FF: Partial Amnesia Pt 31Pg145-6th Dec

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#981

☺️☺️☺️☺️🤢
☺️☺️dat was so wonderful... i jst got lost in d scene...😍😳

amazing...
bt i think dis is d time shaan is going to tell her d truth...😭😭
cant wait for nxt part one more update today plz...😉

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neethurose

@neethurose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#982

wonderful update.

You left us at cliffhanger. Cant imagine what happens next.

Update soon

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#983

Oh I am loving the ambience. Its as if I am there myself the way you described you know invisible to others. Like how I can picturise Shantanu staring at Khanak adjusting her ear rings, her payal and her bare waist!!! HOT!!!

And the dupatta scene was a CLASSIC!!!! Once again I can imagine Shantanu behind her, close enough to her and holding her dupatta and asking her as to whether she was looking for this!!!

And yeah I just love the mention of height difference. Shantanu realising and looking down as to why lol. And his eyes!!!!!! No wonder Khanak wondered whether she could really ever stop blushing!!! It's oh-so0real the way she lifted the coat up and he cuked down under it and her hands at his neck and the kiss. Did Khanak really say that but then he would come back to his senses I guess!!!

K-family is ADORABLE!!!

BEAUTIFUL!

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#984

Wait...did you update AGAIN??! I mean, today is the 16th right? How comes you never told me?!!! Plus...I have to comment on the last two chapters and make this one 3rd, make it abit slow naa!

Okay...when I get home, I'll read it and comment! Abhi nahi para, I can't in uni, as I take my time too! lol!

Waise, thanks! 🤗

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#985

Hi Beeni 😊
OMG I just read part 27 I am speechless me at work smiling, blushing, enjoying lost in Shanak's paradise 😍
Pure bliss part loved every bit of it ❤️
Last lines said by Khanak wow simply superb 👏
"Shaantanu----mujhay apnay saath lay jayay-----mujhay aj raat aapkay saath----aapkay saath rehna hain----mujhay kisee rasam ki parwah nahi-----" she continued to be breathless-----"I just---I just want to love you tonight-----"

U made my day feeling so happy don't know how to express this feeling 😊
Thanks a lot for this awesome part beautifully written I know it's a cliffhanger eagerly waiting for the next part till then will read again and again the awesome parts

U are a great writer I take a bow to u 👏 Ur writing is pure bliss thanks a lot for giving us RBO we all miss our RBO Yashran Shanak everyday but thanks to u and everyone in our RBO forum we are reliving with the wonderful memories our RBO family gave us I really want our RBO team to come back soon with season 2 I am sure our prayers will be answered
@All Just want to give u all a Group hug
Love u all my dear friends

Sorry got carried away Ok back to my comments for part 25 and 26
Sorry Beeni could not post earlier had read it and pressed the like button loved every bit of it the awesome parts

Part 25
Shantanu brought Bai and gave a pleasant surprise to Khanak
Shanak's love is eternal they know each other very well
Loved Shanak's sweet romantic phone convo 😃

Part 26
Shantanu's talk with Mitul written very well
Sangeet part very nice loved our K-family's interaction
Khanak enjoying the functions and wow Sasha Mausi is going to enter very excited
Poor Shantanu is confused is confused he doesn't know how he would tell her
Shanak's convo in their room written beautifully
Khanak was almost about to find about the baby but Shantanu came up with the right answer and managed by saying its Khushboo Bhabi's baby pic

Last portion brilliant ⭐️
Khanak looked at Shaan sternly. "Humaree shadi hojanay dain---phir dekhtee hoon main-----kaisay peetay hain aap!" and saying this she stalked away from the room picking up the bottle of beer from the table and taking it along with her as she did.

Shaan laughed. "She's such a burthal! God I love her so much! And you!" Shaan said looking at the picture in his hand.

Aawwh Shantanu said to Sushant he loves him and his mom very touching brought tears reading about Sushant
Parents pain of losing their child can never be overcome its really difficult poor Shanak I don't know how Khanak will react when she gets to know about their baby but I am sure Shanak will have many kids in future and Sushant will be born again

Thanks a lot for the awesome updates 😃
Waiting for the part 28 eagerly….
Love u always 🤗

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#986

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
awesome beeni..
as now khanak lost her control will shaan be able to control himself n say her the truth..
such a cliffhanger..too bad..

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Sharon

@sharon18

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#987

Beeni OMG the update was superb👏👏if this is the case before wedding i dont think Shaan can control himself after the wedding😆poor fellow😆the max he can do is go on a world tour😆to escape😆...So i did guess one part right that Kushboo might be expecting a girl...well im hoping that Khanak will find out the truth from Shaan instead of any other way regarding her baby...wen r u updating next???????plz plz plz make it soon...wanna know what happens next😊...thnx for the update😊

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#988

Thank you all for your lovely likes and comments! It really motivates me! :D (though I am still missing my regular readers :( they seem to have abandoned this FF :()

@Sharon: Hehe yes you did seem to guess right! When i was reading your comment I was like OMG she knows!! :O And Haha at world tour lmao! Don't give Saira ideas! I am NOT planning to put a world tour in it!

@Krithika: I don't mind you getting carried away with your comments! Simply LOVED them! Do comment more often and I'm glad it made your day in the office because work life can be torture i knw :(

@Smitha: Yes Khanak really said that! Haha you can't blame her can you! If he comes back to his senses is somethig you need to wait and watch!

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#989

Okay, got home and read it.

I love the K-family, especially the little changes you've put in Khusboo and Mads! lol! Especially Khusboo, she is not a blondie anymore is she! She has turned into a working women! But still has the innocence, so cute!

AND coming to the last 3 paragraphs, where you described Shaan working now, put still depending on Khanak, I think...this will never change about him, what-ever he does he will need her guidance. I love it, it's so apt for the Shantanu that we knew in RBO. But then, am loving the abit of role reversal at the end...I was like :O :O Did khanak say that?? Want to 'love' you! That's so bold for her, but I guess she was so desperate as him lol! But loved the whole under the coat and rain romance only if they were eating ice-scream under it. lol! BUT they kissed ☺️ Sighhh...I miss them even more now, Especially the fact that I notice more about each character makes me nostalgic like Shanak height difference, Mads shopping habits and Khusboo.

Mein baar baar kehti hoon, you know am such a sucker for a good character sketch or even show wise, am like this. BUT you seriously do know how to keep the essence of each character, with adding it's own nuisances. Is liya, I said thanks in the morning lol! I was actually kinda had a flashback and remembered, you're OS's and how much their were so similar to our RBO. Thanksss 🤗

EDITED; Just read you're comment about give me idea's! What idea?? 😲 You better add something from what I told you last time...remember london ka jhoola and all! But world tour even better :D :D

Edited by -Saira- - 14 years ago