Dohraha: Tale of Crossroads:Update&Note Pg 22 6/9

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

That was a great update Jenny!😃

And uumm...eerrr..!I'm actually liking Armaan-Khanak!😳
This guy is honestly trying to give it a chance! And I'm loving it! Please,dont let him act negative!😳

Edited by Xx-Shama-xX - 12 years ago

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Meine kuch aur socha...par armaan talking starting their relation afresh.
Awaiting d next part..

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Nice yaar 😊

always loved shaan and Darya's bonding n now with khanak

he said to call him shaantanu

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jenny159

@jenny159

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: poo_j
Awesome!!! Really like how you dissect the story into parts and write abt the four main protagonist 😊

Shaan is as busy as ever in his work and didn't care to go and see Raina immediately when his mom voice mailed him..they ve a complex relationship...😕

I like Armaan(KSG) too..😃 he cant be blamed for the situation with Khanak..he has his own life style..he bounded by his father..he could ve refused the marriage in the first place but went on with it due to his respect for his dad..and pretending his life now 😭

Awww!!! Khanak is a sweet heart..😃didn't even feel bad waiting long with Darya..instead loved the time she spend with her..Awww!!! He is insisting her to call his first name..cute!!!

Raina is also a strange character..😕even she needs Shaan's love..but curious to know what is the actual problem between them???

Wow!!! Khanak is making Espersso for Armaan..😳 liked how he calmly explained the process to her..and the kiss 😳 cute!!! he earnestly wants to give their relationship a chance..👏 her thought on Espresso significance...will it open many new things??? 😉

Looking forward and thanks for writing 😊

P.S : was a silent reader and will comment hereafter 😊

Thank you for your lovely and LIVELY comment as the emoticons are just wonderful in really seeing your FEELINGS about the update through! I like Armaan as well...and i plan on exploring his character as well...thank you so much for being able to relate to his character...
Raina remains a strange character up until now and probably in a few coming updates as well...she has got a very different approach to life and love...almost opposite of Shaantanu...
Darya-Shaantanu-Khanak will have these subtle moments in the future as well...
I am hoping and praying to keep this story interesting and running...

P.S: I love the transition you have made from silent reader to an active one!

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jenny159

@jenny159

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: RB81
Meine kuch aur socha...par armaan talking starting their relation afresh.
Awaiting d next part..

Hey Ramani!

What was it that was on your mind...?? do share if you want
Yes, Armaan is talking about a fresh start with khanak...lets see how that goes...
Thanks for the feedback!

-J

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jenny159

@jenny159

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz
oh THANK GOD u r continuing
i love this ff very much its really very different shanak married to someone else then how they will come together its really very exciting so thanks to u that u r continuing plzzz continue it
about the update it was lovely ofcourse
i like shan and khanak's conv on school
arman aye hayeee kiss on the cheek i love arman too so first time ever i dont mind arman kissing khanak instead of shan first time i felt this small gesture very romantic woh shanak nahi hai toh bhi
but i dnt understand kya woh kisi aur se pyar karta hai ya kuch aur baat hai ? but i love him anyway
munchkin is sooo sweet
raina is selfish i think thodi si lets c who is this robert

can u plzzz tell when will u update next andaje se hi sahi plzzz
hope u update soon 😊

Yaay! another Armaan supporter! lol...I don't want people to hate him or Raina for that matter...the story will evolve around these four main characters and its going to be long road to get to just Shanak...i don't put this tale in a "boy-meets-girl-falls-in-love" category as it isn't at all that...
Robert's back story is going to be developed as well soon...and i hope you are able to see the reasons behind Raina's characterization...from the very get go she has been different than Shaantanu...they are nowhere close to a perfect couple because they never were...

THANKS FOR THE AMAZING FEEDBACK!

And i am just waiting for this coming weekend...i have got two exams this week...but will try and get one update done by Friday night if all goes well...also expect more updates during Thanksgiving break...back to back...
-J

Edited by jenny159 - 12 years ago

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

And yes Jenny, as I love this concept of yours, I so not want it to be like KANK!

Armaan is being really good and considerate towards Khanak, and is sincerely trying to give them a chance..! I feel, Khanak should do the same! Bcoz, when someone cares for you..finally, its always like..you end up caring for them too! And I do understand her uneasiness at this point of time..but I hope, she gets over it! :)

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Paridhi

@-Paridhi-

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Any chance of this FF getting updated ??

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jenny159

@jenny159

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

I know you gals have been nothing but patient and kind towards my delay in updating this FF...please stick with me until Winter break which is not that far for us in the U.S...i will try my best to put out regular updates and even have some in written in advance...this story requires an undivided mind and i don't want to mess it up by hurrying and writing something that will just drag the story. Till then please enjoy, random fluff tales of ShaNak in weekend with Shanak!

-Jenny

Edited by jenny159 - 12 years ago