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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

WOW!! The journy is speechless of shanak...mai khudko khanak ki jgha dekh rhi thi... 😳
manidi u r great👍🏼

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khwaish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Gosh, u always end up in exciting point making us hook to it till u update next part

lovely update
i m loving this ff too

next part update soon of both ur ff
🤗 🤗

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shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

hey manita i loved d update it ws simple awesome pls continue soon

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Just.Shanak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Omg !! i had exams and I missed so much !!
I read this every part but couldn't comment
will comment on each part separately now !!

Part 6 was muahhh !!!!
love you

PS - coming back with detailed comments

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dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

wow ... true gentleman he is to offer her ride to bus stn and then to Mumbai as well.

gussa aa jata hain kabhi kabhi ... ismein itna rone wali kya baat thi ... but shayad main hoti tho bhi aise ro deti ... maybe not ... LOLz

So, he picked her and dumped her in the jeep just like Shaan did to Khanak in the episode when she leaves the house 2nd time just before his and Natasha's wedding... he was also in a jeep na ... sahi !!!!

I know how handsome he looked in that white shirt ... and slight stub ... too good hain ji ... perfect scene matching ...

waiting for the update ... Trespro kab update kar rahi hain ... waiting for that too ...

~Cheers,
Dish

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May

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Fabulous update Manita 👏⭐️and I have read the recent ' Tresspassers' update too😳...

This latest installment is so ShaNak...And the OCD reference is sooo...

The RBO forum members😆...Can't wait for the next part!...

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Jessica

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Haila... abhi pehle SK cloud se neeche bhi nahi aa saki and another update... Sigh... here I float back again...

am MIA for a bit as not well mani.. shall do justice some time this week...

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Aussiegal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Manita, another excellent update. Enjoyed it immensely. Awaiting your next update...

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Erika95

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

u were just fantastic...i read ur updates n i think that r all great...keep the great job up...= )

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IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

hey manita it was fab... it was actually SHANAKLICIOUS update 👏

our shanak creates magic and ur writing makes it more luvly

offering her ride...on human grounds😲
observing her on stairs, arranging things😉
want to feel the pain... ur writing actually makes me feel the pain😳
and the most cutest moment he swooped her in his arms... perfect shaan style... oops i mean SK☺️

em luvin it... continue soon and thx for a luvly actually passionate update.🤗

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