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preiti

@preiti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Whoa!! that was amazing Manita. I seriously couldn't stop myself from imagining😍 everything i read and blush ☺️over the most awesome scenes . 😛You are truly a wonderful writer .I have been like eagerly waiting for every part of the story of yours.And everytime your narration make me drool over.Great work!! Keeep writing!!👏

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christmas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

oh i hope she breaks her resolve and confesses even if it is rambling or anger that it spits out...but hope it does before they reach home...

waise she was going to temple right? uska kya hua?

i love! this shaan. she can deny it as much as she wants. but she too knows that all that she assumes and holds against him is not true!

the man doesnt want ointment to feel her pain! aur kya chaiye uskoo

loved it!

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Ujjwala

@Ujjwala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Awesome .. Just loved it !!! 👏
I love ur way of story telling... 😃
Pls continue soon...

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khushi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

😊😊Haaye Mani Di... Love ur update yaar 😊😊

WOW simply awesome... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

aapke update padte padte main hamesha sapno ki duniya me chali jaati hu... feel lyk jaise yeh sab mere samne ho raha hai...

Love u yaar... mmmuuuaaahhh

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Krithika

@k.krithika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

Hi Manita 😊
Awesome parts 5 and 6 loved it ❤️
Sorry could not post earlier i read it office during breaks so could not post
I am loving everything about this FF ❤️
U are great writer hats of to u 👏
Thanks for writing to us awesome parts as always enjoying a lot 😃
Keep writing 😊

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Manita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Thanks to everyone who read, responded, 'liked' and commented on part 6 !!!

it is pleasure to read comments and motivating for a writer too !!

love to all !!

Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago