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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
mani...luvving it yaar..pls cont. soon..eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
hey!!

Ur FF seems so unique and well-written
:)

Please add me in the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Beautiful...
Good girl.. sweety.. and thank you for listening to our pleas... shall read and savour slowwwllly and reply... *rubbing my hands and getting ready to enjoy* 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Read part two last night...Love this new story for ShaNak👏⭐️...I imagine Shaan's mindset being similiar, to the post-engagement gym scene in RBO ...Can't wait forthe next part😊...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
gals!...Mission Accomplished!..this is now an FF!
i love Shaan...i mean...he is soo amazin!..poor guy waitd for her 3 hrs! ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
hey manita read both d updated nw & dey ver very gud bt pls dnt forget to update trespassers prohibited ven u update dis
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
hei mani darling,
just yesterday i commented for TresPro n P&P..so today i'm taking my time in leaving comments for this..hereafter dont coordinate with jess while updating samjhi..i said this to jess too..coz i love reading all the FFs in this forum n u all make us get involved in the update..so one at a time haan..so i wont be lazy to comment else see it got accumulated..ok now coming to the part..
first of all thanks for continuing the OS to FF as requested..i'm lazy to leave comments for 1st part again so comments for 2nd part..
loved the way khanak said "but i want to.." i could imagine shaan's state of mind..but poor shaan has such an reputation that makes her resist herself..i really wonder how'll they manage to meet after this shoot..wat will happen once they return..after all u r the writer u wud have definitely framed it in ur mind..so eager to know how the story unfolds..
really y did vikram came at that time at her door?cant he ask her the next morning?as shaan asked her i too start to feel does vikram loves khanak?may be there is a chance for that..
the reasoning shaan gave abt falling in love so early..it was so true..no one can resist that feeling for long..somehow i love this shaan..the way he questions abt her feelings n making her tensed..
shaan observing khanak n vikram..he is so keen to know whether vikram loves her or not..i really dont want vikram to love her mani..r u planning to give a love triangle,square something here..
poor shaan..khanak made him wait in the hilltop for 3 hrs..i feel so bad for him..ok now wat wud be her next move..i have a strong feeling that shaan would corner her know y she didnt come there?shelly..will she do something good to bring shaan-khanak together r will she be trouble?ok let me wait for ur next update..continue soon mani..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Loved it maani !!!!
Pls continue !!!!
ps .sorry for the short comment !!! I m just having too many things running in my mind but doesn mean i loved ur ff any less
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Mani... 😍😍
I read it thrice already and my state is still something like the two smilies above... One for Khanak and the other for Shaan... ooohhh... la la...
The magic of yet another ShaNak pair woven so beautifully by your very own Mani touch...
Loved Khanak, for her slap first of all. Befitting attitude she has. Yes, she is a normal and sane girl, with her head on her shoulders. Did not expect anything less.. like that aam duniya ki aam ladki. But that alone is a charm in itself... Aam ladki ki khaasiyat, that attracts any human being towards her like a swarm of bees...
her very confrontation with Shantanu is defensive, yes, she has a strong character, but alas her heart is not under the influence of her brains!! Sanity does go flying out of the window as soon as she sets her eyes on him... Sigh... the war so evident in her eyes.. Beautiful... as I wait to see her touching beauty with brains unfold... out into the open...
Shantanu... SK.. what shall I say about him.. As yet another SK who holds my intrigue. Yes he is a classic play boy, a man of the world, changing girl friends like he would his clothes... but this sweet little shy butterfly has caught his interest... has awakened his intrigue. He claims that he loves her. Tis true, but he himself probably does not know or realise the depth of the emotions that he feels.. Yet his past record does not help at all to make his case strong... Sigh I am going to have a tough time keeping my heart strong and not let it go out to feel for him.. He deserved that treatment metted out by Khanak to him.. but awww... his jealousy is the sure sign of love having engulfed his very senses... his reasoning.. his very peace of mind...
ShaNak... just lovely and beautiful ShaNak relationship unfurling and blossoming.. blooming slowly and steadily.. Yes love is very beautiful...
Now.. that I have spoken my heart once again... 😳😳👏👏⭐️⭐️
Get cracking now for the next part samjhi...😛😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Beautiful start... Loved it ...
I am already a big fan of TresPro and your writing... I am so glad that you have started a new FF...
Just loved the storyline and the magic that Shanak bring into the story...

Pls continue soon... can't wait for the next update ..
poor Shaan waitied for 3 hrs 😭

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