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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

OMGGG ..

This is amazing ... Three Hours ... Reallly ...

OMGG >.. I love him ... I love him for waiting for so looong ...

GOD ...Jaldi se donoko milaado ...
oopps sorry i mean ..

Manitaa...Jaldi se dono ko milaado !!!

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

You write so well dude!! My heartbeats went upar neeche at such right places...

I dunno what to say abt SK of this FF for now...but I identify myself with Khanak :D

Shelly ka entry toh typical tha😆

I like the characterisation, easy and simple or maybe...not? 😳

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bellyjerefisher

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

mani pls pls pls pls pls pls pls splsss continue this im in love wid this more than anything trust me i love this shaan n khanak its like a challenge seeing them...lol pls continue im drooling over d frst 2 parts:)

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

great update Manita Di! Loving it!

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christmas

@christmas

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

sigh. just. sigh.

so glad! you decided to turn this into FF.

love how he went from being irked at SK to just accepting being SK.

its too early, but still i am starting to love these two. theres this rawness in them thats soo endearing. i still say for a bad boy he comes across as too adorable.

looking forward to more!! plzz update soon:)

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

oh mani diii i love uuu

u turned it in to ff i so wantd this oh gos i m in love with this story shish di sk is such playboy but he loves her hes cute he eh she hurts him poor baby and he waitde for her lol sk is jealous of them he ehe imloving thi story its just thodi janinpehchani lol😉he he jaldi update karan sighhh😍

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Maani,

ye kya tha!!!!

A girl like her falling for a guy like him ... surprise, surprise!

But with Shelly coming in, she will run away from him like anything na ... but I guess he will still pursue her...

so many questions coming to my mind ... now I will ask you for another update soon ... u know me na ... but Trespro ka pehle dena ..

~Cheers,
Dish

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

omg mani you using my siggi in your awesome ff..i am feel proudy me nihaal ho gaye..meri mehanat sufful hui..awesome ff i am out of station now without lapy will be do brief comments after return...loveee you a lot:D

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

mani di you are great 🤗👏⭐️😍👍🏼❤️😊

please please continue

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Mani di 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

wow awesome update loved it...

loved the description that shan was shocked when she accepted that she wanted to fall in love with him...&

amazing description what they felt at that moment ...& their emotions ...lovely flow

& the knock on the door that startled them...i was like why someone had to disturb them now they should talk...more...

& shantanu's question to khanak that does Vikram loves her...that was shock for me but on spot question...loved it the way u describe it...😲

when she told him to leave her room & he didn't move & hold her arms & she said we are not in love...& he said we are she wanted to discourage him...awesome description...😃

i love khanak calling shantanu SK...😉

their convo wonderful...& she not accepting it...i want her & sk to be together please make them ...

& the way he called her beautiful & she stressed that her name is khanak wonderful description...👏

at shoot he never left observing her & vikram amazing description...⭐️

she too observed his attire...wonderful description...

shelly entered there life...😡 why...?

he waited for her 3 hours...awesome description...

may be now khanak will feel J...& what will be up in ur next update...?will be waiting for it...

so update soon...

Edited by angel_9 - 14 years ago