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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tofeees

May you're going to wait for the WEEKEND!?! that's AGESSS awayyy!!! :O read it abhee naaa!! Pleaseee!

Okay😳...I will read it tonight...But I want to take my time...It's the last part soo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome blossom 👏👏

i loved it

but it made me cry too...😭. the ending the epi is beautiful but sad that it came to end

but all gud things comes to an end😊

loved shaan sulking at the RB part and loved that it was celebrated for a week long😆

wht natasha said at the revelation of her dad was really nice coz shanak were destined to be one and same is the case with tasha and gaurav👍🏼

she wanted khanak to be chooti maa ... that was shoo shweet😍

hmm each mor he thinks that they made a baby... shoo cute😉

hmm he got 66% ... that has to make khanak really proud she got one more chance to tease him😛

he doesn't like her teacher ... that was cute

the poem in the starting... hayeela my fav😍

picturing khanak singing for a cute baby girl was to die for... i was grinning imagining it

they had twins... wow... that completes the family portrait

the picz they had in their room ... that was fantastic ... exactly the way it shd be👍🏼

loved that u added the kids part in the end and wow sameer and asha... it was superb

loved it beeni,... lukin fwd to more os ss and ff from you

a big hug to u fror giving such a wonderful ff🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
You really did make me cry Beeni😭❤️...Superb conclusion to a beautifully written tale👏⭐️...Puri life story hain saamne...I want RBO back😭...I want ShaNak/YashAran back on-screen!!!...I pictured the whole cast as I read tthe last two updates...As I always do...
Loved how you encompused all the different themes RBO represented...From Khanak's relationship with all the Khandelwals, to Shaan fufilling his dream and supporting the family business...Loved his small scene with Sunil Uncle!😃...And ShaNak's love!!!😃...The crowning glory of it all...Always knowing what the other needs and the pride they take in their love & marriage...Makes me cry with happiness😭😃❤️...
Khanak completed her studies and ShaNak are finally blessed with a complete family...Then Khanak was further blessed to have the love of her nieces and nephews...Khanak's remembers Mitul as her Bhaa and Shaan's conversation with Natasha...I am glad Natasha and Shaan were also given a chance to know the truth...And it's cute how you paired Asha with Sameer😊...Loved it 👏⭐️...
I was shocked at how Mr Agarwal's truth was revealed to them...But I always wanted that secret to be out and there it is...Loved ShaNak's emotional scene, when Khanak told Shaan about Mr Agarwal⭐️😭...I love their love⭐️😍...I so wish YashAran had enacted that scene!!!...And the ' Shantanu ki suhagaan ' scene too!!!😍...
Your concluding line was simply heart-warming 😭😃...' Shaan and Khanak continued to revel in the luxury of their comfortable life with their children. '...Bless them, mish them and love them!!!!❤️😊...
Love you too Beeni...For giving us PA🤗...👏⭐️
Edited by The_May_Rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
not able to like ur posts... but what an awesome ending... loved it Beeni.. 👏👏👏
but sad that there wont be any more updates 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
@shalini - dont worry ...beeni will continue to write OSs ...but i will miss PA too .
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Posted: 13 years ago
beeni fantastic epilogue and beautiful ending.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ri8 nw i feel so heavy in heart...da last part was everythng emotion,love,care,rudeness n support everythng. Its feeling lyk one more tym rbo left us! Bennish no doubt u r a awesome brilliant writter. I always read dis ff lyk i watching Rbo. U made me agin all over emotiona. Da last line of last update bring tears in my eyes. I jst cant wounder hw much i love rbo n shanak! Abt Epilogue m speechless hw beautifully n talently u gave dis tale end no word to express...jst want to give u a hug! Wish to see u wid another tale on shanak soon! N I knw very wel perhaps tale or story 'll end someday bt our love 4 shanak n rbo r never ending... Sorry it deserve more dan lyk so i cant press like
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just logged in today to read PA !!!!

Awww ... WHY did u have to end it :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello everyone who read and loved Partial Amnesia! :D :D Just stopped by to say Thank you for everything! For your love and support and everything else that came with it, the confidence that I had in myself, the belief that became stronger and the realization that I can never love a fictional couple more than I love Shanak! <3 <3 The team of people who created Shaan and Khanak re geniuses and I can never thank them enough.

I have read ALL your commetns one by one and again and again and they are so very special and close to my heart <3 I will go througgh this thread whenever I feel sad and I am positive it will cheer me up! You love has been very precious <3 Love you all!

PS: I saw someone ask me what happened about Geeta :D Well Geeta got married to Sonia's (her friend who had hit on Mitul and Shaan at the cafe) brother and moved to London! So LOL she was not involved in delivering all those babies lol. Also I never said it but I have a confession to make now lol. Geeta's character was a LOT like mine. I made her like how I am in real life; and loads of people used to say that Geeta is so annoying and irritating LMAO it used to make me laugh and sad at the same time (though I know loads of people find me annoying but they love me more than that too)! LOLLL

PS 2: Also I imagined Asha to be a shy, delicate girl a bit like an introvert hence opposite to Khanak but with the same values, same eyes (and Shaan's dimples) Sameer was exactly like his father Mitul, in looks as well as smartness. So for all those who wanted the jodi of Yashu and Gaurav you kinda got it in Asha and Sameer here lol.

Again love you all and LOVE you for supporting me! Muahhh <3


Edited by tofeeees - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gaurav and yashu!
where is saira?!

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