Graphic FF ~When Love Calls~ Note pg 84 - Page 17

@ Priya...mystory -- I haven't read your update till now...will do it asap and comment !!

@ Deepali S -- I know that was the whole catch for apologising and all !!!

@ Pranjal -- Thanks !!

😲 😲 how could u do that?

I m laughing like a mad at this hour at night 😆

totally hilarious update...lmao

last part was just rocking


😆 she brought cat ..lmao

i will comment tomarrow after controlling my funny bones 🤣

oh my gosh..
did she really did that..
khanak is so mean yaar..
i'm not liking this character of khanak..
mani actually u r making me hate her behaviour like anything..
unnecessarily holding grudge on a poor guy..n a making mess..
if her ego hurts to that extent she must avoid him..
often instigating him to do things is going to fetch her nothing..
for a minute i really got carried away with the way she talked..thankfully shan didnt believe her fully..
hope he gets out the trouble which she brought with her to infuriate him..
but i want her to behave good with shaan..
till then thanks for making me hate khanak..
waiting for the part how my poor shaan gets rid of the cat before it makes a mess of the whole house..

oops..forgot to mention that i loved the update..

Originally posted by: RB81

oh my gosh..
did she really did that..
khanak is so mean yaar..
i'm not liking this character of khanak..
mani actually u r making me hate her behaviour like anything..
unnecessarily holding grudge on a poor guy..n a making mess..
if her ego hurts to that extent she must avoid him..
often instigating him to do things is going to fetch her nothing..
for a minute i really got carried away with the way she talked..thankfully shan didnt believe her fully..
hope he gets out the trouble which she brought with her to infuriate him..
but i want her to behave good with shaan..
till then thanks for making me hate khanak..
waiting for the part how my poor shaan gets rid of the cat before it makes a mess of the whole house..

Awww Ramani...please don't hate my Khanak...she is a sweet nice person... ... she is terribly , madly attracted to him and to drive a response from him...she is behaving like that !!!
Even she doesn't know that ...she doesn't realise why she is doing like this !!😃

Eeek part 4!!!😃...Will be reading it tonight...

Awwwiiieee...sachi...thank u sooo much for sayin dat i.m ur most innocent reader...i.m overwhelmed...<3...*hugs*...
Bt aap bade ho toh clarification dena banta hai...:)..
aap ese leg pulling karoge aur main gir gai toh..:p
(waise 2 b honest...by readings comments on d FF's...i genuinely find some ppl more innocent dan me...:) )

another update...WOW...u're on roll di...:)
Have just one word for it...*ROCKING*...:)
khanak of dis FF is completely opposite of dat in d show n trespro n MRM...n i love dat...
Bichara shaan...kitty ab usse pareSHAAN kar degi...
He fell in her trap so easily...haye...kitna pyaara hai...:)
Bt i really have one question...y is Khanak after his life..??..
Love...
Disha...

Muhahahahahahahahahahaha evvviiilll purely evilishly devilish!!!!!!!Loveee this Khanakdi... and my poor budthal Shantanu...

Fantastic manita👏

u r a brilliant the way u've penned it👍🏼

the conv she listened to was exactly like he's talking ab ther

their nok jhok i will say fight this time was fun😆

i felt bad abt what he said to khanak when she stepped out at floor😒

when she kept the fone down i was sure there's sumthing fishy

the conv at the door was cute

i thought she must 've added sumthing in poha but oh my gosh😲... mrs patkar's cat 🤣

khanak is 3 much... such a devilish act i cant blv it🤣

em luvin it... and the pic selection is superb👍🏼

waiting eagerly for the next update.

Hey Mani Di

Awesome………Loved the every parts……Its fantastic.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

First of all Love your Disclaimer…..Its just too good & hilarious.😆 Only u can right this type of Disclaimer. 😉 😉

Loved your idea of graphic update…….. I am sure u must have done lot of Reserch for this creation.😊 & I am sure after Few updates we can legally announce u as an Encyclopedia Of RBO & Shanak.👍🏼 Loved the Pics & the Moments Created by you.👏

Part 1

Loved the Introductary part. So Gopi is Sister to Khanak here.😊 Loved their Pic. Shaan is staying in Duck's Place. But as u described he wants to be a self made man so he is looking out for Naya Ashiyana.😉 But Bhala ho Duck ka jo he is leaving for for Germany for 3 months Aur isi beech hogi nok Jhok Aur Aankh micholi between our Shanak.😉 & yipeee Khanak stays in the same building on the 10 th floor …..Wow I am exicted…..*runs to read the second part* 😳

Part 2

After Reading the Second part first thing came to my mind was "Pehli nazar mein Dil ye diya tere ho gaye Janam" Loved their Cute Nok jhok in the Lift.😉 & your pics were Bang on…..Superb Di.👏 This Khanak is Something else yaar. I was smiling throw out the update for the first time I disconnected the incoming call from my Bhabhi.😳 As I feel that call will Distrub me😳 & than the real Fun…..Auto & Bechaara Auto wala mujhe seriously daya aa gayi us par.😉 & this Auto sence reminded me of the Best days of Rbo.😍 I am so going to watch Full episode after reading all the parts. Finally Autowala gave the Solution.*Hush*😃

Oh ho…..Shaan is late for the meeting.😒 Poor guy waited for 3 hours to meet the Manager. But felt great as he gets the good returns For waiting 👍🏼…..Rahul Sir *nayi entry ….Tantadan ….taliya* 😳 waise kya ye bhi Shaan ka dost hoga like RBO?😕 Oops Khanak had a bad day. & Sam is her Friend….Nice turn.👏 Loved their Convo…..Khanak wanted to take Badla to Shaan ….Wow….Rubbing my hands & going to read the next part.😳

Part 3

Love the start & their self talks.😊 You know while reading the Part I was actually imagining the Devil on right & angleon left on both Sides of their head. (wo cartoon mein dekhatee hain na)😳 Angle tries to say be positive. But devil is insisting on taking Badla.😆

Finally Khanak noticed him & Secretly admire him. YES the Word "Jerk" came. *Dancy dancy* Waise they both are behaving like Khadoos & Sadu.😉 But I am loving it. Dono ek bhi mauka nahi chod rahe Ek dusere ko taana maarne ka. Khanak is getting little unreasonablr here.😒 But Isis mein to Mazaa hain is Kahani ka.😊 Finally Khanak & Shaan go to their residence & ROFL at your Shower pic comments.🤣 Yippeee they met again in the lift…..Wow awesome….Running to read the next part.😳

Part 4

Wow….i mean awesome…I mean fabulous….i mean fantastic 👏 👏 Loved Shaan & Ducks interaction & Khanak misunderstand him 😲 & They fight again.😊 (Yiipeee I am getting excited because of their fights…Sorry)😳 Both cancel their plans. Sam told Khanak that she is extremly attracted to him...Hmm….i agree.😉

I was so shocked after reading that She goes to his place with the food. Both apologize to each other & Finally Devil on the Right side of Khanak Advise her to action her plan.😛 & she lets out the Cat of Mrs. Patkar…..Omg 😲What will happen now?…..Poor Shaan how he is going to handel it?😕 Khanak is so gonna enjoy this….She is So mean yaar. Ok I am not having the next part…….Shit yaar 😭 😭…..i wish I could have started reading after a day or two. Coz I am actually very impatient & going mad about thinking the next part.😭 😭

U know I am having exams tomorrow…..& decided to Study sinciourly but couldn't stop my self after reading the First 2 parts.😳 Haaye it was magical. I wish I could have got more two parts to read as I am thinking about the further story & will not be able to sleep.😊 (All because of you….Why you write such great Stuff)😉 & ya one more thing Baba Have I now proved that I am not looking out for any besharmi? & I didn't boycott you? 😛(telling you once again can never do that I was just busy with many things & was disturbed due to many things.)😳

Hey I read the Comic book on Sarabhai V/s Sarabhai.😊 & now I am reading My most favrate Characters Cantaning Comic Book & I just Loved it.👍🏼 you are awesome Di ⭐️Couldn't stop my Self from writing Bakwas. Sorry. & ya I apologise as I commented separately for each part. I know it appear Silly but Chala lena.😳

Waiting for the next part 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love

Pranjal.