RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 15

Nice update. Loved the convo. Glad that there getting to know each other. Khanak does seem like a tough girl. Shaan wanting to know if she had any boyfriends is cute... bichaara enrique... shaan nafrat paa raha hain. Can't wait for the next part. hmm... what is shaan doing at her house?! Please update soon.

wow lovely conversation between the two...khanak is opening up to shaan...loved it...

i loved the way khanak shared about her family to shan the conv bet two was sweet and touching 😊 and i loveee enrique he is so handsome:) love his songs

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Part 14

They are disturbed by her phone, her phone shows video calling, Khanak is excited seeing the caller, she excuses herself, she receives the call…

Khanak: Hey mish, itne dino ke baad, how are you?? Sab kaisa hai? I seriously can't believe u called me? (gushes into the phone, she can see her best friend)

Misha: hey khanak chill!! Abb bolne bhi degi, haan sab teek hai, aur mein bhi teek hun, aur tu kaisi hai?? Aur Raj??

Khanak: mish, sorry ya, itne dino ke baad tumse baat kar rahi hun na, issliye…

Misha: Khanak tum bhi na, you haven't changed a bit… Both of them giggle and talk for sometime… Shaan is watching everything with a smile. After sometime she ends the call, she come back to him and sits next to him…

Khanak: sorry, actually she stays in Australia, issliye itna unusual hour pe call agaya…

Shaan: how many friends do you have??

Khanak: I used to talk to everyone, but mere teen dost bahut khareeb hain…

Shaan: naam??

Khanak: ek raj hai, u know, and misha with whom I just spoke, and the last one actually he's the first one and that's Dhruv… Raj aur mish, they were in my batch, Dhruv was my senior, actually bestest friend I've ever got…

Shaan: Dhruv?? Where is he now??

Khanak: Dhruv is staying in San Francisco… haan mere bare mein bahut baat hogayi, abb aapki baari hain, tell me about your London life (all perked up)

Shaan: mere life mein aisa kuch nahi tha, yes I used to talk to people par mera ekbest friend, he's Samar. He's still in London…

Khanak: aur girlfriends?? (naughty smile)

Shaan: Khanak tumhe aisa lagtha hai ki meri koi girlfriend ho sakthi hai??

Khanak: kya pata woh tho London hai (shrugs)

Shaan (smiles) : aisa kuch nahi tha Khanak…. And they continue to talk about their favourites and their interests, until both feels sleepy. Both of them walks to their respective rooms and sleep takes over…

A beautiful morning, Shaan wakes up, gets freshen and moves towards dining hall, searching for a person in the whole house, but she's no where to be seen, Aayush is near the dining hall with dadi…

Shaan: good morning Aayush, dadi… (smiles)

Aayush: good morning uncle…

Shaan: aapki mom kaha hai?? (slowly into his ears) Aayush moves towards his ears.

Aayush: mom chali gayi…

Shaan: chali gayi (loudly)

Dadi: fikar mat kar, hospital gayi hai, unki senior ke call aaya tha, issliye chaligayi…Shaan smiles at the indication, eats his breakfast and leaves to hospital… In the hospital, both of them are busy, he was told that, she was in OT, he had appointments lined up,he waited till 3 for her, but she was not free, he left for his clinic. He returns to his home, hoping she would have returned. He enters and he's told that she's alredy left with Aayush, Shaan is upset. He enters his room, takes his phone and calls her. She picks it up in fourth ring… Not allowing her to speak.

Shaan: Khanak tum pagal ho hogayi ho, couldn't you wait for me pata hai subah se try kar raho tumse milne ki aur baat karne ki, aur tum ho ki….

Khanak: Shaan control, I was busy, pata hai mujhe lunch ke liye bhi time nahi mili, that operation took a long time (exhausted)

Shaan: did u eat something?? Can I bring something for you?? (concerned)

Khanak (smiles): thanks Shaan, but I ate…

Shaan: iss haalat mein bhi, you wanted to cook, couldn't you eat at home… (scolds)

Khanak: Shaan chill, woh Sarala aunty ne khaana diya..

Shaan: now who is this Sarala aunty???

Khanak: she's my neighbor, forget it!! When did you return from clinic??

Shaan: bus abhi aaya!!

Khanak: nice toh abb jao, dinner khalo, aur so jao…

Shaan (smiles): you want to get rid of me!!

Khanak: arrey nahi baba, its just that im totally exhausted…

Shaan: just kidding!!(smiles) Aayush so gaya??

Khanak: woh tho kab ka so gaya, even he was exhausted, shaayad zyaada khel liya!!

Shaan: good!! Ok then good night Khanak!! And sleep tight!!

Khanak: Thanks!! Good night to you Shaan!!

Both of them smiles and cut the call…

Sunday morning, its important in her life… She's running behind Aayush, making him eat

Khanak: Aayush stop, pehle khalo!! (still running)

Aayush: mom aapne parantha kyun nahi banaya?? Mujhe poha nahi khaana…

Khanak: sorry Aayush abb khalo, afternoon tak bana doongi…

Aayush: promise (stops running)

Khanak: pakka waala!! After Aayush eats quietly, though he won't like it… Bell rings, Khanak opens the door, is shocked to see the person in front!! Its Shaan, broadly smiling…

Shaan: hey Khanak !! andar nahi bulaaogi (coolly)He enters the house, Khanak is thinking may be its her dream, she pinches herself, no this is truth!!

Khanak: Shaan!! What are you doing here?? (following him, he's checking out the house)

Shaan: Aayush kaha hai?? As on cue, Aayush comes out, both of them greets, Aayush moves out telling he's going out to play… Shaan coolly sits in living hall, this time Khanak is confused…

She enters the kitchen, takes out atta for making parantha.

Shaan: you didn't tell me that you like parantha…

Khanak: I didn't tell because Im fine with it, its not that I love it!

Shaan: Khanak tumhe pata hai your such a hard nut to crack!! (shakes his head)

Khanak: thanks (fake smile) Shaan walks up to her… He is about to ask her, whether she needed any help, but her ladline rings, she's got one connection in kitchen, she switches on the loudspeaker.

Khanak: hello?? (Shaan is standing next to her)

Caller: Hey Kandy!! (Khanak is super excited hearing the voice)

Khanak: Dhruv!! (casuaally) What's up?? (Shaan wonders about him, she had not much spoken about him)

Dhruv: Kya yaar Khanak, ek hello bhi nahi keh sakthi!! (khanak smiles gloriously)

Khanak: pehle yeh bataao, ki call kyun kiya?? San mein toh abb night hogi na??

Dhruv: San mein hoga… lekin Mumbai mein toh nahi hai…

Khanak: kya matlab?? Are you in Mumbai?? (all perked up)

Dhruv: yes meri, sweet si pyaari si Khanak, abb darwaza toh khol de, nahi toh thodke andar aana hoga (listening the word 'meri', Shaan's anger is raising)

Hearing that statement, she quickly washes her hand and runs towards her door, Shaan slowly follows her. When she opened the door, she's greeted by balloons, and a good looking guy, singing happy birthday song for her…. He's carrying Aayush with him, Raj is present with him and her neighbors…

Dhruv comes in front of her, puts Aayush down…

Dhruv: I told you, this time I'll be with you for your birthday…

Khanak's eyes filled with tears, she's happy to see her childhood friend back, he was the support for her when she had lost her family… She hugs him, unmindful of the gaze… (friendly hug)

Khanak: I missed you!!

Dhruv: me too!! (hugs her back)

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oooh hopecully this dhriv will bring shanak together...
im sooo tired got back from work so only cud write this sorrry.
hope u understand xxx

Awesome update

super cute update
wow finally he lands at her home but many other ppl too
hmm ab raj nai to dhrub se jealousy... but its gud aur maza aayega
saying loudly chali gai and then dadi clarifying was super cute
hmm no hi and hello direct narazgi k mili nai was shoo shweet
it seems before getting info abt his schedule he checks where khanak is assigned
hmm so its her b'day em expecting a very shweet present from shaan to khanak
em liking that now they are at ease... khanak is gelling well wid him
update soon

OMG awesome update...loved it...

Great update... Awhh shaan is soo cute getting impatient to meet her... Dhruvs here?! so will we experiance a jealouse shaan?! Loved the way dhruv came wid ballons and singing happy birthday! please update soon.