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Posted: 14 years ago
conclusion..yeh hai ke you read my update until Ad posts hers and this also gives me time to catch up on all the discussions here without interruption...jaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
Exactly what I mean !! He shudve NEVER said that !!
He ought to know better how to admonish her !!
I m surprised he doesnt realize that screaming at her will only make her do worse !!
She stiff...adamant...unreasonable and refuses to acknowledge her marriage...
Shaan has been the sensible one till now...He shudve come up with a better tactic to deal with it !!

He has been the one to extend the olive branch everytime there has been a problem...I am not saying he should be forever patient...but still...he has to get that knack of dealing with her tantrums and use it to mould her without pushing her off the edge..

As for Khanak she needs a nice spanking...!
Vandu if it was Suraj, Nirav or any Tom, Dick & Harry then maybe they would have taken a softer approach on this but here we r talking about Shaan who is equally adamant, proud, sensitive, stubborn & egoistic. So expecting him to keep a cool in a situation like this would be faulty on our part. This guy didn't take money from his own dad for his education, he is a self-made man...it will be difficult for him to keep a cool head when his wife is repaying him on the 2nd day of their marriage for the costs incurred by his family.
And I am sure Khanak wouldn't have done this if it was Suraj, Nirav or any1 else.
Other times when Shaan was mature & she was sulking it wasn't this bad a situation. I can understand how insulted a guy like him will feel. I would feel insulted forget him.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saaaz

conclusion..yeh hai ke you read my update until Ad posts hers and this also gives me time to catch up on all the discussions here without interruption...jaa

Tu ne update kiya hai kya?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

Tu ne update kiya hai kya?


mm hmm...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saaaz

conclusion..yeh hai ke you read my update until Ad posts hers and this also gives me time to catch up on all the discussions here without interruption...jaa


Kaise bhagate ho! 😆

Ja rahi hu 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Can there ever be a marriage where one is right and the other is wrong...??

Isn't a marriage where both have to face the consequences of choices each of them make..??

Isn't marriage the ultimate GREY AREA to which the two people who come together add color..sometimes by looking away from each other...??

Ad...looking forward to how you take this...

Looking forward to Gujrals' journey from hereon...finding their way back to each other...
Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Souma.N

Morning!

No update for today?



Update eagerly awaited hain ... lemme get ready till then, will refresh after that again ... ciya in a bit.

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 79B

31st May 2011

4:45 PM

He had shut the door behind him and had left. She sat there in shock! She couldn't believe the exchange that had occurred. Her heart was hammering like a window left open during a storm, her face was filled with color, her cheek bones hurt trying to control her tears, she let it flow down eventually'''.the lump in her throat was the size of a football

. "You pay for the rooms and I will pay you for " Quiet, soft whimpers, tears flowing down uncontrollably."Where did I go wrong?" she worried
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He walked downstairs, his cousins were taking a nap in the three guest bedrooms, his aunts and Mom were missing too, He sat down on the sofa and shut his eyes, threw his head back on the back rest "What the hell was that?" "Damn!" "If that's the way you like it?" The image of his iphone alert replayed in his mind. When he went on to the website he saw the transaction, first thing he did after taking care of Dad's work was rush to the rec/study to print that goddamn thing off. He still couldn't believe his eyes! She PAID him? He saw how the color rapidly left her face when he said what he did. It just paled instantly and matched her saree'.. pale yellow. Goddamnit!!! He actually said those words to her!

He rubbed his eyes and eventually rubbed his face all over, running his fingers through his hair, pulling it at the scalp causing himself some real pain. He sat there for a few minutes'''' "What the hell did I do wrong?" anger and frustration were beginning to take over again

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6:40 PM May 31st

Shaan entered the apartment, Hari Lal was giving him one toothy smile after another when he was opening the door for him today, Shaan was not in any mood to smile.

Dadi the aunts and Sanjay Uncle and Chachu were all sitting around chatting and laughing.

Madz: Here he comes''. And ALONE!

Dadi is curious "Shaan?"

Shaan: Yep Dadi! (walks over to where she is seated, sits by her)

Dadi: Where are you returning from beta?

Shaan: Dad had some network issues, the vendor we use at Ajmera for IT support was itching to do a pitch on Dad, so was off hooking them up (grins)

Madz: Does your wife know you went to your office?

His face is expressionless''' cool almost, not nervous, not shy, not sheepish, Dadi notices. She lets it pass for now

Shaan: Well''Technically, I didn't go to Ajmera! I went to Ingram Services.

Dadi: Don't play the semantics game with me beta

Shaan: it just took an hour then and an hour now

Ambika Chachi: And what did you do with your wife? Drugged her? I would be so mad!

Nandini Maasi: ahem! Ambika samjha kar! (winks)

Shaan is again not in the mood for the humor, he is not even grinning,

Madhavi: is she still upstairs

Shaan I think so! You saw me I just walked in''

Sunil walks in through the open front door "Quit interrogating my son! Let him be! Abhi bechaare ki shaadi hui hai"

Shaan: Thanks Dad! (smiles)

Sunil: Bang on! About ingram Shaan! (is very happy)

Shaan: really?

Sunil Yep! I am impressed. So will you consider making the move at this auspicious occasion?

Shaan: Wwwoow wwwooow what?

Sunil: Future Trading you know (grins)

Shaan: Absolutely not Dad!

Sunil: Akshay is running ingram's numbers with yogesh and the finance folks we'll see

Shaan: I called Rahat so we can get the scoop on what they quoted us

Sunil: well I don't have 20,000 desk tops and 1000 printers, 20% of that maybe.

Shaan: Do you employ 400 now?

Sunil: Dekho isko, he has no clue! (offended)

Dadi: Time out! Is any body even worried what the new bride is doing?

Ambika: Raayna Ujju kahan hai?

Nandini: Went off to a Ritu Beri Sale at 10, should have been home at 2

Shaan: Maasi are you serious? Who took them? (angry)

Madz: Shaan, don't get worked up''. Its not midnite (scoffs)

Shaan: thanks Ma! (sacrcastic)

Sunil: Dharam, mere saath tha, did the new guy take em?

Ambika: No he drive us, hes horrible Bhayya (to Sunil) I am not sitting in that car again if hes driving

Dadi: Bachon ki bhi chinta kar lo, agar time mile to

Shaan is on the phone.

He waves and signals people to stop talking loudly and speaks "Oh! Great! Where are you? "Get ur butt home in the next half hour"

Shaan hangs up, who did they go with Maasi?

Nandini: Pradyun lekar gaya beta! (Chill whats wrong with you tone)

I texted Akshay he said they may have taken that Avis car we rented from the airport

There is a collective Phew!

Madz: Will some one go check on Khanak? (serious)

Dadi: Is she asleep beta?

Shaan has no idea!

Shaan: She was awake when I left two hours ago.

Ambika: You've been gone for TWO? (outraged)

Shaan: First Ingram, then Dad's office then this other vendor that Pankaj swore was good (a friend)

Dadi: Jao beta, check on her (gently) Bring her down stairs Hari Lal is ready to serve chai.

She can see he is dragging his feet

She watches him walk up the stairs texting.

People get busy talking, Dadi notices him pause outside the door, he texts and pauses again, and knocks! It seems very odd to her, Ambika is showing her something she got during the day so she is distracted.

He knocks again

She opens the door. The both stand there and look at each other

One outside the other inside. The door in between

She walks inside and he does too shutting the door

She goes back and lays on the couch, curls up on her side.

He goes to the bathroom, showers, changes into blue jeans and a coffee colored Polo tee, shaves'''.

Steps out, she is laying there with her eyes closed.

He clears his throat

Shaan: They are waiting downstairs

She opens her eyes startled, she has no idea he is standing by the couch, looking down at her, she sits up, her hair is all over her face.

Shaan: For us''

Khanak just looks at him for some emotion, there is none in his eyes. Hers are badly bruised.

Both behave like they've met each other for the first time today.

He stands in front of her, hands tucked in his pocket

Her mangal sootra pendant has slid back again, the length of the chain on her back, he watches her pull it forward, and slide down the pendant.

She waits for him to move, step back so she can stand, he takes a step back and she stands up, pulls the saree's edge down over her waist'.. instinctively like most women wearing sarees always do''

Khanak: In a few'.. (imapssive)

He walks over to the balcony door, pulls the curtains aside, opens the door, the steamy evening air hits the room, mingles with the aurconditioned and spreads fast'' she walks over to the bathroom and freshens up, wonders where her suitcases are'..

Runs a brush thru her hair, and leaves it untied

He is standing in the balcony on the phone now, facing the sea.

She stands by the reading nook, he hears her chooda click turns around, finds her standing there, counting her two dozen on the right hand for the 17th time.

Shaan: Yep! Green homes is the way to go'. Not sure if it will work tho, around here.

He is unmindful of her standing there

She is unmoved

Shaan: Oh! Ya, they are present to Rahat next week. I was on it'' yep

She counts the ones on her left'''

Shaan: Yep''. Not sure'' 18'. 20 may be.

Shaan: Catch you then'.. alright!

He hangs up looking at her, shuts it, walks inside, shuts the door'''''

They walk out'. And step down side by side'''.. the vent under the staircase is blowing her pallu on to him, she grabs it with one hand, he pushes the remainder towards her. She almost trips on the frontal folds, is reminded of his "You have to be careful on these" from 8 hours ago'''.she picks up a bunch of the slippery soft chiffon, he barely touches her just protecting her from a fall if ever it comes'. She manages to control her step''..

Raayna and Ujju have returned, Akhil is up, Akash is asleep, there are collective "Ooohs and aahs" when they step down togetehr like that

Dadi is watching them carefully

The astute woman that she is knows there is trouble in paradise!

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
saaaz thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Can there ever be a marriage where one is right and the other is wrong...??

Isn't a marriage where both have to face the consequences of choices each of them make..??

Isn't marriage the ultimate GREY AREA to which the two people who come together add color..sometimes by looking away from each other...??

Ad...looking forward to how you take this...

Looking forward to Gujrals' journey from hereon...finding their way back to each other...

*edited*

okay this is wierd..some stuff got double posted and some stuff I lost...

This is going real goood...am loving it...

I am a sucker for such angst...
Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Trouble In Paradise ... Hmmm
Knowing the strong egotistical nature of the two .. I dint expect this Update to have either of them taking the First Step ... and So was It !
Interesting ... Very Interesting ... Waiting for what happens Next !
BTW.. Is it Daadi to the rescue ??
PS: Check your dabba Aditeee !!
Edited by rbo_d_best - 14 years ago

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