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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Hi Aditee 😊
Sorry for posting late had gone to Kolu at friends's place after work came just an hour ago
Read 204 C in the morning what an awesome update i loved each and every line of the part beautifully written 👏
I loved the last portion they way u mentioned Sooraj in a subtle way no one can forget their past

K: where is my dandiya

S: back pocket (whispers and laughs over her lips)

K: I want it

S: Get it!

She reaches for it''..

S: Why do you love it so much?

K: I do'.

S: Why? Did ur Dad buy it for you?

She is so carried away in throes of passion ... she puts her foot in her mouth elegantly...

K: Not Aada... (groans pushing herself against him pulling the carved sticks out...)

He stops, he knows who bought it...😭😭

She realizes the moment she says "Not aada"😭😭

He unlocks the door turns the light on and goes to his room, she stands there at the threshold of her "now/future" home, holding something from her past...

Shantanu understood it and he can never accept the fact u mentioned in ur post

He is just not able to digest the fact that she loved some one else at one point

The dead man continues to come in between, AND haunt him

I agree with @Anu Mouna Ragam song suits them it is my fav Mani Ratnam movie 😊

Part 205
Lovely part 😊
Khanak made eggs for Shantanu he is shocked
Excited to know what happens next...
Thanks for the lovely parts 🤗
Take care...

Good neend / Good morning to all

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neethurose

@neethurose

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Nice and lovely update
Hope shaan will not leave her alone and go to Mumbai. I hope he never leave her side.
To show how much she care about him she made eggs, that too on navrathri days. Nice move Khanak. 👍🏼
Now how can he abandon her and leave to mumbai 😊

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

that was beautiful, just loved the dymanic there Aditee! keep it up!

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ppriya_11

@ppriya_11

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Hey Aditee,

Nice to see ur posts. The updates are aweosme as usual.

Part 204 - He came to Dandhiya jus for her. wowww.😎

Part 205- Her fixing breakfast for him... that too EGGS in Navarathri speaks volumes of her love for him.. 😳 😳 I wish they understand each other more now.😍

Thanks again Aditee for beautifu update .👏👏👏👏👏

Thanks,

Priya P

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foreverRBO

@foreverRBO

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

wow!!!!

diwali approachng... n fireworks increasing here...

shaan going during mid week means he'll b spending weekend here na...

aditee!! plzzz zz say yes na...😍

den i totally dnt mind him going now!! 😉

lukng frwrd 2 1st among d dozens of weekends.. 😉😃😳

Edited by foreverRBO - 13 years ago

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Lovely update👏

at least they are talking ... i was scared😳

even this time she took the 1st step... nice😊

wow she made eggs for him😲

i guess this is the biggest shock of his life😛

making eggs and during navratri... pyar main log kya kya nai kar jaatey 😉

waiting for next... pz jaldi se

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

just luvve dit adi..sorry 4 being so late...

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casa-addict200

@casa-addict200

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Last few parts were just wonderful and left me speechless. You are such an amazing writer Aditee. Kudus to you. Loving how Khanak was trying to make a bridge between their relationships. She is trying to mend, isn't she? I hope Shan would be coming on the weekend and spend Navaratri with her. Thanks. Waiting for next parts of Casa.

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

one of my favs part so far...loved it...i always love it when khanak drops the ice-queen act...ohh i wish shaan didn't have to go...hope he comes back soooner than expected!!!!!

pls cont sooon

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isha2011

@isha2011

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

hey aditeee, loved all your parts, just read them all now, love the way the story is flowing, it has matured over the months... i won't be commenting for 4 weeks as i am going on holiday will miss casa dearly...if you do take it to wordpress when i am away can you please accept me its isha2011

take care

will come back after 4 week

all ready missing it

with love

Isha

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