FF- Shaadi Mubarak! IMP NOTE pg. 83 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it! Can't wait for Shanak to realize each other's importance!
Thank God Khanak realized her fiance doesn't fit in her life!
Please update sooon 😃

PS: I may not be able to comment regularly till end of Jan due to studies and work but will surely we reading your updates! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ABlank90

Loved it! Can't wait for Shanak to realize each other's importance!

Thank God Khanak realized her fiance doesn't fit in her life!
Please update sooon 😃

PS: I may not be able to comment regularly till end of Jan due to studies and work but will surely we reading your updates! :)

Hey Nisha!
Thanks so much! And no problem, good luck with everything! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Afiya!! :)
Omg this part was soo good! Especially how you told Khanak's back story, cant wait for them to fall in love! Update soon, excited for Arjuhi 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice & a warm update.. glad that Shaan is smiling again.. but what'll happen when he knows abt Ajay??
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei afiya..
sweet update..
unknowing to both shaan n khanak both r growing on the other..
hope things work out better..
ajay ko goli maar jaldhi..
these guys r always fun to be with..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

hei afiya..
sweet update..
unknowing to both shaan n khanak both r growing on the other..
hope things work out better..
ajay ko goli maar jaldhi..
these guys r always fun to be with..
do continue soon..



LOL, Hey Ramani :)
Even I want to do the same thing, but let's wait and see what happens...
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATEE! :)

finally shaan and khanak are hitting their inner emotions/ thoughts! :) cannot wait for the next update! loving it!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update afiyaaa!!

cannot wait for the next part! give us a super duper long update please! heehee ^^ waiting for the update! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
afffiyaaa its been ages my darling u updated



itna zuloom mat karo hum par😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 16 "B" -

*Arohi glared at Arjun* Tum yahaan kya kar raha ho?



What do you mean? Tum yahaan * he waved his hands to show the gym* kya kar raha ho? *he was silent for a while* Tum mera peecha kar raha ho?



What? Tumhe peecha karegi meri jhoothi! Aur main yahaan pehli aayi thi, to TUM meri peecha kar raha ho! Arohi said glaring at Arjun.



Mujhe, uhh nahin pata tha ke tum yahaan ho *he stood there awkwardly for a while, and went and sat in a corner taking things out of his gym bag.



Arohi went to go get a drink, realizing that Arjun put his things next to her. She reluctantly sat next to him, taking out her water bottle.



Yeh kaisa kaapra pahen rakhi hain? 'Practice made me perfect,' yeah right how cheap! She thought muttering to herself about Arjun's shirt.



God kaisi ladki hai, mere kaapre kyun ghoor rahe hi, aur kya baak rahi hai? Shakal dekha hain apne aap ki, jaanwar se bhi zyaada khatar-naak dikh raha hai, he muttered to himself.



Excuse me! Kya kaha tumne? Arohi said rising up from her seat.



Jo tumne suna! Arjun said towering over her.



Oh yea, meri shakaal, khud kabhi ayna mein dekha hai, no wonder you're single, kaunsi bevakoof ladki tumhare saath rehna chahega? she said challenging him.



*Arjun glared at her* Oh yeah, and what's your excuse? Agar tum itni attractive ho, toh phir tum single kyun ho? Koi bhi ladka tumhare saath nahi rehpaayega!



For your information, mein single hoon, kyun ki mujhe abhi tak koi decent ladka nahin mila hai, sirf tumhare tara luccha mili hai, aur kuch nahin! And if you'll excuse me, mein yahaan workout karne aayi ho, tumhare saath apni time barbaad karne nahin! She said as she stormed off.



Haan toh jaao na! Mujhe bhi koi shaukh nahin hai tumhare saath baat karne ki! he sat back down grumbling to himself as Arohi got on the treadmill, cursing him as she ran.



After a while Arjun looked up at Arohi and started to laugh, seeing her run, he went towards her laughing at every step.



*Arohi looked up at him* Kya hai?! She asked.



*Arjun tried to control his laughter* Yeh *chuckle* tum kya kar raha ho?



Andhe ho? Running on the treadmill, she replied huffing as she ran.



Who runs like that? You're doing it all wrong, dumb aurat! he laughed.



*Arohi slammed the stop button down and stared at Arjun* What do you mean by 'Aurat', aur mein galat kya kar raha hoon? she asked.



Sirf ladkiyaan aisi dorhti hai...without any technique, he replied.



Technique? Ab dorhne mein technique bhi hota hai? she replied. Puh-lease, ladkiyaan bohot athletic hoti hai !



Haan, I guess you're right, saab ladkiyan itni stupid nahin hoti, I guess tum hi ho, itni stupid! he said to Arohi.



Arohi glared at Arjun, and tried to get off the treadmill, tripping as she fell into Arjun's arm. Arjun grabbed her by the waist, staring into her face. The two stared at each other for a moment, lost in what was happening around them. Arohi suddenly realized where she was, and jumped up.



Ch... chhoro mujhe, she said quietly as Arjun let go. Arohi turned a deep shade of red as she walked away, leaving her belongings in the gym. Arjun watched her leave, wondering what the hell just happened.

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Everyone was busy getting ready for the dinner party at Abeer's parents' house. The girls were all upstairs getting ready while all of the guys were already downstairs. Leher, Preeti and Arohi came down the stairs, looking gorgeous in their outfits. Leher was wearing a deep burgundy and brown chudidar, while Preeti was wearing a pink and silver chudidar, and Arohi was wearing a turquoise Patiala suit.



Wow! You look amazing, Abeer smiled into Leher's hair hugging her from behind, while Leher blushed.



Arjun stared at Arohi, turning away every time she looked at him, while Preeti kept her glance away from Shashank.



Uhh, Khanak nahi aaya? Shaan asked looking up the staircase for her.



*Preeti smiled to herself* Woh actually abhi taak tayaar nahi huwi. Thoda time lagegi, she said.



Oh, well actually Leher, hume abhi jaana chahiye...umm Shaan why don't you and Khanak come later with the other car, and all of us could leave now? Abeer asked Shaan, while Leher agreed with him.



Umm yeah, no problem, Shaan smiled at Abeer while the rest of the gang prepared to leave. Shaan took a seat in the living room, waiting for Khanak to come downstairs.

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Khanak had spent her whole morning helping Leher with all of the wedding preparations that she didn't have any time to pick out her outfit. It was Saturday, and usually on Saturdays Ajay's mom would call asking her every single time, when she wanted to get married. Khanak hated Saturdays, she never had an answer to give, and Ajay was always on some business trip never answering his phone. Khanak decided to ignore the whole thing, for the time being. Now she was standing in front of her mirror, putting on earrings Leher had given her. She wondered why there was no noise coming from downstairs, had everyone left?

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As she walked down the stairs she saw Shaan leaning against the railing at the bottom of the staircase, playing with his phone.



Everyone left?! Khanak asked Shaan.



Shaan turned around and saw Khanak in a Gold and Light blue Anarkali, dazzling as she walked down. He couldn't keep his eyes of her for some reason, she looked gorgeous.



Haan? *He was speechless for a moment* Yeah, they said we could come with the other car *he pointed outside and nodded*



Cool, shall we? she asked smiling.



We shall, he agreed as they walked outside closing the door behind him.



So how was your day? Shaan asked Khanak in the car.



Uugh hectic, I love weddings and all, but seriously, all the planning that goes into it is crazy! She said, while Shaan laughed.



Now we know, Shashank's problem, Shaan joked as they both laughed.



The two talked about their families, each avoiding topics about Natasha and Ajay, as they reached Abeer's parents house.



As they were walking towards the door, Shaan smiled at Khanak.



You look really beautiful, Shaan said as he opened the door for her.



*Khanak blushed* I thought you'd never say it; she winked at Shaan and walked into the house to meet everyone.



Shaan smiled with his tongue in his cheek, and went inside.


Edited by Afiya - 13 years ago

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