RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 38

Loved the update Chandu

hey doc all the parts r nice...the dresses r nice yaar...songs u choose r good...shaan taking her to room and begining his naughtyness r nice...i really liked the updates doc...

hello guys
im seriously not in the mood to smile, my friends told that results will be announced today by night, this anticipation is killing, i seriously can't write today, hope you all understand...
please forgive...

awww hope it goes goood
we understand xxx

Hello😃
sorry for the delay, seriously my friends are insane😆, forget it...
Thanks to aasma, diyak, mounika, sneha, heer, jaisy, rida, niki, for liking and commenting😊 thank you so much for all the encouragement😊
i thought of adding spice, don't worry it'll be clear by next update, sorry, next one is pakka mehandi's update, i was not redy, if written it in a hurry, im sorry😊

Part 35

Khanak is breathing heavily, Shaan comes closer to her, moves her hair to one side, he touches the back of her neck, she shivers at his touch, he's gently caressing her back, Khanak has closed her eyes…….

He turns her back to face him, she slowly opened her eyes, her head bent down, he makes her look at him, cups her face,this time he's not holding her, Khanak sees it, Shaan can suddenly see a mischief glint on her eyes, before he could figure it out, she escapes from his hold, runs out of the room, giggling….

Shaan smiles at her mescheivousness, kaha jaogi, aakir mein mere paas hi aana he tumhe….. moves out and looks for her, she's joined her friends, Dhruv and Raj making fun of dance, even Nirav, Misha's husband have joined them, she's laughing and dancing with Aayush, Akshay, Khushboo have also joined them, Khanak pulls sunil, madhvi and dadi for dancing, he shakes his head at her naughtiness…..

Shaan, in his mind, abhi todi der pehle, she was behaving like a caring mother, but now, khud ek bachchi hain, phir bhi, apne bachche ke khaayal ke bare mein bhulthi nahi hain…..

After that, Khandelwals had to leave, as it was late night, Khanak is not allowed to sleep by her friends, she's pulled by her friends to the terrace, even Aayush is not ready for sleeping….

Khanak: (dhruv is pulling her) dhruv!! Kya kar rahe ho??? Mujhe sona hain!! (tired)

All of them are seated, Aayush is sitting on Misha's lap, Nirav next to her, Dhruv seats next to Nirav, pulls Khanak next to him, Raj in between Khanak and Misha…

Khanak: Aayush!! Tumhe bhi sona nahi hain??? Aayush shakes his head in negative, Khanak makes a crying face, as she's extremely tired, because of the amount of dancing she had done and all the amount of bhaag dhod, but her friends had done more of that, but they are not feeling sleepy, that's strange!!!

Raj: dekh Khanak tera yeh puppy cute face sab Shaan ko dikhna hamari saamne yeh sab nahi chalne wala hain!!

Khanak: voh kaha sunta hain!!

Dhruv: kya kaha???

Khanak: kuch nahi!! Aap abhi kasht karenge (before completing)

Nirav: kya karenge???

Khanak: aap kam the!!! (fake smile) mera matlab mujhe ko bhulaaya hain????

Misha: arrey Khanak do din mein tumhari shaadi hain, obviously tumhe kal sona toh padega, toh humne socha aaj tumhe jaga de!!! Hamare saath time spend karne ke liye!! (Khanak is confused, as well as others except Nirav)

Raj: (can't control) kyun?? I mean, Khanak ko kal kyun sona hain?? Maine aur Dhruv ne kal ke liye bhi plan banake rakha hain, hai na Dhruv???

Dhruv: haan!!! (no idea) arrey yeah!! (suddenly gets into) Raj agar kal Khanak nahi soyi then shaadi ke baad problem hoga na!!! (hints)

Raj first wonders and then settles to him, Khanak is still wondering, Aayush is a spectator, keeps on moving his head to see everyone!!!!

Dhruv: ek minute kuch mazaak karte hain!!! Mish r u ready?? Everyone's eyes lit up…..

Khanak: kya kar rahe ho??? Dhruv tells her to be silent, picks Nirav's phone, calls, puts it in loudspeaker, signals mish to speak , its Shaan…

Shaan: (wonders who's number is that) Hello (slowly)

Mish: hey Shaan!!! (slowly, husky, in her sexy voice) Khanak recognizes the voice of Shaan, she's about to yell into the phone, Raj covers her mouth, Aayush giggles into his hands, he's also involved in pulling Shaan's legs…

Shaan: sorry?? Do I know you???

Mish: offcourse u know me Shaan!!! Bhul gaye na mujhe?? (in her sexy voice) All are controlling their laughter, Khanak is struggling under the pressure of Raj's hand on her mouth….

Shaan: I think it's a wrong number….

Mish: no Shaan!! This is right number!! Mein tumhara pehla pyaar!!

Shaan: pehla pyaar?? Sorry you've mistaken!! (goes to cut the call)

Mish: no Shaan, don't cut the call!! (Shaan wonders who's that) hum London mein pehle the, don't u remember???

Shaan: London mein??? No its perfectly a wrong call!! (he hears giggling) Aayush couldn't control, his giggles were heard, Shaan senses may be that was a ploy for him, he decides to play along….

Shaan: oh yeah!! Lisa!!! So nice to hear from you!!

Mish covers the phone, so that he can't hear, everyone whisper Lisa!!, Raj now leaves Khanak's mouth…

Dhruv: Khanak tu toh gayi!! Khanak's anger is raising, now she's fully aroused. Everyone tells Mish to continue!!

Mish: yes!! Im lisa!! See u remember!! (Shaan controls his laugh)

Shaan: how r u?? Im missing you a lot!!!

Khanak blood starts to boil at that statement….Mish continues…

Mish: I miss you too (all naughtiness faded)

Shaan: so where r u now?? (continues)

Mish: im in Mumbai!!

Shaan: oh yeah!! Then we should meet, how about for tmrw's lunch???? All are shocked….

Mish: lunch?? Are you sure?? I heard your getting married?!

Shaan: ya!! That wouldn't be a problem!! Kal milte hain!! So where do want us to meet??

Raj: yeh toh date ke liye plan kar raha hain!! (smiles broadly, Khanak glares at him, he goes quite after seeing Khanak's expression)

That's it, Khanak has lost it, she pulls the phone to her…

Khanak: date ke liye plan bana rahe ho?? (sarcastic)

Shaan: hey what happened to your voice??? Waise yeh awaaz suni si lag rahi hain!! Why r u sounding like Khanak???

Khanak: nice to know Dr. Shaantanu Khandelwal, that you've started to compare me with others (fuming)

Shaan: hey Khanak!!! (coolly)

Khanak: who's lisa???

Shaan: Lisa?? Koi nahi hain Khanak, I was just… (is not allowed to speak further)

Khanak: good to know, that you had a crush!! Not allowing him to talk, she threw the phone, Dhruv catches it, picks Aayush in her arms, moves inside with him, all are regretting the idea of fun…..

Shaan (into the phone): hey Khanak listen, I was joking!!!!

Dhruv: Shaan your dead!!

Shaan: what??

Raj: dude, you've got a sulking would be wife!!!

Shaan: is she angry??

Nirav: you can't even imagine!!!

Shaan: freak!! Guys yeh karna zaroori tha???

Raj: oye humne lisa ka naam liya tha??

Shaan: guys voh sab chodo, now tell how am I suppose to convince her???

Dhruv: nothing you've to show the proof that you don't know any girl named Lisa!!!

Shaan: proof???

Mish: Shaan inn logon ki baat mat suno, be honest and tell her the truth!!!

Shaan: I guess I have to do that!! Mish can you confirm and tell that she's fine!!

Nirav: tum call karo usse!!

Shaan: ok!! Thanks for the wonderful night guys!! Sab achche se sona haan!! (sarcastic, and cuts the call)

Raj: did he wish us good night???

Dhruv: oh yes he did!!!! (sarcastic) chalo bhai hum bhi chalthe hain!!!

Khanak on the other hand, was successful to put Aayush into sleep, Shaan had called her, she deliberately had cut the call and offed her phone, and layed down to sleep…..

Shaan is pacing in his room, tensed what he should do, he had never seen her switching off her phone, but now she had done that, he scolds himself for putting her in tension he thinks she would be crying, but somewhere he liked her possessiveness, but now he wonders how to talk to her….

Next day, Khanak is all fresh, she's behaving normal, her friends are shocked to see her like that, her morning fights with Aayush, her normal talk with all of the guests, and decides how to get ready for her mehandi…..

Please comment😊
sorry for the previous post😊

Loved the update Chandu

Originally posted by: heer_85

Loved the update Chandu

The group conv was awesome they talked abt khanak sleep for the next day 😉. n Aayush was moving his head side by side 😆 bache koh bhi nahi chora inlogo neh 😊

They all play a ploy on shaan n he too joined them 😆

Mish and Shaan aur beech mein Lisa 🤣

Shaan toh gaya kaam seh Khanak snatch the phone n started bombing question to shaan

Poor shaan trapped in his own Ploy 😆 n Khanak didn't let him talk

Dhruv and other told him to find the proof dat he doesn't know any LIsa

😆

shaan called her bt she switch off her cell and the next day Khanak was normal and carried her daily routine

what makes her normal did shaan come at nite to meet her omgeee so many questions 😆

Awaiting for next part eagerly

Thanks a lot heer😃 you'll get to know it😆

babe at work so cantr write much, but loved it pooor shanak loool, atleast she still wants here mehndi to.go omg loool..
update quick loool xxx

that was lovely
the conv was super fun to read
hmm a caring mother . a child sumtime, very possessive... ek perfect gurl
shaan is dead meat...
when khanak is angry her glares are enough to scare
but our romeo will convince her in a min... he knows his lady love so well
pretty gud
updates soon

OMG this was so much fun i was LOL reading shan and misha's phone masti