RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 18

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hey u said that u will update today when r u updating

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sorry (holding my ears) couldn't update yesterday, problem in the net cord😊
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Part 17

The party is arranged in banquet hall, which was in her aapartment surroundings. All of them from her apartment were invited.Her friend Misha had come from Australia, Misha is married. They were meeting after 2yrs, she was excited to see her. She's wearing a blue anarkhali dress, which is sleeveless, and the top is below her knee, her hair is left in curls, with minimal make up she's looking gorgeous' Aayush had dressed well, as it was his mamma's choice, he's wearing red t-shirt with a coat, she pecks him on his cheek, as he's the most hansdsome boy for her. She was told that her friends were giving her surprise, she had no idea, but yes she's eagerly waiting for it. And yes she's waiting for a person, who has become special in her life without her knowledge'.

Shaan and his family has reached,he's wearing white shirt with black blazer and dark blue jeans, cleanly shaven, some of his hairs falling on his forehead, he's searching for her. He can see Dhruv and Raj with a girl. Dhruv, Raj and Misha moves towards him,Misha is introduced to him, and he introduces them to his family. Introductions are made...

Sunil: arrey birthday girl kaha hai??

Misha: yahin to thi!! (Everyone looks around) She enters with Aayush, smiling, Shaan is bowled by her smile. Everyone wishes her, she hugs Khushboo and Madhvi and takes blessings from dadi'Aayush is also greeted by everyone, Shaan smiles at Khanak, Khanak returns the smile' They are disturbed by a voice; all of them turn towards the voice, its Dhruv, accompanied by Raj and Misha.

Dhruv: Hello everyone present here, thanks for coming, please bless our Khanak, ki use thoda akal de, u know brains.. (everyone laughs, Khanak gives him a look like, tum kabhi nahi sudhroge)

Dhruv: ok sorry, I was joking, hamari jo Khanak hai, humne use naam diya tha laughing doll, but I don't think that name suits her now, voh kya hai, smile zaroor karthi hai, lekin teek se hasna bhool gayi hai'

Misha: sorry haan, bahut lecture deta hain (dhruv gives her a really!! Look) Dhruv jo surprise hai use dikhana'

Dhruv: ok fine!! Khanak humne, matlab, mein,Raj aur Misha, ek aisi tasweer de rahe hai, jismi hamari Khanak ki voh hassi, jo uski aankhon mein dikta tha, use voh de rahe hai, taake whenever she sees the photo, it reminds of us' They hands her a large photo, which is covered by gift cover. She opens it with a smile, she's happy to see the photo

Her eyes is filled with tears, there's a group hug' Shaan smies at the bonding they share'

She thanks her friends. She's really happy, she has the same smile as in the photo for her friends'

They hear another voice, this time its Shaan's voice'

Shaan: Sorry guys for disturbing, mein Khanak ko itni achchi tarike se nahi jaante hun, lekin phir bhi yeh zaroor keh saktha hun, ki voh aap sab ki liye kitni special hai' A very very Happy Birthday Khanak!!!

Khanak smiles and whispers thank you!! Party is full on, Aayush is enjoying happily with everyone. Khanak stands away from them she looks at everyone, everyone's smile. She remembers her family, they wouldn't have thrown such a huge party, she would never wanted that, she would have wished them to be with her. That's how her birthday was celebrated, only with her family, now she's standing here in the middle of so many people, whom she knows well, who believes in her, now they've become a part of her life. She knows that, all of them love her a lot, they've shown her the love, she was carving, they had taken care of her and Aayush. She had considered herself lucky,to meet such good people in her life'

Shaan notices her standing away from the group, he moves towards her slowly.

Shaan: kya hua Khanak??

Khanak: kuch nahi!! Thanks for coming (smiles at him)

Shaan: Khanak mere saath baahar chalogi??

Khanak: baahar??

Shaan: Khanak trust me!!! (sincerely)

Something about that sincerely, Khanak easily nods, both of them walks out, Dhruv notices, he's a good friend of her, he cares for her, he silently follows them. Shaan brings her out of the crowd, it seems to be like garden, it's a full moon night, its cold. Khanak has no idea why Shaan has brought her out. Shaan stands in front of her, they are about 3 feet away'

Shaan: Khanak im not sure, whether its correct time or not..(takes a long breathe)

Shaan: Khanak!! Tu voh ladki ho, jiske saath mein apne saari zindagi bitaana chahtha hun' (Khanak is shocked, seeing her expression; Shaan moves forwards and holds both of her hands in his hands)

Shaan: Khanak!! I know its too early for you to decide, but I promise you I'll give all the happiness you deserve and yes I know that your happiness lies in Aayush, Im ready to accept him in my life, mujhe Aayush se koi problem nahi hogi, infact I'll consider myself lucky to look after him' Khanak,u said its attraction, but I guess my feeling has moved way far from it'

Shaan: Khanak!!!! I Love You!!! (her hands starts getting still more cold, her fingers start to tremble, Shaan can feel that)

Shaan: Khanak!! I seriously love you!! Pata hai jab ek din tumhe dektha nahi hun, toh aisa lagtha yeh ki, I've missed something important in my life, that whole day I'll be so annoyed, you can't even imagine' I just wish to see your face every morning, I don't want anything from you, I just want you by my side, I want you to be m y strength, I just want you in my life forever'.

Shaan: Khanak!! I can understand its too early for you to decide' I promise to be the reason of your smile, I mean even I want to see that smile back on your face' Khanak!! Tumhari har baat mujhe achcha lagtha hai, your eyes, your hair everything' whenever you sing I wish that you just do it only for me' I know im possessive, but my possissiveness won't harm yours and Aayush relation ' I don't know, whenever I see you with a guy I fell like my blood rushing into my head' you're the first girl in my life, I've been closer.. Khanak!! (cups her face) I really love you!!! Abb isse zyaada I seriously don't know how to confess, but whatever I've said till now, is all truth, you can trust me Khanak!!!! (Khanak smiles, her eyes filled with tears)

Isn't this what she wanted to hear, yes she was ready to spend her whole life with him, is this what they call love?? Still she has no idea. But she was sure about her feelings, she had never felt like this even when Dhruv had proposed her, she had left that decision for her parents, she had never felt so good not even in Dhruv's company'. She's happy right now!! Isn't this what she was expecting!!!!

Both are looking into each other eyes!!!

Shaan: kuch kaho' (his hands are now holding her bare arms)

Khanak smiles, slowly moves towards him, slowly hugs him, her head resting on left side of his chest, silently hearing to his heartbeat, which was beating very fast. Her hands st his back, eyes closed. Shaan also slowly engulfes her, even his eyes closed, both are lost'.

Khanak: This is the best day of my life!!!

Shaan: mine too!!! (still engulfed)

Dhruv is watching all this, he's happy for her, yes it hurts for him, but he had grown since when she had walked ouy of his relation, he's happy that she still consider him as a friend. He had seen her smiling like before in front of Shaan. He had heard about him, with Raj, he had got to know that Shaan was quite famous and a good doctor. Dhruv also liked Shaan's family a lot. He's sure now that her friend will be happy!!! He had proposed her, because he liked her a lot, and she knew him very well, how can anyone not like her!! He smiles, shakes his head and leaves from there'

After sometime, Khanak releases herself from hug. Khanak is shy, she's looking down. Shaan rubs his hand on the hair at nape of his neck. Shaan looks down, cups her face and makes her look at him

Shaan: so Dr. Khanak, are you ready to accept me in your life???

Khanak: lekin Shaan, I don't want that boyfriend and girlfriend relationship'(worried)

Shaan: Khanak, im talking about marriage, main aaj hi mom dad se baat karta hun!! (promises)

Khanak smiles and moves away from him. Shaan grins and oves towards her, her back towards him.

Shaan: waise Khanak, I said I Love You!! Don't you think you should reply??? (smiles naughtily)

Khanak is still a hard nut, she turns back to him confidently, arms crossed in front of her'

Khanak: itni jaldi no way Shaan!! You have to wait (smiles gloriously) and turns back to leave'

Shaan: haaye kitna intezaar karvaaiyegi!!! (places his hand on his heart, playfully)

Khanak turns back smiling, Khanak: abb chalein!!!

Shaan: ek minute Khanak!! No problem I'll wait for you, but promise me that you won't move with anyother guy (Khanak is confused) mera matlab yeh hai ki, you can look at them, you can talk but not more than that!!

Khanak: your impossible!!! (shakes her head)

Shaan: I know!! Both of them smiles and moves towards the hall'

As they enter the hall, light gets dimmed, both of them looks around.

Dhruv: guys its time for some dance, why can't we have a couple dance??!!

Shaan is smiling hearing the word couple's dance. Khanak is confused, who's gonna do a couple dance in a birthday party'

Dhruv: ok now lets start with couples, obviously husbands wives ke saath dance karenge, agar aap logon ke paas girlfriends hai toh mein kuch nahi kar sakta (everyone laughs) now coming to singles, let start with Khanak (K is surprised) (Dhruv comes near Khanak, puts his hand on her elbow, like a side hug) lets see, how about Shaan?? Khanak!! (Shaan is excited) (Dhruv slowly in her ears, im happy for you Khanak, Khanak looks at him, he smiles and slowly moves her towards Shaan) enjoy guys!! (he leaves)

Shaan offers his left hand to her, there's loud cheering from the crowd Khanak!!! Khanak looks towards Dhruv, he does an affirmation by nodding, she smiles at him and looks at Shaan. She slowly places her left hand on his hand, he brings her to the centre. All the other couples start the dance.

He places her left hand on his left shoulder, holds her right hand in his right hand, slowly engulfes her petite waiste with his left hand, song starts-

Soniyo.. O Soniyo..

Tumhein Dekhta Hoon To Sohcta Hoon Bas Yehi

Tum Jo.. Mera Saath Do..

Sare Gum Bhola Ke, Jee Lu Muskuraake Zindagi

Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath

Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat

Tu Bas De De Mera Saath - 2

(Oo Tujh Mein Hi Dekha Hai, Mene Manzil Ko

Tujh Mein Dhadkan Mili Is Dil Ko' - 2

Bin Tere Kadmon Tale

Raahe Nahi Hai Tujhe Mein Kahi Hai, Meri Zameen

Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath

Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat

Tu Bas De De Mera Saath - 2

O Sun Le Yaa Padh Le Tu, Meri Khamoshi

Hai Jarurat Teri Saanson Jaise.. - 2

Tujh Se Hi Sab Kuch Mila..

Ek Tu Nahi To Mera Yahan Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath

Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat

Tu Bas De De Mera Saath - 2

Mera Saath Mera Saath - 3

The song wants closer moves, they are free with that. Shaan makes her twirl around, her top flows with her, they are closer to each other feeling the song, that's what he meant in his confession, he just needs her in his life, didn't he???

Please comment😊

i've searched so much for the song, hope you like it😊

the song is soniyo (from the heart) from raaz the mystery continues

Sorry wanted to post the picture of yashashri, it didn't get posted😔
no problem😊
hope you like it and i think its long enough😊
i want still more long, feel free to tell😊

wooow no problem,bbz
yep the update it long
woow loved the song choice
finallly or shaan sed I love u yayy cant wait for the next part
xxx

Heyy!! Chandu ... nice to c u here😃

awesome update
she is really lucky to have such ppl who lover her a lot
the confession was penned beautifully
simple yet romantic
koi doubt koi confusion nai ... he said it all
em glad the that he made it clear that he wants ayush too
when khanak said she doesn't want bf and gf relationship that was cute and innocent like she is
and em very happy that he is already clear that he wants to get married and he'll be talking with his family... and the khandelwals already love her and aysuh
now she'll be smiling and become that laughing doll again
the song selection is superb... ek dum fit
loved it
update soon

hey its ok yaar no need to feel so sorry i know that how sometimes net card sucks