FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one ! - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
bacha where is the update ??????????/

ok no complains...

i jst lovd it

intro ws nice n g8

i lovd the line " well he is a pest " describing " brothers "

muah darls...

well ek hi baat kahungi u rockkk girl

ur writing is very fresh

keep doin that

love yaa

urs
di
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Di thank you when you say it is good I really feel it is good love you loads !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: iluvmanar

nice going prerna..but itna tiny size update nehi chalega...pls..we want longer updates...thanks...



humari tiny si peru ka tiny lil sweet ff " in a heartbeat " 👏

lovd it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: mystory



humari tiny si peru ka tiny lil sweet ff " in a heartbeat " 👏

lovd it...


yup I am a 16 yr old tiny baby lalalalalalalalala

ya but I made a short update cause I wanted the first collage day seprate
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Hi Prerna

Nice update
Shaan and Khanak as college students is interesting.
Looking forward to their meeting.

Love---
Nehal
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hey prerna gr8 start pls update soon nw wanna c shaan & khanak's 1st day in college 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Nice update prerna!!! Nice scenario you have chosen...I like it that both are going to college and looking frwd to some nok jhok!
TC,
Simi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

The next morning

Khanak has her whole cupboard down on the floor her mom comes in

SEEMA-Khanak what is this is this a room or a junk yard !

KHANAK-Mom don't be angry , I am aldready worried mein collage ke liye kya pehnoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SEEMA ' wear anything I don't know why you are so possesive

ANKITA-(comes in the room)Goodmorning '. Khanak what is this

KHANAK- nothing first help me to choose my clothes

(so ankita choosed a figure fitting jeans and a sleevless top for her with funky sandals and she made a messy plat she looked really sweet and beautiful

ANKITA- abhi change kar liya na toh chaal niche I don't want to miss your moms parathas

KHANAK- bhuki kahin ki hum baad mein bhi toh kha sakte hain late ho rahein hai

ANKITA- no I don't wnt to skip breakfast

(so anki eats and eats and they are really late for collage)


at the collage

KHANAK-(Entering the collage gate ) Dekha hum late ho gaye an hum class kaise dhondden ge

ANKI- wait I will ask.( She goes up to a boy and asks hm he says that he is also in the same class

And tells her the way Khaak only sees him from the back and hears his voice which she really loves)

(they get into the class khanak still thinking about the voice)

ANKI- see I got the way to class and also made a new friend and his name is

(alas the teacher comes in and starts her lecture anki is sleepy but khanak concentrates he just tells about the syllabus the projects and other things soon the bell rings)

KHANAK-(outside the washroom)ANKI wait for me here I will just come in a minute

ANKI- Sure

(but she sees an old friend and goes up to her and soon they bith move to the cannteen

KHANAK-anki kahan chali gayi I told her to wait to ab kahan dhoondo mein

(she walks without seeing and bumps into someone and he was carrying a whole lot of files that fall down

SHAAN-Dhayan sechala karo tumhe choot toh nahin lagi

KHANAK(memorises the voice)-no not at all and I am sorry(she and shaan collect allt the files)

Then she says my name is Khanak . khanak Grewal

SHAAN- gives a beaming smile ands ays I am shaan khandelwal nice to meet you khanak

DUCK-guys yeh kya laga rkha hai ab toh tum friends hot toh surname kuyn BTW mera nam duck's hai saam to suna hi hoga

ANKI-are tum yahan ho mene tumhe kahan nahin dhonda oh wow to tum shaan se mil gayi at last

SHAAN- yup aur tummbhi commerce class 3 mein ho na

KHANAK-YUP

SHAAN- me too I its soo good guys we have a group now

Me KHANAK , DUCKSand ANKI

So it was the start of a new friend ship today lets see where it takes them !

Guys hope you like it do reply

Love

Prerna

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: simiv

Nice update prerna!!! Nice scenario you have chosen...I like it that both are going to college and looking frwd to some nok jhok!

TC,
Simi



hmmm nok jhook well not so soon its not in my story soo soon wait and see till that time check my new update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Beautiful start to a college life...
phele hi din Group ban gaya...its awesome...
update soon...

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