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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Hey ...

Dont mind ... ur FF was fantastic and I was thinking what should I comment and I read Vats comment ...She actually said "Murgi" ????

but I guess thats what it was, he found her and trapped her unknowingly, she responded!

Wow, aage kya hoga iss Shanak ka ... ab hum tho tere bharose hai ... tera dimag kahan le jayega inko ...

trespro ka update de re jaldi ... I am caught up which Shanak I like more ... I think the Trespro ... somehow, no reason known as yet ... will dwell on this further and tell u...

~Cheers,
Dish


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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
haha Dish!!

I was saying "murgi" for manita di🤣🤣
I have been pestering her to update and she sneaks out w/o doing so...so today when she did..lol...I went like murgi pakad mein aa gayi🤣🤣

And I have marked my comments as under "edited"
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
so sweet of him to withdraw...frm the kiss...he did realize tht she kissed him bk...bcoz she was soo lost in him...WOW...amazing choice of words..:)))))

u rock...!!!!
thnks for the update ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Lovely part...
Very well written...
Showed Khanak's turmoil really well !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
oh mani..luv u 4 this..waiting 4 this...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
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mani di you are a great writer
simply amazing🤗👏⭐️
Edited by purvi08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Very romantic...lekin ab khanak kya kregi?kya vo accept kregi k realmai shaan ko pyaar krne lgi hai...m w8ng ur next part...plz updte soon with ur anothr part t.prohibtd...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
wowww mani was just carried away by this ,felt the pain with khanak wooo it hurted me the same as it hurt her got me into tear dear .loved loved loved it so real every thing was happening in front of my eyes.thank u so much mani for this update was eagerly waiting for this since the last one.now i cant wait for the next one plzzz update it sooon or else i will die with anxitey .hope to read it soon .hugs mani brillant once again
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Okay I seriously Dont Remember Commenting ... Though I have read yesterday's update 10 times ... I lost the count after that ... LMAOOO .
WoW .. Manitaaa ... You are G for Genius !!!!!!!!
How Do you Do It Every Time Woman ... I am your Pankha / AC for Lifeee ... !!!!!!!
Loved their Convo ... Khanak Opening Up ... Shaan's Justified Anger ... Haaayee .. KILL MEE !!!
WoW ... The Kiss ... Sigh ... Blesss ... I am dead !!!
When is the Next Update for this Coming ... !!!1
BTW... Trespassers Prohibited ka Update KIDHAR hai ??????
You had promised REMEMBER ????
Edited by rbo_d_best - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

hei mani,
ok..i'm here to post my comments..

so no one in the table noticed that khanak is upset..let it be..so she did saw SK moving out with shelly?poor khanak she couldn't eat after hearing those comments from shikha..n seeing his room locked she came to a conclusion that he is with shelly..
khanak questioning herself abt her inner turmoil..poor girl experiencing such things for the 1st time na..n that was so cute of shaan when he followed her n made his point very clear for her taking away all her doubts..
khanak starting to open up to him was so cute..n he is very interested in knowing her n started studying her.."K for SK" that was cho chweet..so will SK pursue K here?..
she cleared that vikram sir n she just work together..hope SK doesnt get too much into that hereafter..but he doubts that vikram has something for her na?n she talking abt him n shelly..
poor shaan asked her why did u not come..n recalling the moments they spend in her room..i felt very emotional when he said those to her..(wished to give him a consoling hug🤗)
shaan expressing his change in him intensely..both of them saying the other to go out of their life n saying i hate you n ending up kissing each other passionately..*sigh*
khanak losing control of herself n shaan retracting himself n she is shocked at herself..
so wat will happen now?how long will they be here for the photoshoot?
continue soon mani..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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