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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

loved the update Aditee, keep it up! great descriptions!😎

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Anu80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

wow... went on a short vacation and missed so many updates.. awesome ones that too...

btw did I miss any updates between the pooja with kids and the dandiya night ??

@Aditee- I sent you requests in wordpress with Anu80 as userid... can you please accept it...

Hey its getting uber sizzling with each part and how you end the parts are brilliant... probably not the perfect song, but when I read the last update this is what came to my mind (mandram vande from mouna raagam):

thaamarai maelae neerththuli poal thalaivanum thalaviyum vaazhvadhenna
nanbargal poalae vaazhvadharku maalaiyum maelamum thaevaiyenna
sondhangalae illaamal bandha paasam kollaamal
poovae un vaazhkaidhaan enna sol

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IF_rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Awesome update aditee👏👏

Wow they are having fun….. by being together despite their reservations😉

I loved he's following her😊

He know her too well that she'll go back😛

Hmm finally he shows his concern … loved the fact that it's the 4^th time khanak😍

Haye the Beacon Hill memories even I was transported their after reading this😍

Haye I wished he had wrapped his arm around her waist😳 but even the statement worked well… shoo shweet😉

Haye he's clearing the fact that he doesn't know those gurls😃

Em luvin it that he 's still holding onto her finge😉r….. when he'll hold her and never let go😍

May this is the 1^st time em happy that ritu is not there😳

He'll share with her… super cute😃

"No! Whats mine is mine" (firmly)…. Very true he's all urs☺️

S: We are not in bed why do u need both………….. hayeela 😲

I was blushing ☺️

They both knew it wasn't the neighbor…………. Hmmm finally they are opening up🥳

The guuja samaja created the right atmosphere👏

K: Hes promised me the next dozen or so weekends, you shud give ur number to me! Once I am done, hes all urs, I can let u know (smiles)

Wohooo…………….. I juz loved it

Shaan: Dozen weekends? Huh?

Or the whole life 😉

Finally he has sent the driver back and the'' go home together🥳

Wow she is showing him that she she already missing he must be thrilled at the fact

His joy knows no bounds again, he smiles at the steering, "we are fighting like we used to" "She is so mad at me right now, I just need to get her home to bed" "MY bed"…… I wish aisa hojata😳

But the kiss makes up for that😍

And he might have done wht he thought but the past hits the reality and 😭

Poor gurl the beautiful nite left her now alone to deal with the past😭

the blue lines were to die for😍

Wonderful update👏

Eagerly waiting for next part…

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Ramani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Anu80
wow... went on a short vacation and missed so many updates.. awesome ones that too...

btw did I miss any updates between the pooja with kids and the dandiya night ??

@Aditee- I sent you requests in wordpress with Anu80 as userid... can you please accept it...

Hey its getting uber sizzling with each part and how you end the parts are brilliant... probably not the perfect song, but when I read the last update this is what came to my mind (mandram vande from mouna raagam):

thaamarai maelae neerththuli poal thalaivanum thalaviyum vaazhvadhenna
nanbargal poalae vaazhvadharku maalaiyum maelamum thaevaiyenna
sondhangalae illaamal bandha paasam kollaamal
poovae un vaazhkaidhaan enna sol

the song suits them..wat a song anu..

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aNsHu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

what a fab and looong update!!!!!!!!!!! absolutely loved it...can't believe shaan is leaving again...

my fav part was the ending...it turned from playful to emotional sooo fast that i was soo not ready or expecting it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful job

pls cont sooonnn...can't wait to see what happens next

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-Unknown-22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Beautiful lamba wala update...loved it..the play of emotions throughout...you had us all there at the end...we all thought something will happen between the two...something will happen when the two finally talk and resolve this separation...

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Aditi S

@aditee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Yes Jyo Sooraj gave her the dandiyas

How ever much she wants him and displays emotions of missing him and wanting to be with him

He is just not able to digest the fact that she loved some one else at one point

The dead man continues to come in between, AND haunt him

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shanakrocks1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: aditee
Yes Jyo Sooraj gave her the dandiyas

How ever much she wants him and displays emotions of missing him and wanting to be with him

He is just not able to digest the fact that she loved some one else at one point

The dead man continues to come in between, AND haunt him

loved the update...speechless!!!!

The dead man continues to come in between, AND haunt him...

but kab tak adi..?? i am with shaan, uska gussa jayaj hai. she has to take a step fwd and assure him that he is her future and present.

Edited by shanakrocks1 - 13 years ago

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Aditi S

@aditee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

PART 205

Vasant Vihar

23rd October 2012

7:44 AM

She is almost ready for work, her husband is not up yet.

She fixes eggs for him, Jamuna is sick so she hasnt shown up for work today. Her parents would be apalled if they found she was touching or handling eggs during Navaratri.

She wanted to fix him breakfast, she made a huge pot of his fave coffee

She wanted to go knock on his door next, but hears the door open, he is on the phone, his after shave wafts through the air.

She turns off the stove, has made herself paranthas and chai.

She takes it to the dining table, he is in the balcony

She has done her pooja already.

They had a comfortable hubby and wife dynamic going in the house. He didnt expect her to cook, or do his laundry, she didnt, she only cooked when the maid was not around.

She answered the phone or he did depending on who was near it.

He continued to eat or drink her share...

This morning was different

He was in the balcony, he wore silver and black pin stripe trousers and a white shirt.

He was folding his sleeve to 3/4th as he spoke

She opened the balcony door wide to let the morning air in.

He turned to look at her.

She stood there for a second giving him full view of herself

Turned to the dining table poured his coffee in a mug, picked it up and set it back, did that atleast 3 times, then picked it up again

While he watched it all...

Turned around walked hesitantly to the balcony and handed him his cup

He pretends to look for Jamuna