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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wooow dhriv and khanak where about to be engaged thats shocking
hopefully shann will propose to khanak in next uodate...
thank god she told him everything lived it bbz..
thank you fir a wonderful update xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great... nicely written... so dhruv and khanak were about to get engaged?! 😲 Is that why she was scared? is this her past?... I'm glad she told everything to shaan... I think shaan will ask khanak to be in his life... I don't think she will have a problem... as he's already accepted aayush! please continue soon... Can't wait for the next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO😊
Thanks a lot to Kritika, mounika, heer, jaisy, saroj, aasma, rida, tina, pooja for liking it and commenting😊
Sorry guys, tomorrow i'll update the proposal part,but today i thought this part was necessary😊
pakka tomorrow i'll update a long one😊

Part 16

Khanak is standing in front of him, her head bent down. Shaan had felt sudden feeling of hugging her and ensure her that he would never let go of her. He was confirm that it was just not attraction between them, he had seen his feelings growing, he was sure that he's so madly in love with her. His first attraction towards a girl had changed to love… His first love, Khanak. She'll be the first and last girl in his life…

Shaan moved closer to say it to her. Dhruv enters…

Dhruv: Kandy tum yahan ho, kandy please voh paranta bana de na, bahut bhook lagi hai (he holds her hand and pulls her out, this irks Shaan, but silently follows them) They are in kitchen now.

Shaan: tum dono ek doosre ko kab se jaante ho?? (curious) Khanak is about to answer…

Dhruv: when Khanak was 6, hai na Khanak(Khanak nods) our first meet, actually I had shifted near her house… (smiles fondly at her) (Shaan thinks what was he doing at that time)

Khanak is busy with her atta and her running thoughts in mind about Shaan…

Shaan: nice (not smiling)

Dhruv: aur pata hai Shaan, I was the first one in Khanak's life…(shaan thinks, so what but I'll be there with her forever)

Dhruv: aur Khanak hamari first date yaad hai?? (playfully)

Shaan: date??? (looks at Khanak, she doesn't have any expression)

Khanak: haan haan wohi date, jispe tumne mujhe choddkar kissi doosre ladki ke saath chalegaye the, Shaan Dhruv was Casanova (Shaan is relieved but Dhruv is not )

Dhruv: agar mein apni aur tumhare relationship ke bare mein serious hota tho, mom aise nahi karti, forget it… pata hai Khanak, I did that to make u jealous (smiles)

Khanak: how mean Dhruv!! Waise I didn't feel jealous, bcoz I know you well… (shrugs)

Dhruv: then why did you leave?? Wait kyun nahi kiya??

Shaan: you walked out??!!!

Khanak: yes I did!! What do you wanted me to do, sit their and wait for you?? Ooohhh Im not that kind of girl. Shukar manao maine apna dad ko nahi bataya!!

Dhruv: pata hai pata hai!! Aur sunn voh parante mein…

Khanak: pata hai extra butter!!

Shaan: Khanak mere liye bhi paranta, but no butter!!

Aayush come running, mom mera waala kaha hai???

Khanak: sorry guys, my first attention is towards Aayush (gives him his plate, he takes it runs off)

Dhruv shows mock upset and Shaan smiles.

Dhruv: mujhe laga tha I was the first one in your life… Khanak shrugs.

Khanak: priorities change my dear!!

Shaan and Dhruv waits, Khanak brings 2 plates in front of them, she offers them, both of them take. Dhruv is happy that she still give importance to him in her life, S haan is also happy that even he's important in her life…

After that Shaan had left promising that he'll back in evening with his family. Khanak and Dhruv are seated, they are sipping their coffee. Aayush has gone out for playing…

Dhruv: Khanak don't you think its early??

Khanak: what??

Dhruv: u know tumhara aur Shaan ka??

Khanak: yes I agree its early, but the thing is we are clear about her feelings, I don't know where it takes us, but we are just flowing… I don't know…

Dhruv: chill!! Main hoo na !! (winks at her)

Khanak: Dhruv tum bhi na… waise yeh bataao tumhe koi ladki pasand aayi ki nahi aayi??

Dhruv: actually mein yeh soch raha tha (with a mescheivous look, moves closer to her)

Khanak: ha ha ha, very funny!! (she runs off and throws a cushion at him, both friends fight like that for sometime, after sometime, both of them sits exhausted)

Dhruv: Khanak im happy for you!!! Khanak smiles…

Shaan is back at his home, he's informed to his family, that it was Khanak's birthday, all are excited. Khushboo and Madhvi goes for shopping to buy her a gift. Shaan is in his room, Dadi enters…

Shaan: Dadi!!! Aapko kuch chaiyiye tha??

Dadi: meri bare mein chodo, toh what have you planned to gift Khanak?? (seats herself on the couch, Shaan seats himself on bed, opposite to Dadi)

Shaan: no idea Dadi!! Uppar se uka dost bhi aagaya hai, aur tension bada di meri (frustrated)

Dadi: kaunsa dost??

Shaan: who Dhruv, dadi…

Dadi: Dhruv!! Aagaya??

Shaan: haan!! Aapko kaise pata??

Dadi: haan Khanak ne bataaya mujhe!!

Shaan: usne aapko sab bataadiya!!

Dadi: haan!! Abb voh sab chodo socho kya gift doge..

Shaan: kamal hai yaar mujhse pehle uske bare mein sab jaante hai, aisa lagtha hai, main hi last hun!! Forget it!! Aap hi batao na dadi…

Dadi: tum use apna pyaar ka izhaar kar do!!

Shaan: dadi, bahut jaldi nahi ho jayega??

Dadi: arrey Shaan, jab pyaar hai, toh intezaar kyun??

Shaan: baat toh teek hai!! Lekin…

Dadi: lekin wekin kuch nahi!! Tumhe use aaj hi kehna hoga!!

Shaan smiles at his dadi and decides to tell her that he's madly in love with her….

coming up: shanak's first dance and Shaan's proposal

Please comment😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update Chandu
Kitchen scene was vry nice, first paratha for Aayush n then for shaan n Dhruv
Dhruv knew abt Khanak n shaan's feeling hp he do something to make them close n nt act like vilan 😆
Dadi is super cool wat an idea lolzz
ehsi dadi saab ko mile 😆
he's gonna propose her n dance with her wow!!
plz long update tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it cant wait fo rthe proposol, hopefullt dadi and dhruv can convince khanal that shaan us the one no matter what happenes...

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! it was awesome shan loves khanak yayyy dhruv kabab mein haddi never mind but he knows about khanak and shan thats quite shocking bcoz if he knows he is cool with it i mean he also wants to marry khanak isnt it then?
wat next update is proposal update and shanak dance OMG OMG OMG cant wait till tomorrow plz do make sure to update tomorrow:)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
hmm i liked it that dhruv is happy for her that there is sumone else too
kya comfort level hai k pehli date pe kisi aur k sath chala gaya
whenever there is ayush in any interaction it always makes it more cute
hmmm to finally burthal ko dadi ne idea de diya
i cant wait for tomorrow... shanak dance proposal
hmm as they are goin with the flow i wish usi flow main yes kehday
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey chandana all parts r nice..sorry for late reply..now a days i am busy with work...i really like this dhruv...he is so carring and lovely...waiting for shanaks first dance and proposal...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey chandu coudnt comment on previous part...i jst loved itt yaar...

n confessin??????? OMG m sooo exited ...😆😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely update...
excited for shaan's proposal...

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