FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one ! - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hey cool update ...loved their first meeting and intro of duck😊...looking forward to future updates😃update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
thank you for your support guys and I didnt do a fight cause my story has many hatrke twists wait and see
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
nice part pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
great goin peru

i simply lovd it...

i really found it to b very unique

tum sochogi ki unique kyun kahan menay ?

woh isliye ki hum sab apnay ff may situations ko baray soshay bazi say describe kartay hein

bt tumnay aisa nahi kiya

i really likd ur simple way of writin it

good luck

love yaa

urs
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Sorry, I'm late !!

Just read part 2...loved the scenario...college life is the most carefree, awesome :)

Beginning of a new friendship !!

looking forward to it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
than you guys will make next update tomorrow

love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
prerna, ur writing an FF?!!! im soo proud of u ! :D
will read and comment later!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update 3 -

At Shaans house

AKSHAY-Hello boys how was first day at collage

SHAAN-AWESOME the collage is nice and

DUCK-The food is nice hehehehe

SHAAN-(smavking his stomach) and we made to new friends too

AKSHAY-Really !Thats great meine toh socha tha ki tum pehle din kisis se ladai karke aa jaoo ge par tumnhe toh naye dost banaye

SHAAN-Very funny

AKSHAY-Acha waise unka naam kya hai?

SHAAN-Khanak and

DUCK-Ankita

Shaan ' tere ko beech mein kyun bolna hota hai

AKSHAY- wow girls why didn't you make guy friends

DUCK-They are all lalus

MADHAVI- hi guys !(Coming in )and stop questioning them akshay they must be tired

SHAAN- YUP you should !

AKSHAY- ok mom well bye boys dad has called me for a meeting

SHAAN- Bye see you tomorrow

DUCK-Arre shaan tere ghar mein kuch khane ko nahin hai

SHAAN-sure

AT KHANAK"S HOUSE

LOKESH-(opening the door)Hi sisy pissy how was your day

KHANAK 'Hi lokesh It was good how was school

LOKESH-jaisa hamesha hota hai duh !

KHANAK- Fine were is dad and mom

LOKESH- dad gone to a meeting and mom to ankis home and so you made friends

KHANAK-Yup shaan and duck

LOKESH-Shaan and bathak hun well boys dude you are aldready changing

KHANAK-Its duck lokesh and we are just friends

LOKESH- ya ya meine kuch bola

KHANAk-ya right to toh kuch bolta hi nahi hai na !

LOKESH-chal pehel naha le badbu fela rahi hai

KHANAK-Tujh se to kum hi hai

NEXT DAY AT COLLAGE

Shaan enters the other three are sitting in the canteen

SHAAN-Hey guys whats up

DUCK-UP. There is sky

SHAAN-Shut up nautanki

KHANAK-Nothing did you peole see the list on the notice board

ANKI-Yup it there was a kind of list telling firsties what is there in the collage

KHANAK-YA right but did you read it carefully we can have a hobby period too where we can take up our favourite things

SHAAN AND DUCK-REALY!!!!

SHAAN-That's great at last we can have something else other than lectures

DUCK-Yup THEY R SO BORING

SHAAN-me and duck will take up basketball

DUCK- offcoyrse isme koi shaak nahin hai

ANKI ' and me n khganak dramatics how fun

KHANAK-Ya guys it will be fun but now its oyr economics class

DUCK- oh no

IN THE CLASS

DUCK- yaar uyeh kitna pakata hai

SHAAN-Really I never thought economics will be so dificult

KHANAK-Tum donno bhi na bilkul ek jaise ho

SHAAN-abhi tumhe pata hi kya hai hamari dosti ke bare mein

DUCK- yes hamara toh janam janam ke dost hain

SHAAN- hum friends 6th class se hain Sra bachpaan ikathe kata hai

DUCK-aur budhapa bhi katenge

KHANAk-ducks you are too much

TEACHER-(cutting in ) you three if you want to talk go out don't disturb the class

DUCK-acha mauka hai katte hain

SHAAN-SHUTUP! We are so sorry sir

IN THE HOBBY CLASS

COACH-OK guyts time up

SHAAN-aree yaar agar yeh coach aise bhagata raha toh hum mar jayen ge

DUCK-aree aise kaise Mare '.(lokking up)shaan who dekh girls dance club

SHAAN- toh tu jake ke kar le sheila shiela ki jawani

DUCK-arre yaar lets see ki girls kaise dance kar rahin hai

SHAAN- VERY FUNNY

DUCK- arre mein is pedh ope chadhun ga toh sedha dekhein gi

SHAAN- Haan AUR NEECHE GIRE GA TOH MEDICAL COLLAGE KI BHI DIKH JAYENGI Pagaal

Chall drama club mein jaten hai

DUCK ' yup khanak and anki bhi wahan hai na

IN THE DRAMA CLUB

TEACHER- c mon read the script infront of me

ALL come up some of them were kaghter riots

Then came ankis turn

ANKI-(in a n over dramatic way)I cant live without you''

SHAAN- hahahahahahaha duck dekh toh aise lag raha hai koi daily soap chal raha hai

DUCK- (NOT LAUGHING) lets wait for khanaks turn

Khanak speaks well abd actrs too but her voice is too low

DUCK-theek toh bola yaar par ladke ko sunai bhi dega

OUTSIDE THE COLLAGE

All four are walking shaan sees a pani puri stall

SHAAN-come on guys lets have pani puris

ANKI AND DUCK- sure and rush towards the stall

SHAAN looks at khanak she is just standing he winks at her pointing towards the stall

They order oani puris

SHAAN- waise yopu have romeo juliet this year

KHANAK ' yup too boring

SHAAN ' yup imagine romeo saying mein sirf tumhara hoon juliet

DUCK- and juleit will say who tho theek hai par account mein paise kitne hain

Guys this much for today

Please do tell me how it was

Love prerna

Edited by Prernarbofan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
ammu sorry didnt reply and I wrote cause there was no RBO !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
finally u updated..
looks like a bit lengthy..
lemme read n decide that..

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