Hi guys! 😃 So I have been literally thinking since AGESS (even before the show ended) that I have to write a Partial Amnesia FF but I just could not bring myself to write one because a) I am not a FF sort of a person and I don't want to leave somethign incomplete after I start it b) I have no idea what happens in Partial Amnesia except what is shown in our shows and c) I could not think of a good enough plot! 😕 But since around 2 weeks I have been thinking that I should write one regardless of all the a, b and c above 😆 But ermm I want to know if you guys are open to this idea even now i.e: the show has ended na so should I start a FF now?! I'm confused lol
The concept for the FF is ofcourse starting from where the show ended , that is Shaan's birthday and Khanak's pregnancy. We will fast forward to around 3 months after this time.
The FF involves Shanak falling in love all over again!! 😳😃😃
Characters:
All the characters will be the same as in the show.
Additional characters:
1. Dr. Mitul: Natasha's fiance, Shaan's budding friend and Neurologist by profession
2. Dr. Geeta: Khanak's Gynachologist (also studying Neurology and practicing with Dr. Mitul) and Shaan's senior in university. Shaan introduced her to Khanak and she became more than a doctor to her.
Introduction
"Shaan----" Dr. Geeta approached him cautiously, her heart beat rising rapidly with every step she took , her eyes blood shot now, like Shaan's. Shaan's eyes immediately looked at her in desperation as though they had had been searching her for years, knowing that she was close by and wanting to leap at her the instant they saw her. He got up and took two steps towards her, his semi numb brain registering with shock that his legs still had the strength to walk. Madhvi, Sunil, Akshay and Dadi looked on, helpless and distraught.
"Geeta---" Shaan breathed. "Khanak----Khanak-----" he held Dr.Geeta's shoulders now and looked deep into her eyes, his stare not once wavering as he held her and took his wife's name repeatedly. Geeta stood still. It needs to be done, she thought. And I am the one who does it. I am the one who tells him.
"Shaan----we could not save the baby," she said in one go and it immediately hit her how stone-hearted her job had made her; how she could announce it, just like that, that a life had been taken away from the world; that she could do nothing except announce the fact.
Tears blurred Shaan's vision. He let go of Dr. Geeta's shoulders. His hands flapped back to his sides. He felt strong arms hold him but it did not matter. More tears came.
He shut his eyes tightly and bit his lips in agony.
Four feet away Khanak opened her eyes which flickered unsteadily as her lips parted.
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Why do I have a feeling that this was a lame attempt?😕 I will continue from here and make it Part 1. This as just an introduction or a prelogue or whatever you call it 😆 I know it was short and depressing but the other parts won't be hopefully, well except part 1 😆 I hope you like it! I for one can't wait to make Shanak fall in love again right from the beginning! 😃
PS: This FF does not have a name as of now! I will keep one soon 😊
Edited by tofeeees - 12 years ago
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