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Posted: 13 years ago
loved shaan' confession...he is so cute!!!!!!!!!
waiting for shanak marriage...
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Posted: 13 years ago

finally d confession part...😊 wonderfully written...

khanak is happy dat all her love ones r der wid her...n shanak went to garden...

after saying 'its too early' soo mny times n confessed his love...😆 khanak accpted...bt dint confeesed her love...shaan has tooo wait fr dat...😆

n deir couple dance...😍..wats gonna happ nxt cant wait..😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!! lovely update
finally shaan confess n said i love u
bt when it come fo khanak , she needs some time lol
it reminds me of RBO
shaan said she cn talk to some one bt nt more then him heheheheh
Druv followed them n see shaan proposing khanak he's happy bt little sad
glad dat he make them dance as couple
shanak dance loved it :)
awating for shaan to announce at his family n see marriage preparation
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Chandana

I am sooo Sooo Sooo Sorry dear for beng MIA :( was badly tied up in something, Read all the updtaes today & wow what a beautiful way of discription & trun of image everything was Sooo Perfect just like a beautiful fairy tale :)))

Awesome ... Awesome ...Awesome ...Awesomeee it was awesomest dear I loved reading it, khanaks bonding with family, Dadi being cupid :) Khanak releaved her past & Shaan finally praposed her ,,,,,,,,,Ubber cuteee :))

Today update was super cute & Spcially the Song selection was perfect :) I love that Song, their First dance wow u made it memorable dear, The satisfaction the happiness the Joy, LOve, care all was visible from your writing :))) reading about their Dance & LOve was Sheer bliss.

I loved the way u have discribed khanak's & shaan's outfits, Not to forgot Aayush looked super dashing :) khanak received gift Wow what a beautiful gift her pic large :) Superb a beautiful reason to Smile :)

Shaan's confession was SUperb i am specchless after reading that part, the way he had praposed her speaks about his love & honestly ...Awesome :) I loved Dhurv too ...Smart & decent :) he is happy for khanak :))

Shanak convo was super cute, naya naya confession, pyar ka izhaar & yeh sharmana haaye!!! beautifully written

Super loved the update :))))))

Sorry for the ajeeb comments as i got super excited after reading all the parts :P So wrote stupidly

Waiting for next one ...Jaldi dena

LOve
Pranjal.


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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO 😊
Sorry im in a hurry, im posting a short one, im really sorry guys next update will be a long one i promise, last time please forgive😊
Thanks aasma, rida, heer, maneesha, mounika, Sneha, neethurose, krithika, maneesha(yasharanrox) for liking it and commenting😊
@Jaisy- i've planned one, but not today😊 Thanks a lot jaisy for comments..😊
@ shonai - Thanks a lot priyashree😊 hope you like it further😊
@ pranjal - hhhiii 😃 that's ok, thanks a lot for your long comment, it makes me so overwhelmed, thanks a lot😊

Part 18

Khandelwal's had left after the dinner, they've reached back home. Shaan is very happy'

Shaan: mom dad, aapse kuch baat karni thi'

Sunil: haan beta bolo.. (all of them are seated in living hall)

Shaan: Dad Mom' I' ve decided to get married'

All of them are shocked, Sunil and Dadi are not'

Sunil: Aur woh ladki Khanak hai' (smiling, Dadi is also smiling)

Shaan: yes dad!! (broadly smiling)

Madhvi: Khanak!! Omg Shaan!! Sunil tumhe pata tha??

Sunil: mujhe maa ne bataaya' All were happy with his decision, Madhvi had hugged him for his decision, Akshay and Khushboo were equally excited, Dadi promised him that she'll talk to Khanak about marriage'

Khanak, is in her room, standing in front of her parents photo'

Khanak: Dad Mom im so happy today, I wish ki aaj aap mere saath hothe, koi problem nahi abhi bhi mujhe lagtha hai ki aap log mere saath ho, aap mere saath ho na'(A sudden knock at the door, her friends are staying at her house)

She opens the door, its Raj'

Raj: did you get the message???

Khanak: what message??? (comes out of the room)

Raj: woh conference jo ek hafte ke baad hone wala tha, its going to be on tommorow's afternoon' (yells)

Khanak (shocked): are you sure??

Raj: damn sure!! And one more thing, we were working on two different things, but now we'll be working on the same topic!!

Khanak: Raj, I'ne done only half part yaar!

Dhruv: arrey kya hua?? They explain to him everything, she assures him that he'll help. All are seated in hall, even Misha and Aayush, both of them are watching cartoon'

Khanak phone rings, she receives with it without seeing the caller'

Khanak: hello??

Shaan: hello!! Can I talk to Dr. Khanak, who's soon gona become, Dr. Khanak Shantanu Khandelwal!!!

Khanak blushes at the mention of her name!!

Shaan: haaye haaye!! Blush kar rahi ho' (Khanak smiles).

Raj stares at her as she was not doing her work' She looks at him apologetically..

Khanak: Dr. Shaan, good you called, Raj bhi yahi hai, voh kya hai, kal afternoon conference hai na' (hinting him)

Shaan: conference?? Oh ya I got the message now!! So you are wih him now??

Khanak: haan!! Dhruv aur Misha bhi hai!!!

Shaan: oohh!! So your burning night oil???

Khanak: I think so!! (into her books)

Shaan: yeh tumhare friends kab tak rukhenge??

Khanak: Shaan!! They are my friends!!

Shaan: yeh sab abb teek hai Khanak, shaadi ke baad I won't tolerate'(hides a smile)

Khanak: Shaan!! (smiling) ok abb mein rakthi hun haan , nahi toh Raj mujhe nahi chodega'

Shaan: apne doston ke liye, mujhe door kar rahi ho' (mock upset)

Khanak: nahi Shaan!! You know how much important that conference is, right?? (sincere)

Shaan: relax Khanak!! I was kidding, achcha listen, are you free in afternoon??

Khanak: I don't know, kal subah tak presentation ready ho jayega toh, yes im free!! Kyun??

Shaan: I thought, can we both of them, go on a lunch date???

Khanak smiles'

Shaan: smile karne se kuch nahi hoga!! (smiles) Im waiting Khanak!!

Raj is ready to kill her, Dhruv is trying to control his laughter'

Khanak: (clears her throat) Shaan, I'll meet you tomorrow!!

Shaan: teek hain, I'll wait' Both of them smiles and cuts off the phone'

Raj: ho gaya tumhaara' abb kuch kaam kare' Dhruv can't control laughs out loud, Khanak hits him with a cushion'

Khanak: Raaj yaar chill!!! Once again pour themselves into their lappy's and books'

Please comment😊
once again im sorry for the small update😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it wil rrry to comment later xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
yes its short but its ok atleast u updated i was doubting whether u will update today😊
WOW!!! i loved the cuchie cooing of shan and khanak on phone how he addressed her as dr.khanak shantanu khandelwal was so sweet man i already know that his family will be happy for their marriage loved raj frustrations and dhruv's laugh i was also laughing like hell while reading it
waiting for next r u updating tomorrow bcoz i cant wait for the next u know plz can u give us update tomorrow😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
update is short lakin it was lovely
Shaan n Khanak conv was very nice
wow shaan!!! abhi se hi Dr Khanak Shaantanu Khandelwal not bad yaar
sahii jaraheho 😆
shaan making her ☺️ blush n Raj OMG!!! staring her 😆
shaan won't tolerate her friends after Marriage kya baat hai shaan abhise hi 😊 lolzzz
Dhruv control his laughter bt nt for a long time 😆 poor Raj lolzzz
loved their friendship
sweet update chandu
thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol shaan wont tolerste khanak's friends after marriage...something interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!

short but sweet update chandu...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy Chandu
that was cute & funny update...loved the way he addressed her as Dr. Khanak Shantanu Khandelwal & her blushing.❤️
I was laughing imagining Dhruv controlling his laughter.😆
toh Shaan isn't going to tolerate her friends after marriage,,,wow!!
well, actually i always love Jealous & passionate Shaan, so would love to see that...😉
update soon

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