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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Ammu_ShaNak
u hav successfully managed to make me cry . and the Mr.Agarwal part came as a total surprise to me .
Do send it to SWJ and YP as a gift for giving us Odhani , ShaNak, Kfamily, Tashu ...

hugs beenz! waitin for the epilogue ! it has something to do with the actual show's epilogue right? ;)

Hugss Ammu! Thank you! I thought this part was not very emotional so I'll just pretend you cried because it was the end lol😆. Will definitely send it to SWJ and YP just need their email addresses which I'll figure out somehow. And yes the epilogue has something to do with the actual epilogue of the show, so that the entire circle is complete AND also to show that this track was possible in the actual show as well!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Thank you ALL! Seriously I went to sleep last night thinking I had not done so well with the ending but seeing your comments has made me feel better :D Thank you Ramani, Rida, Aasm, Karishma and ktym :D Will definitely write a quick epilogue!

@Aasma: 🤗 Thank you SO much for commenting! Feels great that you have! hopefully will write more soon :D

@ktym: Stay tuned for the epilogue 😉

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janavi07

@janavi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

beeni... what the update yaar...

i am sad as well as excited whan i was reading this because this is last part of FF...😭

any way beeni...u fulfill my all wish...love each and every thing within this part...

Mittual and Natasha conversation was cute ... shaan and khanak conversation was super cute as well as so romantic ...shaan now become ideal husband ...he agree about the khanak decisions... Khushboo birth a girl ...that's was very nice...

and unexpected man entry i hate this man from beginning and at last i also hate this man ...

how the said like this to the khanak...i hate but...this man created the all emotion in shanak anniversary ...

shanak 2nd anniversary ...i am excited for this and really beeni u describe this very well...beeni u r great jo SWJ mam ne nahi kiya who tune kar diya ...hats of u beeni...

and the morning scene ...khanak red odhani...and Shaantanu ki suhaagan...

i crying this moment...so much miss them...

beeni Love u ...for this wonderfull update👍🏼

beeni abhi tak day not finish ...half day remain...of shanak anniversary...i want full day of shanak anniversary...

but now nothing to say...but ."dil mage more" beeni...

waiting for the epilogue...😍

21 august to 31 January...days memorial for me...i am not thanks to u...

but i want to hug...🤗. 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗because this 5th month u help me keep shanak memory always alive...

by beeni ...

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

It has gotta be the most beautiful ending ever in the history of FFs! Not that I read many!! Absolutely mindblowing. Everything else on one side, SHANTANU DRESSING UP HIS BRIDE on the other side. A SHOW STEALER!!!! Just beyond words to explain how I felt about reading that scene. Applying sindhoor showed his possessiveness. And Khanak in wet hair while Shantanu was draping the sari, added sensuality. And hid voice, I could so imagine. That deep and husky voice, authoritatively saying 'SHE IS HIS', awesome.

Just loved the intenisty you brought out in the scene

It was such a treat to read PA, Beeni!!! So closely related to the actual characters we fell in love with. How I wish to see YashAran doing this, even as a short story for few months.

Thank you for giving us such a beautiful story. You kept ShaNak alive for us. I know there is an epilogue but couldn't refrain from saying.