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Posted: 13 years ago
hey doc update was very lovely i really liked it man..especially the group conv...did he came at night and convinced her...she is normal at next morning?'?? waiting for next update...i hope ur exam results r very good...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

omg wonderful update...all r teasing her...😆😆

oh god lisa kha ase aaa gyi???😆😆 shaan was jst joking n khanak thought all dat was true...

n shez normal in d morn?? aisa kya huaaa😕

update soon...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO😃
YAAAYYY!!! my story has completed 50 pages!!!
Thank you so much guys, for all your encouragement, and bearing with my story, i know the number of likes have decreased, may be you had expected another story line or maybe nowadays people are busy, anyways, yes initially it did hurt me, but my regular readers have cheered me up😃
Thank you so much guys, love you all😊 i still wait for people to take their time and read, and most importantly comment, i see for each update, 500 views, and i get only 8-10 likes, no problem, i can understand, even i was a silent reader, but seriously writers crave for your likes, that's the reason they'll bring up such stories, which touches our heart😊

i know i've given a big lecture, sorry for that😆

now my thank you list-
@heer- thanks a lot heer😊
@ aasma- Thanks a lot aasma😊 you can say poor Shaan😆
@rida - Thanks a lot rida😊 but this time our khanak is very fast for him😆
@ jaisy- Thanks a lot jaisy😊 kya baat hain jaisy, i thought you like Shaan, waise Raj bhi teek hain😆
@niki- Thanks a lot niki😊 thank you for your wishes, im still waiting...
@sneha- Thanks a lot sneha😊 Shaan will be surprised by her instincts, and so do you😆

Thank you so much for those who have pressed like button, thank you so much😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊

Part 36

Misha and others saw her happily moving around, Raj is very curious, he pulls her to ask, others also joined'

Raj: Khanak r u alright??? (slowly)

Khanak: yeah!! Im fine!!(smiling)yeh listen, maine aur DD ne aaj ka mehandi ka function jaldi rakka hain!!

Dhruv: kyun???

Khanak: kyun ki aaj raat maine party ke liye plan banaya hain, we've decided to have a youngsters party before the marriage, maza aayega na, thing is Shaan aur uske dost bhi aayenge!! But we'll rock!! (smiles cheekily and winks)

Raj comes closer touches her forehead as though he's checking whether she has fever or not'

Khanak: raj what r u doing??? (removes his hand)

Misha: Khanak, tum teek ho na??? u remember last night's incident na???

Khanak watches everyone carefully'

Dhruv: Khanak tumhe kahi amnesia toh nahi hogaya??!! (makes a face)

Khanak: guys hold it!!! Mujhe yaad hain, sab teek hain!!!

Raj: explain Khanak!!! (restless)

Khanak: ok fine!!!

Flash back-

After lying down, a lone tear had flowed down her cheek, but she got up suddenly, as though she knew her destination, she wiped her tear, covered Aayush with blanket, moved out of the house, while going she had encountered DD, she had promised DD that she'll be back early, DD trusted her, he allowed her to go, but he's not sure about that, so he just stays out of the door'.

Khanak takes her car and moves towards Shaan's house. Shaan is pacing here and there, he had tried so much to talk to her, but his efforts were in vain!! His phone rings, he receives it in the first ring, as it was from Khanak!!

Shaan: Khanak im sorry, I was'.(not allowed to complete his statement)

Khanak: Shaan!! Neeche aao!!!

Shaan: what??

Khanak: abhi ke abhi neeche aao!! (Shaan has no words, he runs downstairs and moves towards the garden)

Shaan: Khanak!! Kaha ho?? (tap on his shoulder)

Shaan turns back, and he's surprised to see her there, at the late hour of night, she stands coolly as though that was the coolest thing to do!!!!

Shaan: Khanak have you lost it!! Itni raat ko akele kyu aayi??? Agar kuch ho jaatha toh?? (yells at her)

Khanak: (coolly) I need explanation Shaan!!! (arms folded across in front)

Shaan: Khanak!! (cools himself) kabhi kabhi aise harkate karti ho!! Mujhe toh yakeen nahi hotha hain ki tum vahi bholi bhali khanak ho!!

Khanak:Shaan im waiting!!!

Shaan: (holds her shoulders) Khanak I was just joking!!! I knew that someone was playing with me, so I just payed along (honest)

Khanak is just looking at him, she's calm, Shaan continues'.

Shaan: Khanak trust me, you're the first girl in my life, and you'll be the last one, I promise!!!!

Khanak slowly smiles, her eyes filled with tears. Shaan also smiles, and she comes closer and hugs him, he hugs her back!!!

Khanak: im sorry!!! (speaks into his chest) Shaan smiles, hugs her tight!!!

Shaan: kya tum aisa hi hon?? (mocks)

Khanak: tumhari wajah se main aisi bann gayi hun !!

Shaan: (laughs) achcha tumhe yaha aate hua kisi ne dekha nahi??? (feels her hair)

Khanak: haan DD ne dekha!!!

Shaan: aur unhone kuch nahi kaha??

Khanak: nahi!!! (moves out of the hug and shrugs)

Khanak: teek hain, main chalthe hun, bahut der hogayi hain!! (turns around)

He holds her wrist, abb ayigai ho, toh ek good night kiss de do!! (smiling mischievously)

Khanak: kiss?? Dream on Shaan!! (she tries to pull her wrist back)but Shaan's grip is strong'

Shaan: dream main nahi khanak!! Abhi issi waqt'.

Before she knows, he has pulled her and kissed her hardly on lips, a body tingling kiss, showing his passion for her, she was at first shocked but then she had enjoyed it and had responded''

After sometime Khanak had come back to her house, Shaan had dropped her, DD was waiting for her, but he had felt happy when he saw Shaan had come to leave her. After that Shaan had bid bye to both of them. Khanak had spent time with DD, that's when they decided of the party'..

(Flashback over)

Raj and others are in shock, that she literally had gone to him at that late night, was she the same Khanak'.Khanak had to shake her hands in front of them to bring them back to the reality (and she has not told about the kiss!!!)

Mehandi function has started, as scheduled it was preponed early, Shaan is wearing another shervani, looking dashing as always, he had to put a mehandi shagun on his hand, but he's denying it'.

Shaan: Mom please!! Aap ko pata hain mujhe uske khushboo hi achchi nahi laghti, dadi!! Aap toh bolo'

Sunil: no Shaan nahi chalega!! Bus thoda sa hi dhalna hain beta!!

Shaan: Dad!! (wines, Khanak comes down, in her attire, looking gorgeous, Shaan has forgotten that, he was forced to sit for mehandi, since he was just looking at her, Khandelwals use the chance and draws the shagun on his hand, he realizes it when all of them laughs at him, Shaan makes a face at everyone!!)

Khanak smiles at him, she's surrounded by many girls, all are seated, they started to draw mehandi on her hand'

Khushboo: Chalo Shaan, kuch gaao!!

Shaan: kya??

Khushboo: aur nahi toh kya, comeon Shaan entertain karo!!! All of them cheered him'

Shaan: ok fine!!! But on one condition!!

Misha: aur voh kya hai???

Shaan: kuch nahi, bus Khanak ko mera saath gaana hain!!

Everyone teases the new couple, and then Shaan starts'.

Aap ka aana, dil dhadkaana

(The way you come, the way you make my heart beat)


Mehndi lagaake yun sharmaana

(The way you wear henna and shy away like this)


Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya - 2

(It has made me fall in love)



Khanak -
Oh, oh oh, oh oh, oh oh oh
Oh oh, oh oh, oh oh oh
Kyoon hota hai dil deewana aaj yeh humne jaana

(Today I have learned why the heart becomes crazy)


Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

(I have fallen in love)


Aap ka aana, dil dhadkaana

(The way you come, the way you make my heart beat)


Daalke daana mujhe sataana

(The way you scatter seeds and tease me)


Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

(It has made me fall in love)


Shaan -
Mili jo nazar, hua yeh asar

(When our gazes met, this effect occurred)


Yeh dil gum hua, arre bekhabar

(This heart got lost, oh unknowing one)

Khanak -
Chhupi hai sharaarat tere pyaar mein

(Mischief is hidden in your love)


Dil haar baithe pehli baar mein

(My heart began to surrender in the first time)


Pal mein apna kyoon ho jaata hai koi begaana

(Why does one of your own turn into a stranger in an instant?)


Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

(I have fallen in love)



Shaan -
Aap ka aana, dil dhadkaana

(The way you come, the way you make my heart beat)


Mehndi lagaake yun sharmaana

(The way you wear henna and shy away like this)


Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

(It has made me fall in love)



Tere pyaar ka nasha chhaa gaya

(The intoxication of your love has been cast)


Mili voh saza, maza aa gaya

(I have received this punishment, and it brought fun)



Khanak -
Baaton ne teri jaadu kiya

(Your words have done magic)


Ban baitha tu mera piya

(You have become my lover)


Khan khan bole choodi meri doli leke aana

(Jingling, my bangles tell you to come bringing my bride carriage)


Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

(I have fallen in love)


Shaan -

Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

It has made me fall in love


Khanak -
Pyaar aa gaya re, pyaar aa gaya

I have fallen in love

Loud round of applause for them, both of them are lost in each other eyes'''..

Coming up - still more to come, starting of party!!
Hope its upto ur expectations, thank you so much jaisy for the song, what a wonderful song, loved it😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊Loved the update Chandu
I don't believe Khanak went to meet Shaan at late night and then narrate the story to her friend who were shocked 😲seeing her cool and happy 😊
Raj is very funny, he checked khanak temperature whether she has a fewer or what 🤣
she didn't tell them about the kiss😉😆
Mehndi was held early coz DD and Khanak decided to through a part
Poor Shaan, he stared at Khanak when she came and Khandelwal got the chance to apply shagun ki mehndi on his palm 😆😆
The songs is awesome loved it 😊 both sang 😊
Next update will be party time 🥳
Awaiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
babe i sorry I cantr comment ima at work but I did read the update and loved it loool
khanak ki jai ho loool
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

superlike dis updatre...even i was thinking achanak khanak ko kya ho gya...😆😆

oh soo she went to shaan too meet him n misunderstanding cleared...wohooo 3 kiss in day...🤣

woww shanak sang bueatiful song ...nw wats gonna happ after sangeet...😳😳

chandu chill no matter likes kam ho rhe hai we r always der...😃😃

waiting fr nxt...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey u like the song and u added it thanks a ton for that i m happy that u like it 😃
she actually went to meet him crazy
the gud night kiss was damn good 😉
thank god u wrote in the bracket she had not told them about kiss o.w i was wondering how can she tell them about kiss and how they will react
u added the song very beautifully means shan ka kehna khanak bhi mere saath gayegi and then both started singing is really very good 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Chandana :))

LOved all the updates ,,,,,,,,,Beautifully written !!! Magical they are !!!

Firstly Many Many Congratulations dear for completing 50 Pages ab toh Century ka Intezaar hain 😃 Raabta deserves it 👏 Beautiful Story line with awesome charactarisation & your Simple yet captivating way of writing makes ir very i intriguing for me 👏 Kudos to you !!!

I am Extremly Sorry for not being regular here 😒 buit love your writing dear & i do try to catch up it on time. LOl this week i was in camplete party mood so was MIA too 😳 Just read all the last 3 parts & loved it a lot 👏 Awesome !!!

Firstly Lovely Songss 👏 Excelllent selection dear 😃 & mahandi song was beautiful too 👏 Jalis awesome choice dear !!! I liked that Song too 😃 Shanak their Romance with aayush masti & Friends support is all a blend of beautiful Story. LOved the discribtion of Each & every situation 👏 & their intimate sences ☺️ Super hawt dear 😃 love your style of writing 😊 Aayush is very well gelled up with all of them but i serio missed Aayush & Shaan's Convo. its an Ubber cute thingy in your FF 😊

Shaan tried to tease Buddies when he heard giggling of aayush but his playing to their prank made khanak angry 😆 LOL the most cute character between Friends is Raj 😊 he is super cute yaar 😊 LOved his style & Sence of humour LOL he is a tubelight too 😆 Loved the way Khanak Didnt let missunderstanding grow & talked to shaan immidiately 👏 Extremlty beautiful writeups Dear 😃

Thank you So muchh 😃 & Congratulations once again 🥳

Continue soon ...waiting 😊

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely and a very sweet update
lukin fwd to the fun in party
update soon

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