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Hello😊

Part 32

Same evening, as Shaan had promised Aayush he took him to beach, Khanak had also joined, and that was the last day for Khanak to move out of the house, after that she's not allowed to roam outside till the marriage!! Trio had a great fun, especially Aayush, with his papa; which he had wished and his wish was fulfilled by his beloved father. Khanak had stood far away and watched both of them enjoy, smile playing on her lips, after that Shaan had left them home'.

Next day, they had shifted to her old house, her house, where her childhood had been spent. Shaan had accompanied, he was stunned seeing the house. It was a huge house, with a huge lawn in front of the house, Aayush had runned inside, he hardly remembered the house surroundings, Khanak had left alone, to take in the sight of her house, where she had enjoyed a lot of joyfull moments with her parents, her brother. Each wall of the house telling her the story of it own, her fights with brother, her father protecting her from her brother, then she asking forgiveness , she and brother would run around the house a lot, her mother stopping them, in childhood, which was continued even in their adulthood..

Shaan couldn't have imagined the house like this; it was nicely built, nicely designed, it clearly told that, her family was quite rich, but she had never shown that. She remained as a simple girl, she had also mentioned him that, she was taking all the money responsibilities and her stipend was enough for her and Aayush's living., which neatly told him that, she wasn't like any other girl, going on spending with their father's money, she's the girl who would never ever think about hurting her own self-respect. He had to watch out now, she isn't that easy as she seem to be''but yes too kind enough'.

DD had clearly instructed them to not to see each other, they had agreed reluctantly. Khanak had not left out in the next few days.. Madhvi, Khushboo and dadi had comeover to see her and they had bought a boat load of clothes to her, from which she had to select clothes for sangeet and mehandi'. She was allowed to chose her wedding attiretoo...

For sangeet

Nice pink netted lehenga, this was suggested by Khushboo, as Khanak would look hot...

For mehandi

she had liked this one at first sight!!!, being sleveless and covered mostly would help her during mehandi!!

For wedding

Though it was heavy, it was unique, it had got special stone on its working, she had fallen in love with this dress!!!

Aayush get a chance of wearing new clothes, he had gone shopping with Dhruv and Raj, Shan had joined them, he had chosen clothes for Aayush'..

Madhvi and Khushboo had gushed a lot about the clothes and jewellery that she'll be wearing, seeing this DD had got tears, he wished all the happiness to her in her life, Dhruv and Raj joked about this, Khanak had got irritated and ran behind them, their neighbors and close relatives whom she knew, only a handful of them were invited. Her father's close friends were invited by DD. They had tried to get in contact with Dhruv's mother, she didn't even receive the call. Raj's parents had cheered her, Misha's husband, Nirav, had also joined .

All these days, Khanak and Shaan had talked to each other through phone, Shaan would call her every hour and she would call him at the night. They would speak whole night, about what they did whole day, and they were missing eachother like hell!! Shaan had also tried to enter her house, seeing many people, he had to return, hearing this Khanak had a good laugh'.

It's a beautiful morning; it's the day for Sangeet. The first wedding ritual, Shaan's family would be coming in the evening, her house had turned to look like some palace, decorated by flowers, lightnings all set, which will be oned in the night. Aayush's too happy he's running all around the house, Khanak had to run behind him making him eat, it had become a really hard task by now, he had started to ask her many questions, Khanak had sometimes got irritated with his question, his question would start from nice pace like, Mom hum log apartment mein nahi jaayenge??? Nahi!! (answer from Khanak) Mom aap mere liye nayi dresses dilaogi?? Haan!! Mom hum log papa ke ghar par shift honge?? Haan!! Mom mere sare toys le challenge na??? Haan Aayush!! abb please khalo!! Still he won't stop asking questions, at the end of her wits, she would act like crying and he would come running to her, then she would make him eat and then allow him to play!! Because she could never hit him!!

This was the only work she had, she was strictly warned not to do a single thing by Raj's mom!!! Since Raj, Dhruv and Misha were her childhood friends, their parents knew her well, they were happy for her!! Khanak wondered whether she had done some good in her life, that's the reason she was blessed with people around her, who cared for her!!

Shaan was excited on another hand, he would be seeing her after so many days, his shervanis were selected by his mother, he had no interest, his interest was that, he had to just meet Khanak!!!

House was lighted, in evening, Khandelwals had reached her house, they were stunned seeing the arrangements, Shaan's looking cool and handsome in his shervani!!

Good Looking Sherwani

Aayush and others were rocking too, Aayush's happy to see his papa, Shaan's eyes searches for Khanak. He's made to seat on a chair, which was placed on a stage.
He was greeted by everyone. Everyone were curious to see him, at the other end he was curious to see only pne girl!!!
At last she had come with some other girls, Misha was behind her. Her hairs in curls, with little make up and jewellery, her eyes adored with kohl, lips shining due to lip gloss, looking just like angel in Shaan's eyes. Yes she's looking gorgeous and hot!!!
Her bare waiste making his senses gently aroused, he felt as though it'll be impossible for him to control his senses!!
She's now walked upto him, he's just looking at her. Khanak had looked at him, she was shy because of the dress, it was so much revelling, she wasn't sure about what Shaan would say to her!!!
His eyes darely roved around her, they were made to sit next to each other, Shaan couldn't contol,
Shaan: marne ka iraada hai kya?? (whisper)
Khanak smiled shyly, Khanak: kyun??
He was about to continue, but was stopped by...
Announcement!!!! Dhruv's on mike!!

Welcome everyone!! to Shaan and Khanak's sangeet!!!! (claps)
OK lets start the program!! we matlab hum sab ne decide kiya hai!! that we'll be enacting Shaan and Khanak's story!!
Shaan and Khanak are surprised!!!
Dhruv continues, now we'll be asking the question to Dulha!! i mean Shaan (moves toward him, stands next to him) Shaan are you ready to shake your hips or do you want us to do???
Shaan does an act of thinking!! gets up, places his one hand around Dhruv's shoulders!!
Shaan: Sangeet kiski hai????
Dhruv: obviously tumhara hai!!!
Shaan: to main hi karoonga!!!
Dhruv: ok then!! lets start guys!! pehle song humne choose kiya hai!!
Raj (continues): jab Shaan ne Khanak ko pehli baar dekha, tab uske dil ne kaha...
Dhruv: banjaara banjaara!!! (making an action, by moving his forearms in form of circles)
Shaan: OK!!!! All of the Guys got on the floor...
Music starts...

Banjara banjara…
Dil mera banjaara
Dekha jabse usko dil mera dil mera banjaara
Naa jaga naa soya dil mera dil mera banjaara
Jo muskaraaye woh, Sab kuch bhulaye woh
Dekho bhatak ke aaye dil Banjaara0
Banjara banjaara uski dhun me dil banjaara
Banjara banjaara uski dhun me dil banjaara

Leharaake dil se guzarti hai woh
Leharaake dil se guzarti hai woh
Jaane kya khit-pit karti hai woh
Ho hans de to ude dil me hai titliyan
Be-mausam gire hum pe hain bijliyaan
Uss pe ye dil aa aake haara
Banjara banjara uski dhun me dil banjaara
Banjara banjara uski dhun me dil banjaara

Ho ho…
Baaton me uski jaadugari
Ho… baaton me uski jadugari
Nigaahon me uske hai kaarigari
Ho saikadon khwaab uspe hain kharcha kiye
Phir bhi milne ko har roz tarsa kiye
Kehde toh chhod du main ye jag saara
Banjara banjaara uski dhun me dil banjara
Banjara banjaara uski dhun me dil banjara

While dancing, Shaan had pulled Aayush into it. He had enacted the lyrics to her!!!
On the last note, he had pulled Khanak onto the dance floor!!!
Both of them had enjoyed the last two lines!!!

All of them are settled back!!
Dhruv: welldone!!! (claps) so Khanak are you ready now????

Coming up: still more dancing!! and shanak ka chupke milna!!!
This is the video of banjaara song, truly rocking song, loved Katrina in it!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=o2aEd52nsAM
Hope you like it!!!

Please comment😊


Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it, will be back to comment more.. at work xxx loving tgen pictures son far xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update Chandu awesome yaar
the dresses are awesome n definitely after wearing them khanak will look gorgeous and very haaawwwttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khanak recall her childhood after entering her old house, she misses her family but now Shaan wil keep her happy forever
Aayush question are non stop 😆 Poor Khanak has to run after him to feed him again, Aayush act are always shooo sweet love him yaar
Khushboo select a nice dress for her sangeet its lovely shaan toh gaya kaam se 😆
Wow!!!!!!!! khanak came n shaan clean bold hogaya 🤣 for him angle came to his life she looks gorgeous n hooot!!!!!!!!!!
loved the dialogue of shaan reminds RBO
Marne ka irada hai kya hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! maar dala 😆
loved the dance n the songs is very nice
Awaiting for khanak's dance n chup chup ke milna wala part hehehehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!!! loved the update and mostly loved the dresses especially of sangeet and wedding dresses
i loved the way u described her house and her childhood memories i just feel for khanak she must be missing them so much 😭
hey i loved the song too yes kat looks great in that song
waiting for shank's chupke milna and many more😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update chandu...😊
the dresses are really beautiful...😊

song is awesome...


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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
the dresses are beautiful and the song is superb
penned beautifully abt the old memories, the longing for each other and the love expressed by everyone for her
ayush and her part was very cute
shaan always make sure that ayush is never left behind and not feel neglected and i loved it
lukin fwd to more fun and shanak meeting
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update :))

Shanak & Aayush the trio always spread Cuteness for me :) Aayush is a essence of your FF ...His cuteness makes all worth it :)

LOved Khanak's Old House & Dresses too ...Specially her Shaadi ka lahengaa :)) Superb yaar & Shaans attire made him look Extremly hot & handsome ...DD is superb & LOved the way everyone is pempering Khanak :)) Cute indeed !!!

Sangeet was awesome ...LOved reading abt it :)) Song selection is Super cool (y)


LOved the update ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Beautifully written :))))

Continue Soon :)))

LOve
Pranjal.
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update!!!!!!! loved d dresses wore by dem...

aayush is sooo cute he was questioning soo much...😆😆

khanak is being pampered by every1😊

song selection was jsttt superb i keep huming dis song dis day...i m imagning shaan singing dis song...

loved it waiting fr nxt...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello😊

Thanks a lot to pooja, neethurose, diyak, aasma, mounika, heer, jaisy, rida, sneha, pranjal for liking and commenting😊

Thank you so much for all the ecouragement😊

Part 33

Dhruv continues, Khanak had fallen for Shaan, but the thing was, she was not in the state of accept her own feelings, she had decided to move away from him, but still day by day, her feelings had grown strong, so we'll be representing that state of Khanak, so Khanak your ready??

Khanak smiled and moved to the dance floor,

tu muskura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura

(smile, wherever you are just smile)
tu dhoop ki tarah badan ko chu jara

(like a sun light touch my body)
sharir se yeh muskurahatein teri

(those smiles of your from my body)
badan mein sunati hoon main aahatein teri

(i am listening to your resemblances in my body)


labon se aake chhu le apane lab jara

(come touch your lips with my lips)
tu mukura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura

(smile, wherever you are just smile)


aisa hota hain khayalon mein aksar

(this happens always in my thoughts)
tujh ko sochu toh mahak jati hoon

(when i think of you i became fragrant)


meri rooh mein basi hain teri khushbu

(your scent is resided in my soul)
tujhako choo loon to bahek jaati hoon

(when i touch you i get intoxicated)


tu muskura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura - (2)

(smile, wherever you are just smile)


tej chalati hain hawaao ki saansein

(the breathes of wind are flowing fast)

mujhko baahon mein lapet ke chhupale

(by folding me in your arms, hide me)


teri aankhon ki hasin loriyo mein

(in the beautiful lullaby of your eyes)


main badan ko bichhaau tu sula le

(let me sleep)

tu muskura jahaan bhi hai tu muskura

(smile, wherever you are just smile)

Since it's a slow song, she had not moved much, but she had involved Shaan also, as that was her condition, when she had decided that she would avoid him. But the things in her life as turned out so well, till now she can't believe that she's marrying the person, whom she loves to eternity….

Shaan's a bit upset and also happy, they were not given time, this time Shaan, Khanak and Aayush onto the dance floor, music starts Shaan and Khanak gets on to music and even Aayush too…

Shaan –

Baliye Te Mukhde Pe Dil Lalchave
Laungda Pe Laskara Jaanle Na Jaave(2)

Dekhe Bina Dekhe Tenu Raha Bhi Na Jave
Roop Saloona Tere Sono Changda
Duppatta Tera (2)
Haye Duppatta Tera (2)
Duppatta Tera..Nau Rang Da Haye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (3)

Duppatta Tera..Duppatta Tera
Haye Duppatta Tera

Duppatta Tera..Nau Rang Da Haye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (3)

Khanak –

Jaan Meri Jaan
Teri Haye Sadd Ke Teri Sadd Ke Haan Teri Saad Ke
Jaanu Naiyo Jana Kabhi
Jana Menu Chad Ke Menu Chad Ke Kabhi Menu Chad Ke
Shaan –

Saari Khusi Duniya Ke Tujhpe Loota Do Yeh Yeh
Aaja Teri Rahoon Mein Jindagi Bicha Doo

Roop Saloona Tere Sono Changda
Duppatta Tera (2)
Duppatta Tera (2)
Duppatta Tera..Nau Rang Da Haye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (2)


Khanak –

Yaar Mera Yaar Sare Jag Se Juda Jag Se Juda ..Sare Jag Juda
Pyaar Mein To Pyaar Karu Uspe Fida..Uspe Fida. Karu Uspe Fida
Shaan –

Mehendi To Gore Gore Haath Mein Saja Le
San Sehzadi To Apna Bana Le

Roop Saloona Tere Sono Changda
Duppatta Tera... (2)
Duppatta Tera (2)
Duppatta Tera..Nau Rang Da Haye Ni Mera Dil Mangda (4)

After this all are on the dance floor, Aayush is now in arms of Dhruv, songs are continued, Shaan sees the moment and pulls Khanak to a room, Khanak is shocked!!! He pulls her into a room, locks it…

Khanak: Shaan kya kar rahe ho???

Shaan: madam agar tumhe yaad nahi to mein tumhe yaad diladoon, hum ek doosre ko mile hue paanch din hogaye hain!!

Khanak: (suppresses her smile) haan toh…

Shaan: toh…(pulls her to him, his hands for the first time, daringly keeps on her bare waiste)

They are close enough, her hands on his shoulders, his one hand cups her face, his ragged breath mixes with hers, he slowly pecks on her forehead…

Shaan: I missed you!!!!

Khanak: me too!!! Lips are brought close, he slowly pecks on her lips, she has closed her eyes, her lips parted, giving him invitation to go further, he kisses her this time patiently, hand on her waiste pulls her more close, her hands this time rove on his hair, giving both of them immense pleasure…..

After sometime, which seemed like after some minutes, they broke the kiss, both are breathless…

Shaan: Khanak!! (breathless)

Khanak has lost her speech, she just looks at him…

Shaan: you seriously don't have any idea how badly I missed you!!! She closes his mouth, before he could tell anything, she hugs him, her head neatly rested on his chest, he smiles at her and hugs her like as though he would never allow her to go away from him….

Shaan: Khanak your missing your parents right???

Khanak, is surprised, yes she was missing them, she was imagining things going under her father and brother's assistance, they would have filled her emptiness, which she's feeling now for them…

But when Shaan had sung for her, she had dismissed the idea, she had enjoyed how he had involved Aayush into it!!!

Since she didn't answer, Shaan thought he should change the topic, may be that would ease her…

Shaan: waise tumhara skin, bahut smooth hai!!! (smiles devilishly, fiddles with her waiste band)

Khanak smiles, but when he had touched, she had felt uncomfortable, she felt as though she'll be losing all her senses, the same is happening now!!!

Shaan: u don't have any idea how badly im controlling my senses….

Khanak moves out of the hug, gives him a confused expression..

Shaan: (holds her arms) aur nahi toh kya, your looking so sexy, but still I can't enjoy the full of you!!

Khanak (embarrassed): shaan!! (turns away)

Shaan hugs her from back,

Shaan: tum mere liye kuch nahi kahogi???

Khanak: (smiles naughtily, turns to him, her hands on his shoulders) your looking hot!!! (husky)

Shaan: haaye haaye!!!! (hugs once again)

Shaan: mann karta hain main tumhe kabhi nahi jaane do!!!!

Khanak: (moves out)lekin jaana toh padega, hamari sangeet hain!!!

Shaan: who toh hain, but is sab ka badla main shaadi ke baad loonga!!! (pulls her by her waiste)

Khanak: badla??

Shaan: aur nahi toh kya, deklena main tumhe bahar jaane tak nahi dunga!!

Khanak: shaan you are becoming insane!! (struggling to get out of his hold)

Khanak: Shaan shaayad tum bhul rahe ho, Aayush bhi hain, hamari life main!!

Shaan: tumse kisne kaha, mein Aayush ko bhul chukka hoon, dekhlena Aayush bhi mera side hi lega!!

Khanak: voh shaadi ke baad dekhlenge, abb mujhe chodo!! (still struggling)


Please comment😊

i know you may feel its small, im sorry didn't have the mood, will continue soon😊

sorry didn't get the english translation of dupatta tera nau rang, hope you like it😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
i love it love it love it
the hug the sensual kiss was to die for it was chotu update but its ok atleast u updated something
will be waiting for tomorrow's update 😃

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