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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello😊

Part 7

A casual Monday morning, Shaan's morning is wonderful, as he knows his destiny… Shaan is present in the lobby, Dr. Lata is also present, she's telling him to look over on an operation, which she was suppose to do. Shaan taking it casually, Dr. Raj and Dr.Khanak enters. She's just avoiding to look towards Shaan, but Shaan is starring at her. Khanak was suppose to assist Dr.Lata in operation but now…

Shaan: so Dr.Lata, Dr. Khanak is assisting me?? (with a sweet smile)

Lata: Sorry Dr. Shaan, Dr. Khanak is not assisting you, she wanted duty in ICU, so she's heading to ICU, don't worry Dr.Raj is going to assist you

Shaan is confused, looks towards Khanak, she's busy into the file, he's about to ask why?? But…

Khanak: So can I go?? (to Lata)

Lata: Sure Khanak, koi bi problem ho call me…

Khanak smiles, nods and leaves. Shaan thinks that she may turn around to look at him, but she doesn't…

She's standing in front of huge door with Aayush, both of them had changed, she's wearing a white kurta on jeans and a scarf around her neck. Aayush is wearing a cargo pant and a T-shirt…

Madhvi had called her in the afternoon, he couldn't tell her no, but she had told her that she'll be leaving early. Madhvi had agreed reluctantly. Aayush was more excited, she rang the bell, hoping that Shaan wouldn't be at home but….The door opened and there stood a handsome hunk and that's Shaan…. He's broadly smiling, Aayush is happy to see him, Khanak is in shock, her eyes wideopened.

Shaan: Hey Aayush (looking towards Khanak) lifts him in his arms

Aayush: Hello uncle, mom keh rahi thi ki aap nahi honge.

Shaan: achcha, aise kaise ho saktha hai, ki mein aapse na miloon (looking towards Khanak) Khanak is just standing looking at her feet. They enter in. Khanak looks around the house, she has a smile on her face.

Khanak: nice house (with a smile, looking around)

Shaan: Thanks (looking at her) Khanak remembers her reason of coming, she is silent.

Khanak: Madhvi aunty nahi hai?? (looking everywhere but not at him)

Shaan: mom pool ke paas hai, she wants you there, so chalein???

Khanak: Sure… They move towards the pool wordlessly, she's admiring the house, Aayush is still in Shaan's arms. Shaan is leading the way, by now he has felt that she was avoiding him, he just wanted to know the reason behind it…Madhvi is talking with some people animatedly.

Khanak: Hello aunty (with a smile)

Madhvi: Khanak!! Thanks beta for coming, aur woh bhi right time mein (hugs her, Khanak hugs back)

Aayush not to be left behind, screams Hello aunty!!! (to madhvi)

Madhvi: Hello Aayush, school hogaya, aapne kuch khaaya?? (asks sweetly)

Aayush: haan mom ne khilaya (smiles) aunty can I swim??

Khanak: no Aayush…

Madhvi: arrey Khanak rehne do, ofcourse beta u can!! Aapko swimming aati hain??

Aayush: nahi, if you have the tube I can manage!!

Madhvi: ok, lekin aap akele pool mein nahi utroge, Shaan beta help him

Shaan: sure mom, chalo Aayush. Both of them remove their shirts and jumps into the pool, Aayush is having great time with Shaan in the pool…

Madhvi: chalo Khanak, hum party ke arrangements deklethe hain!! Both of them are looking at catalogues for arrangements, in the meanwhile, Khanak keeps on glancing at Aayush, couldn't help but smile at the duo. Madhvi watches that, but remains quiet.

Shaan is also having great time with the kid, he had skipped going to clinic, to just meet Khanak, because she had not spoke to him directly the whole day It was like she's running from him, but he wanted to know the reason. There he was, wanting to know the reason, he had never done this for a girl sake, but now he was changing, but he believed that this change was for good, but now he was concentrating on Aayush, as he liked his company also….

Khanak: Aayush bahut ho gaya ab chalo, bahar aajao, otherwise you'll get cold

Aayush refuses to come out, Khanak: Aayush (sternly)

Aayush: OK (with a sad face) Khanak is searching for a towel here and there. Shaan notices that she doen't ask him.

Shaan: Khanak, towel is right there (points towards, the chair where towel was placed, he's still in the pool) Khanak reaches for it, smiles a thanks, looking at his eyes for the first time in whole day, she had noticed him working seriously in the hospital, when she had taken a break at the lunch. Aayush stands in front of her, she kneels down in front of him, and dries him up starting from his hairs, she makes him laugh my tickling Shaan is watching all this still standing in the pool. Madhvi comes out and watches duo and Shaan.

Madhvi: chalo Shaan tum bhi bahar aajao (Shaan nods at his mother and gets out of the pool)

His vest and pant is sticking to his body, Khanak attention is drawn towards him, but she manages to distract herself by looking at Aayush. She moves out telling that she'll bring Aayush clothes…

She returns back and asks Madhvi about Aayush, she tells that Aayush is taking shower in her room. She tells the direction to her room, Khanak hesitatingly moves towards, her phone rings, she takes it, its Dr.Lata, she had to do her presentation, while talking, she takes a wrong turn, instead of moving towards right, she moves to left, she reaches a room, she opens the door, she can hear shower running, she continue talking and moves towards the window… Door opens, she's still on the phone, she didn't hear it opening. It's Shaan's room……

Please comment😊 if you feel im dragging it, please let me know, as its my first story😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shaan is so cute he has skipped clinic to meet khanak...superb...
loved shaan and aayush bonding...
khanak in her future's room...excited!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww nah bbz u aint dragging it its goood at its pace, but I woupd want them to confess and get married loool thats my gake but the rest is upto u x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ktym

shaan is so cute he has skipped clinic to meet khanak...superb...

loved shaan and aayush bonding...
khanak in her future's room...excited!!!!!!!



Thanks a lot😊 may i know your name??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

awww nah bbz u aint dragging it its goood at its pace, but I woupd want them to confess and get married loool thats my gake but the rest is upto u x



Thanks a lot aasma😊
they will, but it'll take time😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandu8881



Thanks a lot😊 may i know your name??


hiee...this is mounika...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

awee shaan skipped clinic to meet khanak...so sweet...

n khanak avoiding him hmmm...shaan n auysh r really getting along very well...😊

n khanak enterered in shaan's room...😲 wats gonna happ.

update soon...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice she avoiding him and he trying to know why she is doing that he will get toknow very soon he is smart enough in these things😆

ohhh so khanak is in shan's bedroom oh i m having goosebumps i think hot update is in pipeline😉
and no u r not draaging it the flow of the story till now is awesome plz continue in this way only
waiting for next update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update
Khanak avoid him from Hospital poor shaan he thought khanak will
assist him bt no Raj takes dat place
confuse shaan just stared at her 😆
Khanak at Khandelwal house
love the bonding between shaan n Aayush
OMG! Khanak in shaan's room 😆
now how will she avoid him Lolzzz

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