ok no complains...
i jst lovd it
intro ws nice n g8
i lovd the line " well he is a pest " describing " brothers "
muah darls...
well ek hi baat kahungi u rockkk girl
ur writing is very fresh
keep doin that
love yaa
urs
di
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Originally posted by: iluvmanar
nice going prerna..but itna tiny size update nehi chalega...pls..we want longer updates...thanks...
humari tiny si peru ka tiny lil sweet ff " in a heartbeat " 👏
lovd it...
The next morning
Khanak has her whole cupboard down on the floor her mom comes in
SEEMA-Khanak what is this is this a room or a junk yard !
KHANAK-Mom don't be angry , I am aldready worried mein collage ke liye kya pehnoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEEMA ' wear anything I don't know why you are so possesive
ANKITA-(comes in the room)Goodmorning '. Khanak what is this
KHANAK- nothing first help me to choose my clothes
(so ankita choosed a figure fitting jeans and a sleevless top for her with funky sandals and she made a messy plat she looked really sweet and beautiful
ANKITA- abhi change kar liya na toh chaal niche I don't want to miss your moms parathas
KHANAK- bhuki kahin ki hum baad mein bhi toh kha sakte hain late ho rahein hai
ANKITA- no I don't wnt to skip breakfast
(so anki eats and eats and they are really late for collage)
at the collage
KHANAK-(Entering the collage gate ) Dekha hum late ho gaye an hum class kaise dhondden ge
ANKI- wait I will ask.( She goes up to a boy and asks hm he says that he is also in the same class
And tells her the way Khaak only sees him from the back and hears his voice which she really loves)
(they get into the class khanak still thinking about the voice)
ANKI- see I got the way to class and also made a new friend and his name is
(alas the teacher comes in and starts her lecture anki is sleepy but khanak concentrates he just tells about the syllabus the projects and other things soon the bell rings)
KHANAK-(outside the washroom)ANKI wait for me here I will just come in a minute
ANKI- Sure
(but she sees an old friend and goes up to her and soon they bith move to the cannteen
KHANAK-anki kahan chali gayi I told her to wait to ab kahan dhoondo mein
(she walks without seeing and bumps into someone and he was carrying a whole lot of files that fall down
SHAAN-Dhayan sechala karo tumhe choot toh nahin lagi
KHANAK(memorises the voice)-no not at all and I am sorry(she and shaan collect allt the files)
Then she says my name is Khanak . khanak Grewal
SHAAN- gives a beaming smile ands ays I am shaan khandelwal nice to meet you khanak
DUCK-guys yeh kya laga rkha hai ab toh tum friends hot toh surname kuyn BTW mera nam duck's hai saam to suna hi hoga
ANKI-are tum yahan ho mene tumhe kahan nahin dhonda oh wow to tum shaan se mil gayi at last
SHAAN- yup aur tummbhi commerce class 3 mein ho na
KHANAK-YUP
SHAAN- me too I its soo good guys we have a group now
Me KHANAK , DUCKSand ANKI
So it was the start of a new friend ship today lets see where it takes them !
Guys hope you like it do reply
Love
Prerna
Nice update prerna!!! Nice scenario you have chosen...I like it that both are going to college and looking frwd to some nok jhok!
TC,Simi