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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

Aditee s green bulb is not glowing ???


aditee is still 'red' 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 168 B

2:00 AM

Mangal Kunj

Malabar Hill

Her fingers are wet and cold, clutching on to the rail, the jasmines are in full bloom... she plucks a few and crsuhes them in frsutraion...

Goes back in shuts the door... "He just does not care!"

Tears well up in her eyes, Ritu's grief, her anger all snowball in her brain'..and become a huge boulder.

His closet door slides open and out he walks "God! I love a dutiful wife!" Grins as if it is 10 PM and nothing's wrong.

Khanak; And I love a punctual husband!

There is a huge lump in her throat, it hurts to even swallow. She stands there waiting for his next move.

His hands are in his pockets, he is waering grey shorts and what looks a navy UMASS tee.

Shaan: Khanak'..

She raises her hand to stop him from saying anymore''..

She realizes he might laugh at her concern. He might consider it juvenile, immature. Afterall he has lived in Mumbai all his life, and has driven 16 onwards'..

"I better go to bed" Khanak tells herself. She is more heart broken than she was upon listeningto Ritu's war of words with Kritik

Atleast Kritik cared enough to tell her, her husband would first move to Boston and then call her when he had time.

Shaan starts walking towards her as she starts walking towards the door. Turns around to check if she shut the balcony door. "It is" she reassures herself. The room is a mess again, "It takes him 5 minutes to gut it" "Yet I missed him"

Shaan: khanak''.

Takes bigger steps to get to her, holds her hand turns her around

Shaan: khanak''

Khanak: I'..

Shaan tries to hold her, she pushes him with a force he has never seen in her before

He takes multiple steps backwards

Shaan: Wooow!

She sprints to the door, he does and locks it, hand over the knob

Shaan: Khanak''.

With each Khanak her resolve takes a beating

She hates herself for being so deprived. Shuts her eyes in disgust

Shaan: Khanak'''. Please

Khanak: I have to go! (fiercely letting her tears roll down freely)

Shaan: OMG! What the hell happened?

Khanak: Oh! Nothing really! Nothing to concern you anyway'''

He shoves her forcefully against the door and, places both hands on the side of her head "What the hell is going on?"

Khanak: not a thing Mr Gujral!

Shaan: Cut the sarcasm will you?

Khanak: Its 2 AM. Oh ! Sorry midnite... Aap so jaayiye

Shaan lets a long deep breath smarting at the sarcasm... "I was AT WORK"😡

Khanak: Good to know...😃 (just as he would say it)

Shaan: What is your problem Khanak? I spent the whole entire day IN THE HOUSE.😡

She cringes as he raises his voice.

Khanak: Thank you! I will forver be happy for that. (bitter)😭

Pulls his hand from the door knob and twists it. He grabs it back and twists it the other way, pressing on her enegagement ring

Khanak: Aaah! Let go!😭

Shaan: Quit throwing a tantrum then! (warns)😡

Holds her wrist and pulls her hand away from the knob.

Shaan: Nachiket and I left work at 1 ish... (accusing)

Khanak: I don't want any details. Don't you dare give me some sob story about work (pushes him with both hands)😡

He is again startled by her annoyance.

Shaan: Sob story? 😡(blistering)

Khanak: I... I... (fighting her tears and failing)

He watches her stunned.

Khanak: I absolutely hate you for putting me through the last couple hours.😭(deeply disturbed)

Shaan: Wwhat?😕(confused and belligerent)

Khanak: I... I...worried for your life! (just as huge rivers of tears flowed down her eyes, her voice passionate, caring, emotional quivering)😭😭😭😭

She hides her face in her hands...cries freely...

His face loses all color, he stands there speechless and dumbfounded watches her grieve...graphically for something that happened two years ago, that could have been repeated all over again tonite...

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Posted: 14 years ago
me 1st...

lovd the update...

aww poor khanak... she was so concerned for shaan and shaan is as cool as if he came back at 10 pm...😆

d pink line was killer...

loved it...
Edited by Roshni_M - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
eee...update !!

😃 😃 *runs to read *
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Sahi Jawaab...Apko milta hai Lifetime Subscription of CASA...And Aditee jab book launch karegi toh ek autographed copy teri😆


thank u thank u...

i hav a speech ready...

i wud love to thank... *sees vandu, pooja, and all other girls cuming wid jhadoo*

😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
I m feeling sad after this update !

U really know how to make ur readers tune in to the mood of your update !

U make us blush... angry... sad !

Magic !
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Posted: 14 years ago
adi wonderful update..
her emotional outburst n him watching her dumbfounded..
poor khanak..
wish to give her a comforting squishy hug..
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Posted: 14 years ago
In our most vulnerable moments we are the most honest about our fears and hopes
He sees for himself what she has gone through
He is impulsive, a workaholic, irresponsible at times
Just as she is caring, worrisome, insecure about her family.
Every fiery encounter should hopefully draw them closer
Thats what it does in an arranged marriage
Thats the most exciting.
This is not to say he wont be late again, or will always pick up the phone when she calls, but now he knows where she is coming from
He actions will be apologetic and the make up will be passionate
Agar hum sab ek baar mein sudhar gaye,there arent enough mountains left in the world for each of us to occupy.
Itne Mahantma duniya ko overload kar denge
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Posted: 14 years ago
And that is what makes CASA real and more endearing !

And addictive !

First thing i do in the morning even before taking my toothbrush is to check for ur updates from phone !

Agar updata mili tho .. half an hour I will be lost somewhere till my mom bangs on the door !
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

In our most vulnerable moments we are the most honest about our fears and hopes

He sees for himself what she has gone through
He is impulsive, a workaholic, irresponsible at times
Just as she is caring, worrisome, insecure about her family.
Every fiery encounter should hopefully draw them closer
Thats what it does in an arranged marriage
Thats the most exciting.
This is not to say he wont be late again, or will always pick up the phone when she calls, but now he knows where she is coming from
He actions will be apologetic and the make up will be passionate
Agar hum sab ek baar mein sudhar gaye,there arent enough mountains left in the world for each of us to occupy.
Itne Mahantma duniya ko overload kar denge


Hey...
i totally agree with u...
hum sab ek baar mein nahi sudhar sakte...
thanks for da update

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