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Goood Morning Aditeee !!!!!!!
Sigh ... I am grinnning like an IDIOT stilll ... :D
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Originally posted by: aditee

Vandooo

I added that quirky thing about his not eating at the Haat
Just for the heck of it
Why should he be perfect?
Not in my story...

Perfect???
U mean imperfect??
I think thoda unreal ho gaya...!
Delhi Haat is really classy...! M sure even SRK wudnt mind eating there...wo bhi toh delhi wala hai...Inspite of all the money and poshness...
Hritik and Ambani ke bete bhi khaa lenge waha pe...
Its not some roadside dhaba yaar...
Isiliye mereko thoda khatka wo...I found it EXTREMELY annoying about him !🤢
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Yo ppl !
Take a peek at the Jharokha I gifted to my mom ...got it from Jodhpur !
It weighs more than 20 kgs...I died carrying it around...
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PART 188

Saturday Sep 22nd 2012

Around 2 PM

He pulls his sun glasses off and looks at her''

Shaan: I am not leaving you here (Delhi Haat) Chalo! (firm)

To her ear it sounds like the first word''.. her heart soars at being wanted, and sought and craved'''.

Khanak: Jee Aapke saath ?(lost in thought, savoring his possessiveness)

Shaan: Jee Mere saath! (grins warmly, mimicking her Hindi)

Her phone rings

Its her friends, they tell her they are right around the corner

Samar brings his soda back and sits down

Khanak: My friends will be here in a minute

Samar looks at the couple in shock, he had assumed they were working on reconciling''

Shaan is not saying a word,

Samar: Not going to eat with us?

Khanak: nahi' mere friends aa gaye, aap log jaayiye'.. agli baar zaroor

Samar: Sure?

Khanak: Aaap kab tak ruke hain yahan?

Samar looks at Shaan "Man! Her Hindi is awesome"

Shaan: she is dad's Hindi teacher''.

Samar smiles at Khanak warmly

Khanak: Dad is too kind'.

Samar: Unlike the son? (winks)

Khanak looks at her husband "totally unlike" (it doesn't come out with that much fire for some strange reason)

Samar looks at the corner shop selling fabric pillars from the South'' he excuses himself

Khanak: Mujhe gate par chale jaana chahiye

Shaan knows she will be gone, he wants her to stay just as much as she wants to''.

Khanak: Aap mera samaan Monday ko office mein de deeejiye?

She slowly stands up pushing the chair under the table''.

He looks up at her.

Does not nod, does not speak

Khanak: Mera scarf de deejiye

Shaan: Nahi''.

She stands there and pretends to rummage thru her bag, buying more minutes with him

He wants to ask her if she needs more money, he noticed her counting a couple of times''..

She wants to ask her fave line "Main jaaoon" she knows the answer will be "nahi" makes her blush'.. at the thought itself

He gets up, and stands by her

Khanak: Aap Samar ke saath rukiye''

He doesn't say a word, just holds her elbow gently

Samar turns around, and waves

Walks up to her, "I have to go" she says softly

Samar: Iam coming over to eat Gujju food!

Khanak hugs him warmly, and stays in the hug for an extra minute

He senses that "You should go shop with me, I might want to buy something special"

She is all cheered up now "Kiske liye? OMG! Really?" "Kab hua?"

Samar: Shaayad by the end of this year might get engaged

She almost squeals

Samar: You should meet her

Khanak: I wish you all happiness and centuries of joy together'' (smiles)

Samar steps back a lil and sees the couple together, to him it seemed like Shaan and Khanak belonged together'''.

Shaan: Yep, no wars' just love

Khanak looks away flushing'''

Samar notices the strong undercurrents between the couple'.

Khanak: I am so happy for you'''. (turns to shaan) "aapne bataya nahi"

Shaan: I wanted him to share it'.

Khanak : You two have a good time''.

Shaan: I am going to see her to the gate

Samar nods and gets on the phone, does a thumbs up to her

Khanak: Aap ghar aayiye kabhi bhi, main Vasant Kunj mein rehti hoon''

They walk away

Samar watches them go, they are super silent now, the laughter and chirpiness is all gone from his friend's wife, she is quiet'''.

Khanak: Aap log saara din ek saath rahenge

Shaan: That's the plan

Khanak: How exciting

Shaan:what are you going to do

Khanak: A couple hours here then ghar

Shaan: khanak''..(don't GO)

Her friends are walking towards them, Khanak is in shock,

Khanak (whispers) aapko chale jaana chahiye

Shaan: I am not going to be party to your juvenile games (angry)

Khanak: Please jaayie

Swati: Hi!

They both are staring at Shaan

Khanak: Umm, you two'' do you know, I mean have you met'' Mr Gujral?

They all say Hi! To each other as Khanak intros

Ira: Nahi, aap yaha kaise?

Shaan smiles "I am seeing a friend"

Swati and Ira look at her conspiratorily to hint to her that he must be here to see Trish.

Khanak: He had to find his driver so he was walking towards the gate when we bumped into each other

Khanak revels in the joy of standing by her husband one last time'''.

Swati and Ira are gushing over some silver like jewelry stall''.

Khanak looks at her husband'''.

He looks at her and says "Good to see you"A husky "Hmmm" escapes her lips''. Their tryst at the Haat ends on that note and real life takes over''. Where they are separated and trying to figure out if they should end the marriage or get back together, or fight some more and meet each other frequently'''.

Sunday Sep 23rd 2012

Noon

She has the FM on loud, hair is oiled, she is wearing an old lemon yellow chikan and is dusting and wiping and cleaning''.. it had rained heavily in the morning

The weather was cool and breezy, all her windows were open'''

Knock on the door

Khanak: Who is it? (sings)

"Ofcourse I wont know who it is until I get the door" giggles

Throws her duster, washes her hands quickly and runs to the door, opens the wood the steel is shut

Its her father in law and husband

She blushes a deep beetroot red

"Dad" she says nervously

Sunil: Andar nahi bulaogi beta?

Her hand trembles as she gets the door unlatched

Her FIL walks in and reaches to give her a hug

Khanak: Dad, main'.. clean'. I was cleaning

Sunil: Hindi'..

Khanak: Dad main ghar saaf kar rahi thi

Her husband is leaning on the wall outside the door, wearing knee length 6 pocket shorts in almost offwhite, and a dark green A&F tee, strappy sandals, shaved, moist hair, he looked good enough to eat'''.

Sunil is inside her husband is outside

She runs and lowers the volume on the radio

Goes to the door

Khanak: Aap andar nahi aayenge?

Shaan: Ask me to! (softly)😉

She turns and looks at her FIL as if he her husband just asked her to kiss him or something''.

Khanak: Please.. ayiye'

He walks in

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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oh no!!! swati n ira u came at the wrong time..
else she could have gone with shaan n samar na??
both of them enjoying others company..
adi get them back together n after that let them fight n even have worst of fights.
wow!!! sunil is here to visit his DIL..
i'm excited..
wat happens next..
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@vandu: the gift is simply superb..
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Cute! All this sharma sharmi and hindi dialogues are to die for Aditee! Next update soon ho, I hope! 😃
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please aaiye...haiii !! maar hi daloge. 😳
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Perfect???
U mean imperfect??
I think thoda unreal ho gaya...!
Delhi Haat is really classy...! M sure even SRK wudnt mind eating there...wo bhi toh delhi wala hai...Inspite of all the money and poshness...
Hritik and Ambani ke bete bhi khaa lenge waha pe...
Its not some roadside dhaba yaar...
Isiliye mereko thoda khatka wo...I found it EXTREMELY annoying about him !🤢

Vandoo I will agree to disagree di
Ab itna bhi classy nahi hai
Maine last July mein khaaya wahan
There were a lot of flies and many tables were quite unclean😃
I wont talk about how/where the dishes were being washed
I ATE there😃
Hritik and Ambanis are fake they would do any thing for a photo opp
Who cares abt them😃
Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the updates.. as always the lines.. first Dadi now Sunil... lets c how this goes...
liked the way they were shopping and Samar was very classy indeed 😉
giving them time @ the exact moment... btw, Ira & Swati... wrong timing..

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