FF- Shaadi Mubarak! IMP NOTE pg. 83 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was very emotional

but penned nicely

finally the truth is out

my heart is choked reading the line u know how it feels ur best frnd gf ur fiance die

but em happy actually he has someone to hold on to and someone on whom he can depend

she's the one who can bring the old shaan back and i guess now he has said it all so he'll be fine soon

but em eager to know how he's goin to react after knowing abt khanak's fiance

update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful is the word. Your writing says so much. Great.
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally shaan's truth is out..he shared it with khanak...n she was there for him to hold on to her..
emotional one..n u nailed it afiya..i liked it..
now waiting for khanak to share abt her life to shaan n waiting to see how both of them help out the other..
y didnt khaak pick up the phone??she was in the car only na??r did they called them after both were out of the car??
awaiting the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
WHAT. AN. UPDATE. LOVED IT!!
continue soon! :) and so sad to see this side of shaan, im kinda scared now of how he will ever overcome his feeling of guilt, its so hard to accept... lets see how you shape the story! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey afiya...it was quite emotional...😭😭 n u penned it beautifully...
hw he mst have seen her dying in front of him...goshhh dats terrible...dis guilt is eating him up...
khanak felt so bad seeing him crying...n she was der wid him when he need someone badly...
n i kne shez d one who will bring old shaan back...😊 n everyone r tensed abt dem..hope dey reach safely...
bt wht will happ after knwing abt ajay...😲
update soon...
Edited by snigdhanagar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful parts Afiya! I wasn't able to comment earlier but I'm loving the story. Arjuhi are finally getting somewhere...Preeti and Shashank are trying to cope up...and Shanak are getting to know each other better. Khanak is the only one who knows what happened that night...ab bas Shaan ko realize ho jae ke if he loves Khanak now wouldn't be unfair to Natasha!

Hope you update soon! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyyy Afiya!!! ...very emotional update...loved it👏
finally Shaan shared it with Khanak...

Do you know what it's like, seeing your best friend, your girlfriend, and your almost fiance die in front of you? Do you know what it's like hearing her last words? Do you know what it feel like to go to her parents and tell them, that she's no more, and it's your entire fault? Do you know what it feels like living in guilt?
u made me cry through these lines...superb 😭

good that Khanak was there with him when he needed someone😊...& m very much sure that she ll bring the old Shaan back😊

update soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks everyone for commenting! I see Shaan's problem has touched your hearts, and that's what I was going for :) Shaan will trust Khanak now, as he slowly falls in love. As for Ajay, he's not in the picture now, let's just wait and see when he arrives. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally Shaan spoke abt that day... to Khanak.. hopefully he can make peace too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
afiyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!! right now i have been anusing d like button wich isnt wrking fr me fr sum wierd reasns🤬 i cant tell u how much i haveloved this update


its so so so so so so so sooo awesome


super super awesome!!!!!!!


loved it👏

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