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dishbhan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh-ho !

Desperation to the hilt ... I knew this will be the problem in Delhi ...

tu unko wapas la MUmbai yaar ... ya phir Shadi kara de, woh tho difficult hain

Loved their convo thru the eyes, Shaan telling her not to go ... and then kitchen scene was fantastic! Love this Shaan!

Waiting for the next update. .. please update soon.

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
This Chota Installment is SO SO SO SO Goood !!!!!!
They are so Cute and Naughty and in Love !!!!
I want a bro like Jai ... really !!! Bless Him !!!!
Eye-locks and eye-gestures ... - THE BEST !!!!
loved the Kitchen Romance ... Haaayee ... 38 days of being apart !!!
Awww . I am worried tooo noww ... How are they gonna meet Up !!!
Send them back to Mumbai yaaar ... !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely and cute update mani di!!!!
I was similing reading the whole update...
Loved the kitchen scene... its sooo lovely...
Feel bad for my lovely shanak...hope there stay in delhi does not distance them...
Thanks for lovely update...
love
Gunjan
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Mani di,

Awsome update...👏

Beautifully written...👍🏼

First of all So sorry to irritate you till no end for the update. And also I am apologizing in advance coz I am going to continue this in future so that you give us a feb updates in future also. I hope u want mind.😃

I just loved the update. Loved the way Shaan & Khanak were stealing glances at each other. Their eye-locks , eye-gestures were magical. I felt really bad for the lovely couple. They are meeting after 38 days but they not able to spand time with each other. Shaan insist khanak to sit in frount of him & jay wants her to leave Awww... My poor girl.

I just loved the way u describe the atmosphere of leaving room guys watching there soccer match & Khanak watching romantic movie on her lappy. Khanak's bubblegum chewing & the popping sound of bubblegum came spot on time. What a timing deeds.... U are just too good. 👏 even I laughed a lot while reading it. 😆 😆 Jay calling her by her real name instad of " Mithoo" infrount of Rishabh & Shaan is so real coz even I hate it when my bhaiya call me by my nick name in frount of relatives or friends. 😡

Your discribtion regarding Jay's irritation by Khanak's innocent activities like watching movie & bubblegum chewing is very realistic. Poor girl doesn't understand she should leave or not but she is too smart she sit back with her head phones. I found this situation real coz it's actually a ghar ghar ki kahani coz I always face this 😭😭 coz When my bhaiya watches his fav Football or cricket match on TV he never allows me to talk or even roam in the leaving room & even if the doorbell rings he gives me an angry look & says pakka koi tere liye hi aaya hoga. & when finally match gets over tab jake unko yaad aata hai ki I stay in hostail & he must ask me about how am I doing with my studies? & how's my health? Do I need anything? But kuch bhi ho he loves me very much???My Bhaiya Is The Best.😃

Sorry for my faltu ki bakwas coming back to our lovely Shaan & Khanak. Loved the way Shaan help jay when plumber comes for the difficulty in the motor used in the overhead tank. Shann immidiately agrres to go with him. He is such a sweetheart. Btw I must say Shaan is taking real good care of his Future In laws.😃 & the best part was the way the both maintain their Degnity & decency infrount of Jay & Rishabh is actually commandable.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Their kitchen rommance was outstanding. Their hugs & the Kiss was to die for. I must say Shaan is helping Khanak really well. The way he made an excuse of cutting salad & fruits just to spand some with Khanak is so cute. 😍 & on the other side Jay & Rishabh & their boring talks regarding Real estate, Share market, gadgets, and sports. ( Oh ... I hate it.😡 😡 ) but zindagi mein pehli baar I loved it coz they both were so busy in their discussion so that our Shanak gets lovely quality time with each other.

Khanak is warried how they are going to meet in Delhi? & so am I. Awww???.Khanak cried. 😭 Plz di don't make her cry & do something. Otherwise send them back to Mumbai. Ya phir I have an idea plz Sameer ko jaldi le aao. I am sure he'll do some Jugaad for his Friends & our lovely Shanak.😃

Thank u...Thank u... Thank u... Thank u...Thank u...for giving us an update yesterday. But plz don't make us wait & yes egarly waiting for the real Lambawala updae. 😃

Waiting for the next Update Already ...😍

Lots of Hugs to you 🤗 🤗

👍🏼 "U ROCK" 👍🏼

Love u

Pranjal.😊

Edited by -pranjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍😍 Sigh.. I am in this state whenever I read your update now😳😳😳😳
Judaai ka ehsaas yeh,
Maar daale na humko...
Sanam hum sochte hain ab,
Milan to hoga, lekin kab?
Sigh Mani, tough is their test.. times that test not only love, but also patience... Jai had some reason probably for asking them to keep it quiet... I do hope all is solved soon, as this judaai is more killing than the judaai that they faced when he had been away on a trip...
Itne paas.. paas, dhadkan se bhi paas...
par kitne hain yeh dooriyaan...
Am sure my SK has something up his sleeve... awww I love him for that sweet cuddle.. and I am sure she is already feeling assured... just by his very breath that fans her cheek.. sigh.. sweet love...
Mani.. am enthralled...
Okay sorry for so many looong words and lines.. I know manaai hain, but well you know you can't and won't thrash me!!!😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally mani u update its was amazing dear .love it to bits .the way in which the guys were following th soccer match and khanak sitting at the dinning table .both of then stealing glances with eachother in the mean time
jay being annoyed buy hearing the sound of the bubble . j asking her to leav and her dilemma of whether to leave or not so that both the men do not get offended .
boys teasing her for watching dil to pagal hai .hehe all boys are the same.shaan being so nice to help her out in the kitchen .and theway he hugs her from behind 😍😍😍 bliss shaan moving in and out of the room .when he comes and hugs her the second time he tell why wasteing time rather than kiss😆 shaan going out and tell the guys that he is going to make salad for them and coming in seeing her leaning on the slab waiting slipping her arms around his hayeee😍😍 shanak kissinggg😍😍😍😍lovely dear so beautifullly done .khanak coming out telling her self that she is not going to do such act again ever .
when shaan comes in he sees her lifts her chin and aks her wether she is ok or not the way she hugs him and aks whether thier life in delhi is going to be like this .felt so bad .
hoping that every thing falls in place for this two cant see both like this.hoping that the road block ahead before them will be overcomed with jy both holding hands and walking ahead peacfully .all the very luck to them god bless them .mani wht shouldi say each time i fall short of words to explain how it feels when i read ur update dear god bless u keep writing in the same way love
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. very different Shanak's in ur FFs... 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

hei mani,

felt really happy seeing the TresPro update.. shaan-khanak are so cute..he left immediately afteriving a peck on her forehead..thanks to jai n rishabh..khanak leaving to kitchen to take care of things.. poor khanak..she brought shaan home to spend some time with him but he reminded the guys abt the match n giving her a tough time..she is left all alone n started watching romantic movie.. first she distracted them with the burst of the gum..only shaan enjoyed seeing her doing these..jai n rishabh r distracted..n jai asked her go to her room to watch the movie..she is all alone in a house where there r 3 others sitting there..shaan is ready to give her company but he wont.. jai wanted her to retreat to her room n shaan wanted her to stay back..poor khanak..finally ear plugs came to her mind n she used it satifying both of them.. jai found her behaviour amusing after thinking abt wat she said earlier..shaan is back just today n they haven't seen each other for more than a month..he even thought abt their childhood n teenage.. shaan left to help checking with the motor..i thought khanak would also accompany him..on his return jai's comment abt "oh boy..u'll never change.."dont know y i felt happy..jai n shaan r so adorable friends..n jai asked khanak to help him when he went to wash his hands..n shaan is too smart he left hurriedly..n khanak had napkin for him..both r so tuned to the other..not only jai we r also quite impressed with their decency even though both r so desperate..
poor khanak..no one let her in peace to watch a romantic movie..she let them watch the match na y do jai tease her llike this..poor girl..gave up n went to set the lunch..shaan's gentlemanly bahan to help khanak..oh god..this kithchen romance is so cute..
shaan holding her from behind..n asking for a kiss n khanak giving his own reason..shaan was so cute when he made up reason saying he is going to cut for salad and when he said this khanak i laughed out.."He has approved the relationship………he knows that we are dating……..if you say, I'll go and ask him whether we can kiss or not……" but knowing our shaan he'll do that..finally khanak let out her tears saying how r they going to meet here in delhi n shaan is going to look a way for that..yay!!!!waiting for ur next update to c wat u have in store for us regarding their meeting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome and Supperb Update Mani🤗
cant wait for next update..pl update soon !!!!!
dishbhan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maani,

oye !

agla part kahan hain ... u said you will update soon.

Waiting!

pls jaldi

~Cheers,
Dish

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