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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Update likhne degi kya? Dish kahin ki



Chal tu bina distrub hue likh ... main nahakar aati hoon ...

Aur kuch andey lekar aati hoon for b/f ... hope fully ek ghantey mein kkuch milega...an update with my b/f ??? degi na?

~Cheers,
Dish


Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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PART 194D

Bai picks up and says "Kaisi ho beta?" in the most compassionate tone in Gujarati.

It sends rivulets down her cheeks

"Hoon" she says for lack of a better word'..

Bai is very upset: kya hua? Ro kyon rahi hai?

Khanak: Ritu gayi Kritik ke saath ghoomne, main yahan akeli. Bai main ghar aa jaaon? Wahan mujhe pehle waali job mil jaayegi ( dejected and forlorn)

Bai: YAHAN?

Khanak: Haan

Bai: Aur Shaan ka kya hoga?

Bai inadvertently brings to fore the name of the man'' all his thoughts come flooding back to her mind

Khanak: Mujhe nahi rehna ab Dilli mein

Bai: 2 saal mein kitne baar jagah badlegi? Ahemdeabad se Mumbai, Mumbai se Dilli ab waapis? Beta ab shaadi ho chuki hai

Khanak: Phir bhi main akeli hoon na? (sad)

Bai: Shaan se baat karo, Aada ko boloon?

Khanak: NAHI! (wipes her tears furiously)

Bai: Aise kaise rahegi saari zindagi?

Khanak: Bus aise hi''.. Khanak Mistry hokar

Bai: Nashta kiya?

Khanak: Topic mat badlo aap, kya main Mistry nahi ban sakti?

Bai: Aada nahi maanenge. Kitna achha ladka hai Shaan, padha likha, kitna ameer, kitna achha dekhne mein'''

Khanak shuts her eyes, all the images roll in front of her eyes.

Khanak: Haan bus main buri hoon

Pause

Bai: Beta tu ghar aa ja, 2 4 din ke liye

Khanak: Aada ne mujhe kaha ki main tab tak nahi aaoon jab tak apni shaadi ka kuch kar na loon

Bai: Beta Aada ki baat bhi

Khanak: Phir main kabhi nahi aa sakti

She felt like being obstinate, wanted to sulk, wanted to throw herself into the arms of the man she so missed and cling to him

Bai: Dadi se baat karegi?

Khanak: nahi

Pause

Khanak: Aada kahan hai?

Aada: Bua ke ghar gaye hain, Sonali ke college se koi chithhi aayi hai who dekhne

Khanak: Kya?

Bai: Abi pata nahi

Khanak: Tabhi aapne mujhe chupke se call kiya?

Bai feels guilty

Khanak: Mujhe jaana hai

Bai: kidhar

Khanak: tailor ke paas

Bai: to theek hai

Khanak hangs up

Punches her pillow

"so many days" "she spent alone in ahemedabad when Sooraj would go to his parents', she would be fine, never once she complained, she would miss him and tell him, he would smile and nod"

"WHAT IS IT ABOUT THIS MAN?"

"Why is every moment such sheer torture?"

"Not seeing for 6 months had mentally strengthened her, his sudden appearance had ruined everything"

"Does he even have a clue how much I miss him?"

"Does he even know?"

"He never said a word about going to Mumbai, does it mean he does not care?"

"Why am I unable to spend an hour without thinking his thoughts?"

I LOVED solitude, why do I hate it now?

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye ... this is incomplete ... Shaan tho aaya hi nahi isme ... I want Shanakalicious one ...

Demand badhtey ja rahe hain ... iske pehle ki Adi jo hath mein hain woh uthakar meri taraf pheke .. main sach mein washroom mein ghus jaati hoon ...

Still waiting ...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 195 A

Tuesday October 2nd 2012

11:38 AM

Sabina had told her he was expected to return on Tuesday, so despite not admitting to herself that she craved to see him, she dressed with great care.

Wore a pistachio green kurta and a lemon yellow salwar, wore a bindi, and large hoops in her ears. Painted her toe nails on unday nite, for lack of better things to do, painted her finger nails……….

There was a core team meeting at Noon, she hoped to see him

Tried to concentrate but it was not working, went downstairs to the Citi cafeteria and got herself chai and a biscotti from the Coffee Day outlet.

Wandered around the are where his guest cube was set up, NO sign of him

Some how puttered around until Noon, went to the rest room, checked her braid, and her clothes…. Her palms were sweaty, and cold. "You are acting like a FOOL!" her brain told her

"I know" her heart responded

It was 10 minutes past Noon, she walked to the conference room, Trishala and Aakriti were ahead of her

Trishala: I had the best Sun.

Aakriti: At the spa?

Trish: Yes, cant wait to try it again

Akriti: I see the glow on ur face.

Trish (smug) I know

Akriti: Lets see if your special someone notices it.

Trish: Wont that be cool? (giggles)

They enter the room, people are already in there, no sign of Khanak's husband……

They get seated, and he walks in wearing khakhi trousers and a coffee and cream check shirt folded at 3/4rs sleeve, looking incredibly handsome. Suede shoes complimented the other colors…..

Khanak's heart lurched and sat in her throat at the sight, warm color flowed all over her face….

Shaan: You seem happy?😃

Paused first and later sat down by Trish, completely unaware of his wife's seeking eyes

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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye Dish...ande lakar plz break them on Shaan and Trish's head..even Aakriti😡...Khanak ke saath mujhe bhi sakoon ayega!!!


Adi update ke liye bahut Abhaar!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆

Originally posted by: xoxRBOxox

Oye Dish...ande lakar plz break them on Shaan and Trish's head..even Aakriti😡...Khanak ke saath mujhe bhi sakoon ayega!!!



Adi update ke liye bahut Abhaar!!!



Sure .. Shaan par nahi kar sakti ... he is too delicious himself ... Trish par 2 phod doon tho chalega kya?

😆 😉

And Adi ... real bad time to stop the story ... seriously ... is he trying the ignoring n jealousy technique with her? like seriously ... if she starts that with someone he is so gonna go mad ya ... I can just so feel for Khanak, she is all decked up for him and waiting and then nothing 😲 Bad boy Shaan!

Eagerly waiting for the next one... jaldi dena pls

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Khanak...What Adi, why you have to paint them in such a realistic way...that whenever one is down we all go awww over that one knowing both are equally to blame...

Haye I just loved the Suraj comparison, I feel better reading that she is realising what she has with Shaan is better than what she had with suraj coz at these kind of cross junctions one generally tends to compare and outweigh both the relations and glad here Shaan is emerging winner...now she will have to fight tooth and nail for her rights...hope we get to see Khanak in her new avataar ...Shaan ki Rani...soon😆!!

Mother and daughter talk was so heart rending...poor bai is caught up between hubby and daughter...my full sympathy is with BAI...thats what mothers do, if daughter is upset...call the kids as soon as dads steps out...chooo chweeet...I'm missing my mommie too🤗!!!

Loads of love, Ann,xox
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update Adi.

khanak dressing up for shaan was very cute, there is something childlike in her, she acts like a teenager in love 😳

she wants him talk abt going back to Mumbai...the iceberg is melting ...😃

adi , I miss those days when u wud b in spree to update, we wud wait nd chitchat nd update wud keep pouring ...koi lauta de mere bite hue din . * sigh *


" u seems haapy " ....shaan said this to trish or khanak ?





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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ray-

Thanks for the update Adi.


khanak dressing up for shaan was very cute, there is something childlike in her, she acts like a teenager in love 😳

she wants him talk abt going back to Mumbai...the iceberg is melting ...😃

adi , I miss those days when u wud b in spree to update, we wud wait nd chitchat nd update wud keep pouring ...koi lauta de mere bite hue din . * sigh *


" u seems haapy " ....shaan said this to trish or khanak ?






tumhe kya lagtaa hai...unaware of his wife's seeking eyes

tum andar aa gayi...tumhe dekh kar main bahut haapy hui😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xoxRBOxox


tumhe kya lagtaa hai...unaware of his wife's seeking eyes

tum andar aa gayi...tumhe dekh kar main bahut haapy hui😃


bluelines r for khanak na? but unaware of his wife's seeking eyes says he hasnt noticed his wife yet, so it's for Trish ? 😕

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