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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 172 A

9:45 PM

Mangal Kunj

She steps out of the bathroom, her face scrubbed clean, walks out wiping her face, past the "An Affair to Remember" reprint on the wall. Cary Grant looks incredibly handsome, she reaches and touches his nose pauses by the picture, wonders how the movie would have been received in 1958'..

She hears a click and a whirr, her husband is taking her picture.

She goes back to staring at the poster.

Shaan: Khanak, idhar dekho!

Khanak: Nahi!

She walks back into the bathroom

He follows her, lets his camera hang from his neck and brings out a tiny device and starts recording

Khanak: You are crazy! (mutters)

She rubs lotion, finds a matching lavender speck from what to him looks like a little square piece of sheet, tries it on, then tries a darker color among a few others, finally settles for the dark lavender. Takes her kohl container and slowly applies under her eyes, he watche sit mesmerized.

"I am done!" she declares

"Itni jaldi?" he asks

"Hmm" she responds

He is blocking the way "Abhi kahan ja rahi ho?" (still recording)

"Aada se milne" she says as she pushes him out of her way, he bends down and inhales her shoulder''.

She shakes her head and tries to walk past him

Shaan: Looks like you've been busy on FB!

She looks at him startled "Aapko kaise maloom?"

He smiles wryly "Three responses in one day?" When your average is '. What is your average?" (crowds her in the bathroom)

Khanak: You are recording all this? (amused)

Shaan: You bet I am, hearing you talk should be worth big money! (chuckles)

Khanak: Not funny! Band kariye

Shaan: More importantly, are you worried? (cryptic)

Khanak: Ummm''..I was being caring! (embarrassed)

He brings his phone out, turns the camcorder off

Shaan: really?

Goes to Pradyun's status, there is a pic of him with red bruises, but he is winking for some weird reason and is doing a V with his fingers, and holding a helmet like Tom Cruise''..

Shaan: You say "OMG! What did you do to urself?" to which he says " Bruised by YOU!"

Khanak turns red, looks at the animal on his tee

Shaan: You respond by saying "You are funny when you are all beat up" he says "I am funny only around you!" She is leaning on the wall facing the mirrors, it has some pictures at a height, it's a foot above her head...

Khanak giggles upon hearing that.

Shaan: To which YOU say " Agree! Take care See you soon" and the fool says "Is distance making ur heart grow fonder?

Khanak: He is silly, he had a dirt bike accident (reaches and touchesthe cleft on his chin). I was just being nice to him

Shaan: Quit messing with me Khanak...

Khanak: I can go mess with him Shantanu

Later...

Shaan: I could swear I tasted cucumber! (in her shoulder)

Khanak: Ritu was annoying me! She threw some at me (grins into his shirt, arms wrapped around him, eyes closed).

Ritu: Will somebody feed me? (banging the bedroom door, shrieking)

Khanak frees herself from Shaan's grip runs out...Almost crashing into Ritu, "Kahaan bhaag rahi hai?"

"Tujhse milne she responds

Ritu: main to yahi hoon (confused)

Shaan appears from the passageway video camera in hand

Ritu: NOW I get it!

The two friends giggle and whisper secrets he records it all

Ritu: She is mine tonite Gujral!

Shaan: She is mine! Period! (looking at his wife)

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Posted: 14 years ago
I want to get rid of RITU !!! like right now !!!😡 😆


and shaan calld Prad "foool" @ Neha...r u listening 😆 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aha ..
Pradyun is Back !!!!
Shantanu just flares up ... LOL !!!!!
KhanaK loves to tick him off ... Beta Bachke .. He is Shantanu Gujral ... You dont wanna mess with him !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!OMG!!
I loved this one!
Prad is back...where is Neha?
I absolutely loved Prad's answers to her and most of all the wit...and Shaan has to go through it all and be a mere spectator ..he has to know of his wife's activity from the walls of others!
I loved the way Shaan suddenly calls him a "fool" in between his talks...and i LOVED the final declaration.."She is mine"...a declaration to Ritu...to Prad and to the world in general...
When we speak of development of a story this is a what I mean...
Earlier he just convinced himself with a kiss when he was insecure...never voiced it loud...then slowly he told her and dropped hints of his possessiveness...even last night he only called her and said please come to my bed...nothing to Ritu...He came late thinking she would be asleep with her best friend...but the fact that she was up and awake worried for him ...gives him a new confidence to make such a declaration in front of Ritu...the same confidence with which he told Ritu she wont go to the Mall...He knows Khanak wont turn him down...this confidence that she would chose him has grown over time..and this growth is what makes a story beautiful and Casa a classic!!
Love you and Casa!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Khanak turns red, looks at the animal on his tee

I thought she was looking at the animal in him !! the Jealous animal !!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Hey Shalini,

If I find time, then yes, definitely in the next hour. Iam writing now😊
And about pretending you are Souma, unfortunately thats impossible😃😉
Among many other reasons she believes Casa is THE best, and you think I am "among the best"😃😉

Oh !
Good to Know .. Thanks :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
*drags Ritu by the ear* Idhar aa Bhukkad...Main feed karti hu tereko...Aisa feed karungi ki zindagi bhar kuch nahi mangegi khaane ko...! LOL...
Prad...M not one bit annoyed...*hides from rest of the CASA junta* I actually found the FB exchange super cute !! Yay mera FB demand puri hua in some twisted way...thought this is not at all what I asked for...
Shaan must be friends with Prad so he saw...High time Khanak adds him re and puts that married status...Eee !
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am not annoyed with Prad either re..I love his wit and humour! its healthy flirting and I love that!
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Posted: 14 years ago
adi,
wonderful update..
the way he said she is mine!period!!awesome..
i so loved it..the way he said..ritu should feel happy hearing that..hope she'll be happy..
waiting for the next part..

adi update the title with 171 D on 37 & 172 A on 39..but ppl like us will see it even if u dont update the title..coz we r crazy enough to look the whole thread for updates..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow !!
Prad is back 😊

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