she withdraws her hand, her face falls, she looks down, Shaan is wonders whether he had spoken something wrong, no, that's how kids are growing'..

Khanak: toh kya Aayush'. I mean'..

Shaan: Khanak!! (cups her face) i meant that voh apne friends ke saath close hoga, voh apne aap se rehna lagega!!

Khanak: itni jaldi???

Shaan: ho saktha hain, agar aaj nahi toh kal, ek na ek din toh voh aisa hi bolega!!!

Khanak is worried, that he'll be moving away from her, his naughtiness will be changing, maybe Shaan's right, she had decided that she would give him his private time to enjoy his life, but still the thought of Aayush going away from her fears her!!! She hugs Shaan,he hugged her back,

Shaan didn't wanted to end like this, but he couldn't help, that's the truth, she had to live with it, and he'll be there for both of them!!!

Khanak: Thanks Shaan!!

Shaan: thanks kyun???

Khanak: sab ke liye, I don't know, how I am going to make up for all such beautiful things??

Shaan: mera saath reh kar!! Agar tumhe kuch aur bhi karne ka mann hain toh, I'll tell you how to make up for it after marriage!! (smiles naughtily, she hits him on his chest, smiles)

After sometime, both of them had joined the group back, Khanak had seen Aayush completely enjoying with Akshay bhaiyya, rock song going on background, Aayush sees her, he pulls both of them on to the dance floor, Khanak tries to smile, Shaan slowly goes out of the group, Khanak makes moves with her son, she's got into the truth, even she was the same when she was young, does this feeling was normal, she couldn't ask anyone!!! May be at that time even her mother would have felt, but now even she had to admit that Aayush's growing!!!!

Shaan wanted to make the situation cool for Khanak, he knew the only way he could distract her, by his own way, if he makes his feelings strong for her, then she would divert her mind towards him'

Lights are dimmed, Dhruv picks Aayush and moves away from the centre, Khanak is confused, all are moved aside, she's alone in the centre'..

Shaan holds the mike, and the last song is from myside to my beloved''..

Shaan comes near her, kneels in front of her,puts his hand forwards, may I have a dance my lady'.

Khanak knows that he's trying to ease her, she smiles and nods, she holds his hand, he gets up'

Music starts'.

He holds her waiste in one hand, his another hand holding her hand, her another hand on his shoulders,

Tum ho..
Paas mere
Saath mere
Ho tum yoon..
Jitna mehsoos
Karoon tum ko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Tum ho..
Mere liye
Mere liye
Ho tum yoon..
Khud ko mein
Haar gaya tumko
Tumko main jeeta hoon

Oo..Oho..
Oo..oho ho..
Oo..Oho..
Tum ho..

Kahin se..
Kahin ko..bhi
Aao bewajah chale
Pooche bina kisi se
Hum mile..
Bandishein naa rahin
Koi baaki..
Tum ho..

Kis tarah..
Cheenega..
Mujhse yeh jahan
Tumhe..
Tum..bhi ho
Kya fikar
Ab hume..

Tum ho..
Mere liye
Mere liye
Ho tum yoon..
Khud ko mein
Haar gaya tumko
Tumko main jeeta hoon

Both of them had swayed to music, forgetting that they were observed by so many people, they had been simply great, and Shaan was successful, Khanak had totally lost in his eyes, he had made her to move in twirls, her skirt, her dupatta flying, at last when they had ended, both of them are breathing heavily, both of them gently aroused about eachother's closeness.

They were disturbed by the crowd, crowd clapped for the new couple happily, they had moved away, they were wished by everyone. She was informed by Sunil that they were adding reception function after the marriage, DD had agreed to that, Khanak also agreed, reception will be held on the next day of marriage'.

Khanak had seen the time it had been late, Aayush had not eaten anything, she takes in her arms, for now Aayush is still young, Shaan is also pulled by Khanak.

They are moved to a room, she first feeds to Aayush, and when she brings the spoon in front of Shaan, Shaan is surprised by her act, he holds her hand and eats, Aayush is speaking non-stopping, telling Shaan what and all he'll be shifting and asking him 1000 questions about his new toys, new dresses, everything, Shaan makes him sits on his lap Shaan cooly answers his question, Khanak makes him eat and she feeds Shaan too, her new family'..

After that Aayush had ran off...

Khanak: i think your very good papa!!!

Shaan: good husband bhi hun, if you want i can show you...(crowds her and she's leaned on the wall)

Khanak bends her head, he tucks her hair behind her ear, caresses her cheeks from his fingers, Khanak closes her eyes and revels herself in his touch...

Shaan: i love you Khanak!!! (Khanak slowly opens her eyes, he's looking intensely at her, his hands still on her cheeks)

Khanak: i love you too...(slowly, Shaan at first is surprised)
Shaan slowly pecks on her forehead, his fingers traces her jawline, making her tremble, in response she parts her lips slightly, she has closed her eyes, he slowly peacks her lips and moves to her neck, for first time, revels himself with her fragrance, her hands her resting on the wall, her nucles have become pink because of the pressure she's applied...

He slowly places soft kisses on her neck, Khanak legs have become wobbly, she couldn't control, she moves away from him, breathing heavily...
Please comment😊
Sorry if i've disappointed, coming up: mehandi function
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read both the updates...both are lovely...
Aww khanak is feeding her two babies...nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ktym

Read both the updates...both are lovely...

Aww khanak is feeding her two babies...nice...



Thank you so much mounika😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i loved it loved it simply loved it
the conv was penned amazingly ... reflecting love care passion longing
hmm em really excited for their honeymoon trip
and i guess she must go coz sooner or later ayush will be needing his own space as he is growing
and its normal for khanak to feel bad coz she ayush's mother and has faced so many difficulties in a young age and em glad she has shaan as her life partner
he'll help her overcome the pain and difficulties by his immense love
song was BANG ON ... em in love with it
and she is diverted from the sadness and now taking care of two babies... that part was shoo shweet
hmm gud hi nai best papa and husband
the shanak moment was penned beautifully... that was very romantic... shanaklicious
update soon
lukin fwd to more shanak moments and mehndi function
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy Chandu 🤗
finished reading upto part 32
and they r just awesome... loved Marc Anthony & Enrique songs u have included... loved Shanak dance a lot.
and then the pipe climbing, Shaan unbuttoning his shirt, & the hug...awww loved it.
I'm loving the flow of the story. enjoyed their Sangeet. ... loved all the clothes...superb choice!!
'uski dhun pe dil banjara'...loved it.

ll read the remaining parts soon.

take care😊
loads of love❤️
Edited by shonai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW LOVELY
OMG tum ho song is my fav it is so touchy song shan danced with khanak on this song it is such a bliss to imagine them to dance on this song it was so apt for them
awww khanak feeding shan and aayush sooo cute
and the last part was sooo hot shan bechara i dont think he will be able to survive till marriage hahah
waiting for next very DESPERATELY
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Posted: 13 years ago
waoting for next part desperatley xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

heyy chanduuu awesome...wonderfully written...

loved shanak ka chu chup milna n dir romance... 2 kiss in a day...😉

n hayyee loved d way shaan trie to ease her.. n dis song tum hoo pertectly suits dm...😊

hope khanak understand aaush also need sme space...n cnt wait fr mehdi...😊

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